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Serena POV

I looked through open eyes at Ashlyn, my twin sister. She had her brown hair in a messy bun, strands hanging loose everywhere. Her blue eyes glistened as she focused on making the shimmery blue force field that often accompanied her.

"20 minutes! A new record!" She shouted.

"Yes!" I screamed back

I sat down in the fold out chair that was splayed out in out basement. Ash and I always practice down here. I guess I should explain. My full name is Serena Hadley Ellis and Ashlyn Isla Ellis is my twin sister. We go almost everywhere together.

Ashlyn and I are similar but different. We both have similar pretty (Fine! Beautiful) faces, and clear blue eyes. As you can see, I am very modest, and Ashlyn isn't. She has brown (straight) hair, I have blonde (wavy but not frizzy!). Oh yeah! Did I mention we're superheroes trying to save the world!?

Last year, we discovered our abilities. I don't even know how it happened, but all of a sudden Ash was making force fields and I was throwing lightning bolts. Not to mention we sprouted WINGS! Both of ours are snow white. This sounds really cheesy but we decided to use our powers for good and help the world, which is why we're sitting in the basement practicing.

Max POV

"Yes I know it's late and YES I know you guys are tired! I promise, if you keep flying for five minutes we'll land and find a place to sleep."

The flock breathed a sigh of relief. I guess I should catch you up. I saved the world almost a month ago, and the flock and I have been flitting around ever since. Fang and I… well were not going out, but we definitely like each other!

"Max, there's a hotel down there." Angel pointed and then yawned.

"Alright! Let's go!"

Ashlyn POV

"Suh-rena! The police just called! There's a robbery going on at the Plaza!"

"How on earth! Isn't that place heavily guarded!?"

"I guess not, let's go!"

Serena and I ran out of the house, spread our snow white wings and shot into the sky.

"I seriously can't believe this! Rich people live in the Plaza! Famous people stay there! Wouldn't you think that they could afford decent security!" Serena grumbled.

"Oh please! As if you don't like using your powers!" I snarked.

Serena shot me a look, and then smiled, causing a spark of electricity to shoot down a lock of stray hair in front of her eyes.

We made it to the Plaza in less then 2 minutes, and landed in an alley only to come face with 6 people, who had wings!

Fang POV

Of course Angel chose possibly the most luxurious and EXPENSIVE hotel in NYC, the Plaza. She said she would get us in, as if we didn't already know why! But, like we told her, mind control was off-limits! Max decided we would use her Bank Card… I hope it works!

We had landed in an alley, to hide our wings, no duh! We were about to walk into the hotel when we heard a flurry of wings from above us. Wait! Hadn't everyone landed? The wing beats grew louder and two people landed. They were really pretty, one had blonde hair, the other brown. Both had snow white wings and BRIGHT blue eyes.

"What the hell!" One of them whispered.