i wrote this off the top of my head. i would really aprecieat any edvice coments and if you can please tell me what you thought.
pigies fly over the rainbow,
RBW
The Prophecy
There will be two girls. One Darkone Power. Who will be Magyk's only hope to survive. They will be more powerful then any other Magyk in the world. They're eyes will be different then anybody's. the Power girl will have gold eyes. The Dark girl will have black. At first they will only be excellent at they're Magyk but at the 13th year of life they will receive their full amount of Magyk and receive a companion of their choice. They will be in a chase for their lives every day of their life's.
CH 1
The dying witch grabbed her quill shakily. Her deep blue, sapphire eyes glinted in the candle light. The white cloak that covered her cold body kept the only heat she had inside. She had deep black witch hair and a perfect figure. Her skin color was a deep tan for she had always loved to help Mother Nature in any way possible.
A faint cry came from the nursery. The witch walked unsteadily to it. She held her darling newborn baby. She stared into the gold eyes and black hair of her little Raven. The witch gave her baby a silent kiss on the cheek, then gave her a bottle and wrote a note to the only person she would ever give her baby to. It read,
Dear Gianni,
My dear Gianni I give you your only other sister. Keep her safe until her destiny arrives. Her destiny will arrive on the 13th year of her life. tell her everything then. But for now just tell her that you are her sister and I'm on a huge mission across the world. I give you and her all my riches. Her name is Raven. Remember how to teach her the magyk of the world. She is destined to be a lot. She is the only hope for us witches. She is the one from the Prophecy.
Your dear old mother,
Leaguini Endersonadem
P.S I love you all more than the universe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She folded it in a envelope and sealed it with wax. The seal she used was what all witches used; a growing plant and some sparks. She took one more look and fed Raven one more bottle. She left the note in Raven's crib. Leaguini knew Gianni would be here tomorrow to see her new sister.
Gianni was Leaguini's only other daughter. For a witch may only have two. Gianni had brown scotch hair and a light skin for she worked indoors healing the sick and wounded. Gianni had a different eye color, hers was opal. The color sign of healing. So when her 13th year came, she went into the forest and became a full time healer with her apprentice, Hurl.
Leaguini sat down on her cushion chair and closed her eyelids. Then with her last bit of strength she let all her Magyk flow. This of course is what all witches do at their death bed. She gave some magic to her daughters and the rest to Mother Nature. And then she said goodbye to the world she knew and loved.
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Gianni looked out from her tree house. It was as dark as the darkest black in the world of Earth. Gianni looked the direction of her mothers cottage. It was quite a ways north. The wind blew deeply in the night. Then she felt a tinge of Magyk enter her body. No, it couldn't be…. Then she did something that was against all of the rules, she used her Magyk to transport herself. All the way to The North.
The cottage was dark as the night itself. She almost bumped into the house of wood. She soon found the door and looked inside. She could see nothing. Irritably she clicked her fingers. The lights flicked on. What she saw horrified her. Her mother was dead on her favorite chair. After a while crying over that she headed to the nursery.
She looked for her newborn brother. She snapped her fingers once again and the lights flicked on. She looked dispassionately at the crib. But she did not see a baby brother. She saw a baby sister! She stared open minded at the baby, who gurgled at the sight of her sister. Finally Gianni saw the note sealed with Magyk wax. She opened it and read it twice before she could believe it.
Her own sister only a few hours born was the one of the prophecy? She looked deep into Ravens golden eyes. The baby Raven held up its hands, she wanted to be held. Gianni stuffed the note in her bright seaweed color tunic. She held little Raven in her arms. Raven was beautiful. But Gianni knew that other witches would ask, is that your daughter? She would have to lie and say yes. But on the 13th year of Raven's life they would leave so that she could tell her in private.
Gianni took a deep breath and continued on her way back to tree house. If anyone found out who Raven was, she'd have a lot of enemies like Leaguini. But Gianni knew how to keep a secret. Though there was a problem: she didn't teach mom's type of Magyk. She taught how to heal not teach power Magyk. She bowed her head, she could not believe her beloved mother was dead.
But that was the way of Magyk. Come and go; power, and helpless; life and death; good and evil. So she went on, walking as fast as she could in the shadows. She had to move quickly in case of pursuit. After a long 30 miles she stopped below her tree house. She looked back to find the cottage burning! She hesitantly clicked her fingers and was in the tree house nursery, placing Raven in the tiny tree branch crib. Then Gianni went to get the Magyk Book Leaguini gave her on her 13th year.
She flipped threw it. There she found what she needed. She muttered under her breath;
Harm is near,
And now we tear,
Protect us now,
I don't care how,
Shiny bugs,
Monster jugs,
As we fuss,
Harm mustn't reach us!
Gianni was out of breath. She had never even used her Magyk Book and it was hard work for a healer. But the Magyk mother had given her was the power for the Simple Spells. This was the book she would use for Raven's training. She knew the book would help a lot. Because Gianni knew not too much about the Power Magyk. She was only good at Healing Magyk. But Raven was a Power Witch like her mother. So Gianni finally fell asleep leaving a magyk refilling bottle for the baby. And a dozen Enchanted clean dippers to their restless night.
The next day was even more horrible. All the dippers had gone empty and Raven had been going potty in the same dipper for quite some time now. The Enchanted Bottle Spell was beginning to go rotten.So she headed out to the market. She bought as much as possible. After doing the spells again she went to work as a potion healer. A old town lady was quite sick and needed an Antidote to spider venom.
She entered a hollow part of the tree. It was lit by a dozen lanterns and five candles. It provided enough light to read the words on the scrawny paper. She looked for the bookmark in the leather bound book. Her tutor had given it to her when she passed the final test. She found were she was in the potion book. She read the ingredients again.
Frogs Legs3
Hares Hair 2
Dragon Dung1
Dolphin Teeth7
Human Blood5 drop
Spider Legs8
But the only problem was that she didn't have any dragon dung. There were few who knew where the dragons hid. Very rare when anything found or owned a dragon. The only person who saw a dragon and lived was the one and only - her mother. Tears collected in her eyes. She missed her mother dearly. She wished she had Preserved her mother's house.
She sighed, then thought, what if mother already Preserved. She rushed and left her hollow area. She stopped beside Raven. Gianni agreed Raven was destined for great things. She kissed Raven goodbye andleft her beloved tree house. She clicked her fingers once again. She was surprised at what she saw.
The outer part was scorched and you could see everything inside. She noticed the chair where her mother was, was burned to ash. A tear escaped Gianni's eyes. Her opal eyes had never in her life gave the water tear. Then on the flour she saw a Preserved Cup. Inside was a droplet of water. But inside the drop was a center of magyk. Gianni was taken aback.
Her mother was the first in centuries to give a Magyk Tear. Gianni grabbed the cup. It was a golden goblet with sapphires. She took the cup. She knew exactly what to do. She took the glass and put in her purse. And because it was Preserved the drop would not spill. She looked around and found what she was looking for. On a shelf in the middle of the room were tons of magyk books.
She Minified the books and then as well put it in her purse. Then she looked around for what really mattered. She searched high and low, but did not find what she was looking for. Then when she was gonna give in the towel she found what was necessary. A trap door below a mound of ash. She entered the dark room. She felt around for a switch. None. So she said, " Light!" The lights obediently went full blast. She looked around got what she thought useful and left the ash cabin. She then clicked her fingers, smiling she darted of.
When at last at the tree house again she looked back, she was impressed. The tallest tree in the whole Wood stood were mum's cottage was. She walked back into her cottage. Raven was still sleeping. And with that Gianni began to make her spell.
thank you for reading i hope you read the rest.