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Rachel Berry looked out to the crowd filing into the small run-down restaurant. All were dressed head to toe, in mostly what looked like faux-leather. All with multiple-tattoo's, and lots of black attire. There was one man that stood out in the crowd. He had messy i-just-got-out-of-bed hair, and wore jeans and a plain white t-shirt. He was tall, very tall, at least a head taller than Rachel. She watched as he sat down lonesome at a dirty wood table. She was instantly drawn to him, he was handsome, and looked really strong. She quickly bounded down to him. "Hi what can I get you" Rachel said with a tight smile. "Uh" he said glancing up and down her small frame "just water please". Seconds later she returned holding a clear coke glass filled to the brim with ice cold water. "Here you go" she said with a wink. "Thank you, uhm" he said searching for a name tag "what's your name?" "Rachel, Rachel Berry" she said holding out her perfectly manicured hand. "Finn Hudson" he said shaking it and feeling a slight tangle in his fingertips. Rachel felt sparks when she shook his hand, there eyes met and she quickly looked away. His eyes, where a beautiful shade of light brown. "What's a beautiful girl like you doing working in a place like this?" he asked with honest questioning on his face. She let out a giggle; of course she had often get hit on, but never when the compliment actually felt as though it mattered. "Making my way through college" she said with a smile. "Ah where do you go?" he asked. "I'm going to be starting at ISU in the fall. Are you in college?" she noticed a faint smile when she said ISU. "Yeah!" he said almost too enthusiastically. "I start at ISU in the fall too" his grin sat lopsided on his face, as he looked up at her
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