What was taking him so long? their probably going to have me thrown In the Dungun! I was freaking out I started to walk towards the stairs. But I wasn't paying attention and walked right off the balcony oh no this is it I'm gonna die in another world and I never even got to see the kings and queens! I heard pounding foot steps and just when I thought I was going to hit the ground, some one's arms grabbed me. I looked up into the eyes of my savior. "Edmound?" I said then everything went black.
ok sooo How was it? should i keep going? plzzzz tell me! thx r&r