It's been quite a while since I have written, on my previous fanfic I stopped at a cliffhanger and left it like that for a few months (I hate it when people do that, therefore I hate myself). This is a fanfic which I began a few months ago and haven't found the time to publish. I give you my Brownie Guide promise to carry on any more fanfics until the end. Lets think of my first attempt as a trial run.
All characters belong to Stephenie Meyer, I only own the story ... The characters in this are vampires, not humans
Enjoy x
BELLA'S POV
No way. No way am I wearing this!
I look up into Alice's exciting eyes and shake my head "no".
"Bella," she scolded, "you will wear this dress, and you will be happy when you do. Okay?"
I glare at her, stupid pixie. I turn my gaze to anything but Alice or the dress, my eyes land on my beautiful daughter. Renesmee. She's sitting watching me, smiling. Her chocolate brown eyes bright and excited, her creamy skin glowing, her bronze curls set perfectly in line with her face and her lips a pale pink. She is wonderful, one of the most fairest creatures I have ever seen, apart from my husband, who is filling the cottage with his fine musical skills on the piano.
Since my hearing is supernatural I can tell from the low hum of the tune that it is Renesmee's song, which he named "Nessie's Melody", stupid nickname.
"Give me a few more minutes Bella, this has to be just right," Alice says.
I look back to Renesmee. She's officially five years old, looks about thirteen. A childish thirteen, not ready to mature fully yet, but when she does, I bet she'll be beautiful. Jasper and Emmett always bet each other on how she'll look when she's older and when she will go through different life stages. One that made me beat the crap out of them was when Emmett bet Jasper when she would get her first period. I almost killed him. Carlisle says that her growth has slowed considerably, but she will still mature faster than a normal human. He estimates that in another two to three years that she will be fully grown. I can wait for that day, I could wait forever.
"There we go! Stunning!" Alice sang.
I turned from Renesmee and looked in the mirror. Alice has dressed me in a simple black, backless dress, which travels down to the floor, it clings to my waist making me look like I have curves, which I don't, well, hardly.
"Well?" Alice questioned.
I sighed, I didn't need to, it was just out of exasperation. "I like it." I said simply.
I did like it, just not on me, it was too opera.
"Mommy, you look so pretty," Renesmee complemented.
I turned and kissed her cheek. "Thank you sweetie! Not as pretty as you though."
She rolled her eyes at my complement. True, she must get annoyed at me telling her that everyday.
"I doubt that," a voice came from upstairs. Edward. Every time I said Renesmee was beautiful, he would agree but add on that she wasn't as beautiful as me, which made me roll my eyes.
"Don't listen to that old fool," I whispered to Renesmee. I knew Edward would be able to hear just fine, and see it in her head, but I didn't care.
"Is Jacob coming around today?" Alice asked.
"Yeah," I replied.
Jacob wasn't fully considered part of the family. There was still tension with the wolves and vampires, of course Renesmee's arrival and bond with Jake had eased it, and the wolves accepted her. They were just a little more cautious of us. More so of Edward and the rest apart from Carlisle. Me, they were okay with. I was just Bella, but I wasn't as close to them as I used to be.
When Jacob imprinted I was so mad, but I have grown to accept it, Edward not so much. He understands because he can see into Jacob's head and analyse his thoughts. He says that Renesmee is still like a sister to him, and he doesn't have any romantic feelings towards her. He doesn't wish for her to grow up quickly, he's content with the way she is, but Edward says he does think of what she'll look like when she's older and what will happen in the future. But he never goes beyond that, he doesn't even know if Renesmee will accept the imprinting situation.
Renesmee doesn't know about it, she doesn't care. Jacob is like the best big brother in her eyes, nobody else comes close. Edward says that he does notice that her thoughts have changed ever so slightly. She has admired him for his looks but hasn't thought much of it. I'm content with her and Jacob's relationship for now. I'm happy that she'll end up with someone I trust.
I looked to Renesmee. She was sitting on a chair getting her hair straightened by Alice. I wish Alice wouldn't do that, I love her ringlets. Suddenly Renesmee snapped her head around to face the window. When she turned her head back round she was grinning from ear to ear. Jacob was here.
It didn't take long for him to reach my bedroom (not used for sleep). When he entered her smiled at the scene before him.
"Whatcha doin Nessie?" He asked.
I growled at him, he knew I hated that stupid nickname.
He turned to me and smiled. "Wow, you scrub up nice Bella!"
I rolled my eyes. He knew I hated it when people did that to me.
"Daddy's taking mommy away tonight!" Renesmee chirped.
Jacob raised an eyebrow at me. "Interesting," he said. "Where?"
'Surprise." My tone was flat, Jake smirked. He also knew I hated surprises. "What do you want Jacob?"
"Well, I was thinking I could take this little monster off your porcelain hands for the afternoon? Maybe take her hunting?"
"She's already hunted today," Alice said. She was straightening Renesmee's hair at human speed. "Rose took her out."
Jacob rolled his eyes at the mention of Rosalie's name. "Knew she'd do that," he muttered under his breath.
"But you can hang out Jake," I assured him. He looked at me, there was something different in his expression.
"Sure," he said.
Alice continued to straighten Renesmee's hair, while Jacob chatted with them. I snuck out of the room looking for Edward.
"NO!" Alice shouted. "Not until the time's right," she admonished me. "Get back in here!"
Stupid Pixie!
A/N: Thank you for reading, hope it was okay, this is just a starter to the story, it will get better, trust me.
I would really appreciate reviews, I am up for good and bad criticism, with the exception of just being plain mean.
Until next time ... :)
