my reviewers are asking me to write some abhirika...
Meine yea plot kaafi pehle socha tha aur apne ongoing dayareya story pey jikar bhi kiya tha..
Tab to sbne keh diya likh do..To mein likh rahi hu..
Aab kisi ko pasand na aye yea bashing aye to I will right way delte the story..
Mein abhirika sochne baithu to humesha ajeeb ideas hi ate hey..isiliye maaf krna..spcly mad Tarika fans
Guys I have portrayed or tried to portray all things in a practical way..
Ager hum mese kisi ki loved ones aise kre to kabhie na kabhie ek pal k liye hi sahi yea soch hume ayega hi..isnt it? Dont think as mad abhirika fan..think in general..we girls will atleast once think like this isnt so?
Here Tarika is nt immature bt not the ever understanding..she is very much common..just like us..nothing special to be the girlfriend of senior inspector Abhijeet..but a girl who had dreamt of loving and being loved..getting priority..getting pampered like most of us..we girls dream
and here Abhijeet is not that love sick blushing man calling out Tarika jee Tarika jee..
He is a tough cop..good friend and yes a dutiful good caring lover..but don't show it off always..just like most common boys do..no fantasy in him..just a man in 40's should be..
So now here's a new try on abhirika..
after long they are having a great time..all of them were together studied in medical college now enjoying their settled life..
Except Tarika all four others are married, and another one already over with sagai..marriage is after two months..
They were chatting on all girly things when one of them asked naughtily "waise Tarika hum sab ki naiya par lag gayi..teri shaadi ki mithai kab khila rahi hey?"
Tarika blushed badly looking down..
Another one teased "arey tamatar bad mey ho jana pehle bata to sahi..jiju ne anguthi wagera diya?"
"ha wo.." she blushed
"ooooo...to anguthi deke proposal ho gaya..."
she remembered two things simentenously..
How Abhijeet acted the proposal during a case [don't remember case name] but never spoke about that later..it was just a disguise fr him..
How Purvi had handed over a ring to her saying "hum log case ke liye shop gaye they yea anguthi bahut sundar tha to Abhijeet sir ne mujhe kaha kharid k tujhe de du..sir ko meeting k liye jana tha..achi hey na?" [my interpretation of satara mey cid]
she came back to present with a touch on her hand "arey bol na kaisa tha proposal?"
"bas asehi..kuch khas nahi.."
"fir bhi koi romantic dinner?"
Tarika smiled "haan resturant se lake kehta hey khud banaya hey.."
"hw cute...aur koi candle light.."
she just nodded in no with a smile..
"waise le ati na jiju ko hum bhi mil lete ek din hi mile they tere birthday pey [Abhijeet ki bachpan] per uss din kuch problem ho gayi thi..achanaq hi wo nikal gaye..thik se baat taq nahi hui"
she remembered seeing Shreya entering with sid Daya left from the party Abhijeet after excusing on both behalf of both of them moved out without attetnding half of the party.
She sighed..her friend noticed it "kya hua..kuch baat hey kya.."
"arey nahi aisa kuch nahi hey"
"to le ati na aj..itni bhi kya insecurity.."
"arey insecurity nahi..aj 8baje taq to uski duty hi hey"
"sunday ko bhi..."
Tarika smiled "kya kare sunday ko criminals chutti nahi manate na.."
they all laughed with "tera duty nahi tha.."
"arey tha..per salunkhe sir ne kaha wo sambhal lenge..per woha to ACP sir nahi hey yeaha aur Daya bhi aj hi mission se lautega to pura burden Abhijeet pey hey"
her friends nod understandingly, one of them nudged "8baje taq duty..mtlb uski bad weekend plan..kiu.."
Tarika shook his head, she tried to hide but still it's evident from her voice a sad tone "nahi re..hafte bar duty ki bad sunday nikalna hi nahi cahta hey..aur aj to..kaha na Daya ayega mission se der raat taq mission ki baat hogi..woha mile logo ki mimicry wagera.."
"acha?jiju yea sab bhi kerte hey..fir to wo kaafi natkhat hey.."
"haa yaar unhe interviews wagera mey dekh k to lagta hey jaise bahut serious hey.."
Tarika smiled.. "arey kaha..use to tang khichna bahut achese ata hey..salunkhe sir ko itna tang kerta hey sir kehte hey cid chor denge..usme aur excited hoke puchta hey kab sir.."
all of them burst out in laughter..
They continued talking about other topics when suddenly one of then said to other one "uss din wohi pichle mahine..jab hum milne ki plan kiya tha tu nahi ayi.."
"arey meri mother in law ayi thi uss din..Tarika bhi to nahi ayi thi na?"
another friend added in dreamy voice "kaise ati?jiju use magic show dikhane jo le gaye they"
Tarika's face colour changed but they didnt notice "yey Tarika bol na..kaisa tha enjoy kiya..haan..jiju ne kya kya magic kiya..aur dikhaya?"
Tarika tried to smile..
"wo hum woha enjoyment k liye nahi gaye they.."
"per tere to chutti thi na isliye to humne plan banaya tha.."
"ha chutti to hum dono ki hi thi..wo kuch personal kaam.."
"arey wohi to keh rahe hey hum tum dono ki personal kaam.."
Tarika sighed deeply and explained what kind of experience she faced in the magic show [khatre mey CID]
after hearing the whole matter her friends exchanged glances, one of them asked in serious tone "ek baat bata..duty fir dosti..farz..inmey tera number kab ata hey?"
Tarika for a moment get stunned but managed a smile with "arey nahi aise koi baat nahi..wo to bas..acha tu keh rahi thi koi nayi recipe ki bareme.."
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She ignores and divert the topic but fr the time being only..at the heart of her heart the question kept on repeating.
She moves back home, on way she calls Abhijeet, who picked the call with "mein drive ker raha hu..call u later"
he cut the call she sighed..
At this moment the thing most she want is to speak with him..just speak..what she don't know how much she don't know..
She enters her home freshens up and checked her phone still no call from him..
She was about to call him back again but her mind repeated the question *
ek baat bata..duty fir dosti..farz..inmey tera number kab ata hey Tarika?
She kept back the phone and sat back cuddling the pillow..
"Abhijeet k liye akhir mera number hey kab.."
she remembered that he may have really moved to coma..he got the bullet injury seriously..yea coma was acting but injury..and why to do duty as a friend [Abhijeet in coma]
if that day ACP hadn't cancelled the orders he may have taken transfer..he didn't asked her discussed with her only declared..reason..he can't stay to see hatred in his friend's eye..what about love in her eye.. [Shreya sagai series]
and this blast..how happy she was that day, that he had taken her fr outing, years ago he had taken her for movie once [Baal majduri] and now this...but the reason...once again he gave priority to friendship than himself and also from her feelings
he can blackmail her that he will never speak with her again just to know truth fr the sake of his duty [CID mein darar] but it was only his duty..he didn't mentioned it anytime later
he can suspect her again fr duty [adrushya goli] ..he didn't have the same trust fr her which he had fr his friend and senior then where is her number..
She is never his first priority, maybe she is her last..is she even a priority?
She in the flood of her emotions didn't remember his tension fr her, his support fr her, his care fr her..his trust fr her..
Anger never let anyone see the depth of something..it's same with her..
She got from the bed..once more checked her phone..no message or call from him..
She sighed "mein galat soch rahi hu..yea sahi..mujhe kisise baat kerni cahiye..per..haan Purvi aur Shreya sahi rahegi..Purvi kaafi suljhi hui bhi hey"
she nods
"nahi Purvi Abhijeet ki khilaf to bolegi hi nahi..Shreya bhi apne senior..haan mein kahungi mere ek dost aur uski boyfriend mey yea masla hey..mujhe baat to kerni hi hogi..kaahi meri soch to galat nahi.."
she lied down still thinking.
For pure abhirika moments u have to wait...
Keep reviewing I will try to update soon