Mr. America and Me
Okay here it is…my first Fanfic… it's a Hannah Montana story and it's my first so be nice…I cant decide whether or not to make it a ONESHOT or a chapter story so please R&R!! Thanks! Happy Reading…
Disclaimer: I do NOT own Hannah Montana or Cody (sigh) but I do own Eva, the parents and all other non-famous people in here…
Warning: rated T for language…just to be sure.
Eva's P.O.V"Aww come on mom, it's just for 3 weeks!" i pleaded to my mother as she was unpacking her grocery shopping.
"No, Eva, sorry but we just had a family holiday remember?" she replied referring to the 3 day weekend we
spent up at California. "But Mom, that wasn't even a real holiday! we spent the whole time cleaning up
Grandma's House!..." as I started to help unpack the food. "it's not fair! this could be the only chance i have
to break into the acting biz" i whined hoping to break her down and get her to agree to go."oh fine...go
talk to your father and see what he says then its off to bed! its getting late Missy!" she said but I was
already off running to Dad.
The Next day...
Okay so after i talked to my Dad he had finally said yes. Oh my god, I'm so excited! I better pack! And
before I knew it, I was in L.A (AN: okay having short term memory loss here so I'm gonna say it gets filmed
here cos I cant remember where it does get filmed…and I call myself a fan? lol)! "okay so where to now?"
my dad questioned me. "umm well…how about we find the hotel?" I replied, Tired as anything after the
flight from Texas to L.A (AN: weird hey? I'm From Australia but Texas? Maybe its because of Mitchel and
Texas. Dunno anyhow…) and just wanting to get some sleep. Hmm...Maybe I'll see a celebrity here. That
would be cool as! Specially if they're from HM… "So when will your agent ring about the audition Eva?" My
mother said suddenly snapping out of my daydream. "Uhh well…Joe said he will ring at 6:00" I replied, still
nervous of how my audition will go. We all hopped into the rental car and drove for an hour before arriving
at a VERY swanky hotel. "See? I told you Joe would 'hook us up'" I said giggling at my comment.
Walking into the hotel, I felt as if I moved, I would break something VERY expensive. So I walked ever so
carefully up the stairs…right up until a boy (a very cute boy actually) bumped into me and I went flying
down the stairs. "AAHH!! HELP!!" I cried. The cute boy ran up to me and caught me, just in time so that I
didn't fall.
"Oh! Thanks" I said dusting myself off and not looking up yet. "No problem…anytime" he said in a voice I
thought was familiar to me. As I looked up, I was shocked to find the cute boy was Cody Linley (AN: or
Mr.America as he's called in my group of friends). "Oh wow you're your your…" I babbled. "Cody Linley,
Pleased to meet you" he said taking my hand and kissing it lightly like in France. I blushed. "Eva…are you
staying here too?" I blurted out, kind of wrecking the mood. "Yeah…suite 2054…you should come by
sometime…you know…to hang out…maybe I could show you around…" he said looking at his shoes and
fidgeting with his hands in his pockets. "Yeah…sure! Great" I said a little too eager. "EVA! STOP FLIRTING
WITH THAT POOR BOY AND COME HELP US WITH THE BAGS!" my dad screamed, scaring the whole hotel
lobby. "Oohh! Sorry. Looks like I got you in trouble." Cody said. "Ahh don't worry bout it" I said walking off.
"see you later Cody!"
"Yeah. See you later Eva" he replied. "Gosh I really hope she comes by...I like her." He said smiling to himself walking off into the elevator.
So after lifting all the bags up to the room and collapsing on the couch for like a minute, I decided to ask
my Mom about going to Cody's apartment. As I plucked up the courage to ask…my Mom must have
read my mind cos she said,"Okay sure, you can go to his apartment…but NO funny business! Ok?" "Okay
sure thanks Mom! Oohh! Better change!" I said, Stoked that she said yes.
HM
Cody's P.O.V"Oh man…where is she? I bet she's not coming! Yeah…that's what it is…she got
Freaked out that I was so friendly that I scared her away!" I cried to my friend John.
"Dude, calm down, she's probably just getting her self 'beautified' or something," he said trying to calm me down.
Just as he finished talking she walked in. Stunning. She was in a little floral summer dress with orange shoes and just a little make-up. Perfect. "Wow. You look amazing" I blurted out without thinking.
"Thanks." She replied, smoothing out her dress. "Well. Aren't you going to introduce me to your friend here?" she questioned pointing to John.
"Oh! Yeah, John, meet Eva, Eva meet John" I said. "Nice to meet you" John said shaking her hand. "You too John." She replied.
"Wow. Nice room you got here." She said astounded by the view of the beach from the window. "How did
you afford…Oh wait I forgot. The 'Celebrity' thing…" She said, Obviously Embarrassed.
"Yeah, even though I get chased by mobs of girls just walking down the street, which you know, isn't all
bad, some of it pays off in the end" I said pretending to be just like my character Jake Ryan off Hannah
Montana.
"Oh Haha, don't you turn into a Jake on me boy!" she replied obviously picking up on the joke. "So. What is
there to do around here?" she said eager to start the tour. "Well, there are theme parks, bowling," But I
didn't get to finish cos as soon as I said Theme Parks, she was already dragging John and me into the
elevator. "Come on pretty boy, let's see if you can beat me at the dodgem cars!" she said directing that
to me.
"Oh! I know you didn't just challenge him!" John said. "Oh I think I just did!" she replied grinning cheekily.
Man I love it when she does that.
"Whoo! That was awesome!" Eva screamed after we had just come off a rapid water race. "Okay, you
were right, you TOTALLY kicked my butt out there" I said putting a little pout on my face. "Aww! You look
so cute! Lemme get a picture of that!" Eva said reaching into her massive beach bag. "Okay stay still,
and…there. All done. Okay I am SOOO sending that to my friends!" Eva exclaimed excitedly. "Not if I
catch you first!" I said chasing her.
So After about 25 minutes of playing cat and mouse, I finally caught her and grabbed her by the waist,
causing her to fall down to the grass, with me following her. "Now, give me the photo" I said with a grin on
my face. "No." Eva replied, trying to keep a brave face. "Oh, I see, being brave are we? Well how about
the tickle monster eh?" I asked beginning to tickle her to death.
And after a lot of laughing, screaming and tackling, I finally got her to give me the photo. "Oh, it's not as
bad as I thought. You can keep it I guess." I said, knowing what the answer would be. "Oh, so after all
that I get to keep the photo? Oh well, it was fun while it lasted. Come on, let's get some food" she said,
reading my mind.
"Good idea" I said already walking off, and grabbing Eva's hand. She didn't seem to mind much either,
especially when I entwined my fingers with hers. She just smiled and kept walking.
HM
Eva's P.O.V"This has to be the BEST day ever". I thought to myself looking down at Cody's and mine still entwined
fingers as we were eating our lunch. "Hey, does your Mom know where you are? She must be getting
worried." Cody said snapping me out of my daydream. "Oh no she doesn't, hang on, I'll just text her." I
replied.
MissEvie07: Hey Mom, I'm at the water park with Cody. Be home soon. Xx
SuperMommy: okay sweetie, don't be too long, hey do u want to invite Cody over for dinner? I'm making Pizza.
"Hey you wanna come to my house for dinner? My Mom's making pizza?" I asked
"Okay sure" Cody replied, smiling.
MissEvie07:Okay he said yes. Thanks Mom. Xx
"Okay what now?" He asked looking around for something to do. "How about the Ferris Wheel?" I replied
hoping he would say yes. "Uhh okay sure I guess…let's go" He said looking nervous. "Hey, your not scared
are you? Cos if you are…it's okay, I'm here" I said linking our hands together. "Thanks, let's go!" He said
suddenly happy. We lined up and just got on the last carriage and started to make our way up to the top.
"You know, I'm having a lot of fun today, Eva" Cody said, holding my hand. "Me too" I replied as he
carriage suddenly came to a stop. I screamed and Cody put his arm around me and hugged me. 'What's
going on Cody? I'm scared!" I muffled into his jacket. "I'm sure we'll be fine, it's okay," he said soothingly, trying to calm me down. :We'll be down in no time, I promise." He finished.
"Okay everybody stay calm," a voice said, coming over a microphone. "We seem to be having some
technical difficulties. We have rescue vans coming but you might be up there for a couple of hours." A
Policeman finished.
"Oh no. Mom's gonna kill me if were late for dinner" I said. But that was the least of our worries…
//AN//: Okay everyone, hope you enjoyed that chappie. I decided to make it a chapter story so REVIEW please please please and I'll have the next chapter up soon! Much thanks…Jamie.xx