Hi guys this my first fanfiction story I ever wrote and I'm a little scared that you won't like as when it comes to creative writing I'm not that good at it but a friend of mine thinks I would be good at this so please review to see what you think and if you like I will continue this story as I really love the characters Mayaka and Satoshi from Hyouka one of my favourites Anime thank you.
Chapter 1. I promise I won't
Ring, ring. Satoshi woke up disturbed and sat up on his bed to answer the phone "H..hello" he said quietly, "F..fuku-chan have I woke you up" she said sweetly, It was Mayaka phoning him she's the only one who calls him Fuku-chan, he woke himself up properly "N..no you didn't, what's up Mayaka?" he said normally, he got a little worried that she didn't answer him straight away but when she did he felt relived " I was just wondering if you like help me with something" she said " yeah, where do you want to meet up?" he asked, "Erm... well my house, if you do mind" she said.
When she said her house he became silent and blushed so hard because well he has a crush on her ever since middle school and I'm not sure if she feels the same way, he then realised that he haven't answer her "H..hello Fuku-chan are you still there?" she said "Erm.. yeah I'm still here and yeah I will come over to yours" he said nervously, " great see you in 20 minutes, bye" she said excitedly and she got off the phone and as did he.
He got off the bed and exit his bedroom to the bathroom and then went to have a shower to wash his hair and everything after 5 minutes he got out of the shower and went back to bedroom, he then walked towards his wardrobe and an plain t-shirt, some shorts. he then let my hair dry by itself and went downstairs to the front hallway to put his shoes on, he picked up his house keys since his mum and dad are at work today and walked out the front door to lock it.
by the time I got out of the house and walked half way up the hill i had about 8 minutes to get to Mayaka's house because her house is the first one at the top of the hill. I was nearly at the top and when I looked up it was Mayaka, was she waiting for me, when I saw her then I ran up to the top.
when Satoshi finally got to Mayaka's house he asked her something "hey erm.. what is it you wanted help with?", she looked at feet feeling a bit embarrassed and then walked towards him, with her head against his chest, his heart was beating fast, "I..I (crying) want you to stay here with me" she said "what why, what's wrong?" "I don't want to be alone, my parents they said they would be back by now and its been a week, I think something happened to them, please Fuku-chan" he wrapped his arms around her waist to comfort her " yes of course, anything you need ok" he still had his arms wrapped around her, she looked up to him and whipped her tears away "ok, thank you Fuku-chan, really thank you" "it's fine" he said.
They walked inside the house and Mayaka dragged him to the kitchen and asked " do you want something to eat, I can making you something if you want" I don't mind what you make, your food is always delicious to me" he said, Mayaka blushed and made her realised she had feelings for him but brushed it off, "ok then I will make your favourite yakitori with a bowl of rice on the side", " yeah that would be fantastic, thanks".
about hour later Mayaka served the meal she made for her and Satoshi at the table in the kitchen and she sat in front of him and ate together like a couple but they didn't talk at the table. half an hour later Satoshi and Mayaka finished their lunch, when they left the table, Satoshi asked Mayaka something "hey Mayaka do you want me to help you wash the dishes" "no its ok i got, you can watch TV in the living room and for me ok" "ok" so he walked into the living room and sat on the sofa in front of the TV and turn it on to watch a movie until Mayaka was finish with the dishes.
10 minutes after Mayaka walked in, she sat next to Satoshi quite close which caused them to blush bright red on their faces, and they just watched the film but later after the film was finish Satoshi found Mayaka sleep on his shoulder, he then move slowly and quietly and picked her up in his arms and walked towards the stairs up to her bedroom on the left, the door was already open he carefully walked through the bedroom while carrying Mayaka in his arms and walked to her bed and placed her gentle, as Satoshi was letting go off Mayaka she then woke up and grab his hand "please don't" he turned to the bed again and went lay next to Mayaka and hold her tight " I promise I won't".
they both looked at each other eyes and Satoshi leaned closer towards Mayaka until their lips met, abut 10 minutes later they broke apart to catch their breath and smiled to each other as they have just shared their first kiss together, then Mayaka fell asleep on Satoshi.
And he said "goodnight Mayaka" then he to fell asleep.
