I am back with new inspiration. I am going to the beach so I won't update to about Thursday but I will probably post like 3 chapters. Enjoy! ._. ,_,
Allegiances
Sunsetclan:
Leader: Pebblestar- Gray tabby she cat with Blue eyes ( Sweetpaw's mother)
Deputy: Stonewind- Gray tabby tom with Green eyes ( Sweetpaw's father)
Medicine cat: Honeyblossom- Golden tabby she cat with orange eyes
Warriors:
Bluetail- Gray tabby tom with blueish tail and green eyes
Harenose- Tan she cat with pale green eyes
Rabbitsong- Light brown tabby tom with ivy blue eyes
Cloudpool- White she cat with brown front paws and black back paws with blue eyes
Badgertail- Jet black tom with white striped tail and yellow eyes
Forestgorse- Brown tabby she cat with white tipped tail and blue eyes
Smallbird- Small, brown tabby she cat with green eyes
Fernforest- small black she cat with white patches around her pale blue eyes
Heronwing- gray tabby tom with icy blue eyes.
Apprentices:
Sweetpaw- White and brown patched she cat with Bright pink eyes with a black tipped tail (Main character) Mentor: Fernforest
Littlepaw- Black tom with white paws and white tipped tail and green eyes Mentor: Heronwing
Blackpaw- Black tom with blue eyes Mentor: Badgertail
Foxpaw- Red-brown she cat with green eyes Mentor: Harenose
Cherrypaw- Gray tabby she cat with red eyes ( Sweetpaw's sister and best friend) Mentor: Bluetail
Redpaw- Brown tabby tom with Red tail and Yellow eyes Mentor: Cloudpool
Queens and kits
Lillystream- Light gray she cat with yellow eyes Mate: Bluetail
Kits:
Quailkit: Light brown tabby she kit with pale blue eyes
Crowkit: Black tom with Light green eyes
Elders
None
Sweetpaw's P.O.V.
"Pair up and Practice all your battle moves." Bluetail tells me, Cherrypaw, Blackpaw and Redpaw. We nod and start to pad to the edge of the Training clearing but stop when we hear a snarl. Our mentors line up and we all run behind them. "Show yourself." Cloudpool snarls and I see a pair of red eyes and a cat walks out he is full black from what I can see. "Flame, leave." Badgertail meows and I freeze. This is the killer that killed 5 of our warriors last moon. He only attacks us though, so that is strange. He came when I was first an apprentice and declared revenge and ran out. I look at Fernforest. "Run!" she whispers to us and the four of us run back to camp. Pebblestar comes down and looks at me and my sister. "what's wrong dear?" she asks. "Flame... Training hollow... Help!" Redpaw says between pants and Stonewind, Heronwing, and Rabbitsong run out but stop as our mentors come back. "He didn't attack but ran back across the border." Fernforest says and Pebblestar nods her head. "be careful when by the rouge border." My mother says to the clan and puts her tail around Cherrypaw. My father, Stonewind, Comes over and puts her tail around me. Then I pad over to the fresh kill pile and grab a squirrel. I sit by the entrance of the apprentice den and soon my sister comes over and we share the squirrel. Then we pad into our den and go to sleep. The next morning, I wake up and pad outside of the den. Soon the others pad out and sit beside me. The dawn patrol comes into camp with a strange cat. Then me, Cherrypaw, Redpaw, and Blackpaw all freeze while Foxpaw and Littlepaw look at us like were crazy. "Why is he here?" Redpaw whispers. "I don't know." Cherrypaw says and I watch him. "Flame! What are you doing here." Stonewind growls and Flame stays come. "I come to make peace." He says and Pebblestar means. "What do you want." My mother asks and he looks around. His eyes rest on the six of us and I gulp. "I want... HER!" He says and I see him point to me. I shrink back and I see Pebblestar look at me and then at The others and Then at Stonewind. "Why." She asks and he looks at her. "I am lonely." He says and I shrink back even more. "But why will taking my daughter cause peace?" Pebblestar asks and He looks at her. "Because I will stop terrorizing your clan. Your old leader, Darkstar, Killed both my parents. I will take something of yours and call it even." He says and she looks at Stonewind. "Fine, but first I will hold their warrior ceremony." she says and He nods. He walks to the camp entrance and I Walk to the front with Cherrypaw, Blackpaw, and Redpaw. "I call upon starclan and Hope they approve of these apprentices. Sweetpaw, Cherrypaw, Blackpaw, and Redpaw. From now on, you shall be known as Sweetfrost, Cherryflight, Blackclaw, and Redtail." Pebblestar says and the clan cheers. Pebblestar nods to me and I say good bye to the clan and walk over to Flame. He nods and leads me out of the camp to the rouge border. He leads me through the forest to a cave and I walk in. He leads me over to a nest and I curl up, crying softly. "Why are you crying?" He asks and I glare at him. "I was just taken from my home!" I sob and he looks at the ground. I stop crying and he looks at me. "I'm sorry. It's just..." He starts to say and still looks at the ground. "It's just what?" I ask and he looks at the wall. "Ever since I walked into your camp on the first day you were an appretice, I looked at you and just never stopped thinking about you." He says and I look at him. He has water in his eyes and I get up and put my tail round him. "why do you feel sorry for me?" He asks and I look at him, confused. "I'm taking a guess that the cats you killed were the cats who killed your parents." I say and he nods. "Do you think of me as murderer?" He asks and I look at him. " No, I do not. I think of you as a cat who was blinded by grief when you saw the cats who killed your parents." I say and put my head on his shoulder. "Really?" he asks, looking at me. I nod my head and lick his shoulder. I yawn and he licks my cheek. "You should get some rest." he says and looks at me. I pad over to my nest and almost instantly fall asleep.
Yay, Chapter one is done. Hope you enjoyed and PLEASE review and give me your feed back.