A/N: hey guys lonewolf4709 back again and i know this is unexpected from me but i recently got into MLP and thought hey i should right a fanfiction about this. Also, i've read some really good ones and i highly suggest a second chance by 0-blazesun-0 i doubt thats how its spelt but, that story inspired me to write this so i hope you enjoy and as always don't forget to r&r
Chapter one- the story begins
Umknown POV:
Alright now i know most of you might have clicked on this story thinking hey it might be a good happy story. Well, i'm sorry to let you down but it's not well first i should probably introduce myself and give you a bit of a description of what i look like and a bit about my personality. First, my name is Branden and you could maybe say im about 5 feet 9 inches, i also have a releatively muscular build but nothing to crazy. Secondly, i have blue eyes and i have had many compliments on my , i have short brown hair but if i let it grow out my hair gets pretty curly. Now, as to why i'm writing this i felt as though i should document my recent adventures over the past few years. I also wanted tell any one curious enough as to how i became who and what i am today. Now, dont just expect me to just tell you because, I'm not just going to tell you your going to have to continue reading to find out.
OH! i forgot i didn't tell you guys about my personality did i, sorryfor not doing that. In all I'm a very outgoing person when im around people i know. But, to the people i first meet i tend to be very shy i also tend to mainly be very very shy around women. Now, i have had very close friends of mine and random people tell me that i am pretty good looking and should really mingle more. But, i just dont really approach women well i guess you could that i stumble over my words and tend to just not know what to say. Ah enough of that why dont we begin from the beginning shall where it all started on one night 4 years ago.
4 Years Earlier
I was at a buddy of mines graduation party and i should also say we were all very drunk and as the night rolled on we all really started feeling it. Everyone at the party was having a great time but,I myself was never a social person so i stayed to my self and just enjoyed the company of one of my best friend Matt. I've known Matt for my entire life we have always gone to the same schools since 1st grade. When Matt and I were little kids we did everything together and even to this day we still do you never really see us apart without a reason for it because to me Matt wasn't a friend he was my brother and i was like a brother to him. As, the night rolled on people started either leaving or passing out which ment the party was dying down and i was getting bored so i told matt good bye and i left. Now, i know what everyone is thinking you cant drive drunk but none of them stopped me.
So, i got into my car and started my long drive , the way there i started thinking about the future after our graduation and where each of us would , I was so lost in thought that i had never realized that i ran a red light and that an oncoming tanker truck was now barreling it's way toward the side of my car. when i had finally heard the honking it was to late and the truck hit me rolling my car four times before it finally landed upside down. I knew i was in a bad situation and the car was leaking gas. So, i tried as hard as i could to get out but being as drunk as i was that wasnt very hard so i couldnt get out myself. But, thankfully a bystander saw the accident and called the police i knew this because i could hear the police sirens in the distance so, i was relieved that i might make it out alive. But, before i saw the police and firefighters coming toward me the car blew up with me in it so, the last thing i heard were the police giving orders to grab the jaws of life. Now, i was sitting in a dark void alone or so i thought.
" Augh my head w-where am i?" i said allowed
"hello there" someone said behind me.
I got spooked and turned around to see some sort of creature standing behind me smiling i started slowly backing away in fear.
" What are you?" i asked scared not believeing it was real.
"My Name is discord and i could see you have met a very unsatisfying fate and i am her willing to help you." Said this being that magically appeared behind me scaring me again. I shit you not this thing was a cross between an eagle,dragon, lion,deer, pony, bat and goat i believe. Now, i was petrified of this thing but i had no choice to talk to him.
"Help me how?" i asked and he started chuckleing."by giving you a new start." he said touching me before i knew what had happened to me i was blinded by light and found myself in a green field."Where the fuck am i?" i asked aloud. The fIeld that i was in was surrounded by a very dense forest so, i did the only thing i could do and slowly stood to my feet and dusted off my body. " Geez that was a weird dream but where am i though. I dont remember ever falling asleep in a field. Ah well might as well figure out where i am." I thought to myself but as i started walking i noticed something rather strange there wasn't a single sound of modern technology anywhere. I just shrugged and continued walking "Man this forest feels like it goes on forev-." i stopped at the end of my sentence because i saw a chicken in the middle of a this forest. i started walking toward it with caution because why would the chicken be out her in the middle of this forest and i was confused as to where i was and where this forest i was in was located." Hey little guy what are you doi- OH GOD!" i yelled at the end as i watched what i believed to be just a chicken rise into a monster that had a chicken head and a snake body. " What the fuck is that thing!" I yelled as i started running away in the opposite direction of the creature. I literally ran as fast as i could dodgeing all the branches and leaves that i could but this thing was still on my ass.
As i was running i was sure to dodge everything that i could see in my path but, what i had failed to see was the tail of the creature that was right on my tail was right in front of me perfectly blended in on the ground. But, in the distance i started to see the end of the forest and started to feel relieved and became reckless to the point that i had still failed to notice its tail and tripped on it. "Augh shit." i said as i tripped over its tail and started rolling out of the forest until i stopped in a sittiing position. " augh my head wait where is that thing" i said as i got up on my feet and started looking around for it until i finally found it and could see it glaring at me with its red eyes at the edge of the forest ." Ha wats wrong to scared t- Hey whats happening why cant i move" i said as i started realizeing that my body was turning to stone so, i started struggling as hard as i could but no matter what i couldnt move and when it reached my neck i knew i was doomed." Well shit" were the last words i said before i was completely turned to stone.
In a near by cottage
A cream colored pegasus pony was tending to her animals and other woodland creatures. " Oh my please dont do that little birdie you might get hurt." the pony said to a bird that was getting rather fiesty with a much larger falcon. As the cream colored pony was continueing he work and flying around tending to the other animals a certain bunny rabbit hopped up to her and started pulling on her tail." Oh my angel what is so important now?" she asked the rabbit kindly. the rabbit started pointing and pulling her toward the direction of an open field that wasnt to far from her cottage." Oh ok if you insist ill folllow you." she said flying slowly behind the rabbit. As they got closer to the clearing she could start to see the a rather strange object in the distance." Oh my i wonder what that could." she said. as she got closer to the object she could notice that it was a statue of some sort but none that she recognized." oh dear i hope nopony lost on of their statue."she said worried but as she advanced toward the statue she could see it was no statue." Oh no thats no statue thats somepony or creature that was turned to stone by a Cockatrice." she said and as she finished she looked to where the creature was facing. " It must have got away but looked back into the forest where it was and looked it in the eye. Oh dear i'd better go get Twilight she'd know what it is and how we can help itwith out the Cockatrice." she said as she started slowly flying away.
It was a very short and uneventful journey for the pony toward her friends house that was surprisingly was a hollowed out tree. She walked up to the door and knocked and a Small purple and green baby dragon answered the door. " Oh hello Fluttershy what can i do for you." the dragon asked. " Oh um yes well Spike is twilight in i sorta have a problem." Fluttershy sasked meekly." Oh yea let me get her for you. Twilight! Fluttershy's at the door for you." Spike yelled after he closed the door." Ok Spike be down in a sec" called the pony. In a couple of seconds the door opened again to reveal a purple unicorn with a black and purple highlighted mane but she also had wings which also made her an alicorn. " Oh hello Fluttershy how can i help you?" Twilight asked." oh hello Twilight well in the clearing near my cottage angel found a statue and lead me to it. When me and him finally got close to it i found out that it wasnt a statue." Fluttershy explained to her friend. " oh well then what was it then?" Twilight asked. " Well thats just it i dont know ive never seen a creature like this before i was hoping you could help me." Fluttershy told her friend. Twilgihts eyes light up and she went inside and grabbed a scroll and book before returning to her friend. " Well what are we waiting for lets go see if we can find out what it is or document a new species in Equestria." she said walking out of the door. So, The two friends started their short walk back to the field.
- END Chapter one
A/N: Hello every one i hoped you like the revsied version of the first chapter to my new story im hoping to go far witht his one but we will see where this new journey will take us and our friends.