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I did!?
I think I might pursue this, I'm just writing for the fun of it, it's my first fic so be nice plz. If you like review, if you don't like, review! Ok? Tu comprende? Buene, :D Like my Spanish? Or lack thereof. Lol, well, plz review and tell me what you think, I know it's kind of short but the next one is typed and way longer, I'm gonna wait a while to see if I get reviews for the first chap and then I'll post it. I don't know what to name this so if anyone has any snazzy ideas e-mail me at Tpfreak@hotmail.com or put it in a review, k? thx a lot peeps! Ciao!
Karma*
~**~ Troubling Thoughts
Perfect. That was the exact word to use for this day. It was an autumn morning, the leaves of the numerous trees a blend of crimson, gold, yellow, brown and orange. The sky was bright and made the dew in the grass and on the leaves twinkle, resembling diamonds. This word also described the young woman walking down her laneway to her bus stop. It wasn't that she was extremely gorgeous in any way, or even particularly attractive, it was mostly the right word to describe how she felt.
This girl was a shapely brunette, quite pleasing to the eye but nothing about her was distinguished enough to make someone look twice. Ryneka, this sapphire eyed schoolgirl was of average height, had normal hobbies and lived in the twentieth century, knowing nothing of the outside worlds. Ryneka read a lot of fiction, but of course, as a smart, levelheaded girl she didn't really believe the stories she read.
Ryneka was a popular enough girl, with many friends both male and female, but she didn't have a special bond with any of them, she didn't have a best friend she'd known since kindergarten, so to speak. So she was very social, but didn't have any friends in which she confided.
At that moment, as Ryneka got to the end of her laneway, as she peered up the street and glimpsed the yellow paint of the school bus, she thought; My life is perfect at this precise instant and no one can take it from me. But with that last bit of thought, the smile tracing her lips disappeared. No one can take it from me, but I have no one to share it with either. At that last second, as the bus screeched to a stop before her, the flash of wholeness, of rightness and of totality, vanished.
~**~
Somewhere, in a different world, in a different dimension, another young woman thought, Life is so dull here at the Palace! Me and the guys are in need of some fun, some adventure. It'd be great just to find, a new world to explore, with new people, and new customs, now that would be exciting! I can just imagine Jon totally at ease, pretending he wasn't the future King of a major realm, and Raoul not having to hide how much he hated Court functions, because there wouldn't be any! Alanna sighed contentedly, supporting her head with her hands as she thought about it, her lunch tray forgotten and still full in front of her. Yes, that would be great, just to get away for a while. But then again, there aren't any other worlds to explore, we already know all of these places. Discouraged by her thoughts, she sighed again, Gary, noticing for the first time that she hadn't eaten any of her lunch yet told her to "Hurry up and eat before the bell, you'll need your energy!" Alanna reluctantly obliged, thinking; It really is too bad there isn't any source of enterprise close at hand, I'm starting to think even Gary needs a break, he isn't as cheerful as usual. Little did she know.
Hope you liked, It's kinda weird I know, but so what, it'll get better I promise! Alright, now do me a favor, there's a little button there V that says Go, press it and write me a little encouraging or helpful message ok? Yay! Thx! :D
I think I might pursue this, I'm just writing for the fun of it, it's my first fic so be nice plz. If you like review, if you don't like, review! Ok? Tu comprende? Buene, :D Like my Spanish? Or lack thereof. Lol, well, plz review and tell me what you think, I know it's kind of short but the next one is typed and way longer, I'm gonna wait a while to see if I get reviews for the first chap and then I'll post it. I don't know what to name this so if anyone has any snazzy ideas e-mail me at Tpfreak@hotmail.com or put it in a review, k? thx a lot peeps! Ciao!
Karma*
~**~ Troubling Thoughts
Perfect. That was the exact word to use for this day. It was an autumn morning, the leaves of the numerous trees a blend of crimson, gold, yellow, brown and orange. The sky was bright and made the dew in the grass and on the leaves twinkle, resembling diamonds. This word also described the young woman walking down her laneway to her bus stop. It wasn't that she was extremely gorgeous in any way, or even particularly attractive, it was mostly the right word to describe how she felt.
This girl was a shapely brunette, quite pleasing to the eye but nothing about her was distinguished enough to make someone look twice. Ryneka, this sapphire eyed schoolgirl was of average height, had normal hobbies and lived in the twentieth century, knowing nothing of the outside worlds. Ryneka read a lot of fiction, but of course, as a smart, levelheaded girl she didn't really believe the stories she read.
Ryneka was a popular enough girl, with many friends both male and female, but she didn't have a special bond with any of them, she didn't have a best friend she'd known since kindergarten, so to speak. So she was very social, but didn't have any friends in which she confided.
At that moment, as Ryneka got to the end of her laneway, as she peered up the street and glimpsed the yellow paint of the school bus, she thought; My life is perfect at this precise instant and no one can take it from me. But with that last bit of thought, the smile tracing her lips disappeared. No one can take it from me, but I have no one to share it with either. At that last second, as the bus screeched to a stop before her, the flash of wholeness, of rightness and of totality, vanished.
~**~
Somewhere, in a different world, in a different dimension, another young woman thought, Life is so dull here at the Palace! Me and the guys are in need of some fun, some adventure. It'd be great just to find, a new world to explore, with new people, and new customs, now that would be exciting! I can just imagine Jon totally at ease, pretending he wasn't the future King of a major realm, and Raoul not having to hide how much he hated Court functions, because there wouldn't be any! Alanna sighed contentedly, supporting her head with her hands as she thought about it, her lunch tray forgotten and still full in front of her. Yes, that would be great, just to get away for a while. But then again, there aren't any other worlds to explore, we already know all of these places. Discouraged by her thoughts, she sighed again, Gary, noticing for the first time that she hadn't eaten any of her lunch yet told her to "Hurry up and eat before the bell, you'll need your energy!" Alanna reluctantly obliged, thinking; It really is too bad there isn't any source of enterprise close at hand, I'm starting to think even Gary needs a break, he isn't as cheerful as usual. Little did she know.
Hope you liked, It's kinda weird I know, but so what, it'll get better I promise! Alright, now do me a favor, there's a little button there V that says Go, press it and write me a little encouraging or helpful message ok? Yay! Thx! :D