*ok this is my first fanfic so when you review please tell me everything i am doin wrong so i can be a good writer!!!!! pleeeeaaassee! also its a s+s e+t fic also with a romance with two made up characters*
disclaimer:ok you all know that i dont own ccs or clamp stuff but I do own the characters Ami Suzuki, Hajime Amaya (sorry if those are your names), Sea Dew, and Navy Tear.
----This is my first chapter and will be my only chapter if you dont review!!!!!-----
-Summary(kind of)- Ok well this takes place when the gangs in 5th grade an meilin is gone to hong kong. Sakura has all the sakura cards but I changed it so Eriol is still with us! Well what happens is a human girl named Amy Suzuki (who does watch cardcaptor sakura!) get swept into the ccs world! ahhh please dont runaway yet dont worry im keeping everyone as in charcter as I can but note s+s e+t dont have feelings for each other yet but yes li does like sakura but she dont know yet! well on with the story!
----Chapter one----
A girl with wavy, a little-below-the-shoulder length, beach blonde hair walks onto the beach. She is about 5'4" with light tanned skin and sharp aqua blue eyes. She is wearing a loose white tanktop with navy blue shorts. As she walks on to the crowded beach a slight wind starts up. She walks down near the water looking around for her freinds. All of a sudden a the wind gets much stronger and a grey cloud looms closer in the sky. The girl starts to get a bit nervous and searches harder for her freinds. She looks towards the sea and see's a big lightning flash and then comes a loud thunder crash. People are yelling and trying to get off the beach and the girl panicks and runs frantically trying to find someone she knows so she can get a ride home. Then the wind gets even stronger and more lightning comes. Then all of the sudden the girl screams as a bolt of lightning struck her. She heard people screaming and then everything went black.
She felt the slightest sensation of pain as her eyes fluttered open. She thought to herself as she stared at a starry night sky "am I in heaven?". She slowly sat up and realised she was lying in a park. The thing she saw next made her pinch herself to make sure she wasnt dreaming. She slowly looked up at what she knew very well was called the "king penguin". She recognized her surroundings as a show she used to watch called cardcaptor sakura. She fainted out of shock.
RING RING RING RING... A small yellow cat like plush toy with white wings, beady black eyes and a tiny black nose floated over to the alarm clock and yelled
"SAKURAAAA!!"
"HOEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!" Yelled a startled 5th grade girl we all know so well as she sat up from bed. She has short auburn hair and clear emerald green eyes and her name is Sakura Kinomoto.
"Gosh! Kero I would have woken up, you didnt have to yell all of the sudden like that!" said an angry but still sleepy Sakura.
"ya I'm sure you would have woken up" whispered Kero.
"Well I better get ready for school now that I'm up" mumbled Sakura.
Kero floated into his bottom drawer in sakuras desk.
Sakura ran downstairs in her school uniform with her backpack on and said "Ohayo!"(good morning) She put down her bag and sat down at the table to eat her breakfast.
"Ohayo Kaiju"(kaiju-monster) said Touya Sakuras older brother who was also sitting at the table eating breakfast. "I am not a kaiju, onee-san!"(onee-san-big brother) yelled Sakura angrily with her fist up and an angry mark thingy on her fist.
"Ohayo Sakaura-san" said Fujitaka, Sakuras father as he walked into the room with an apron on.
As Sakura finished her meal she said "Oto-san (dad) I'm going to meat Tomoyo-chan in the Penguin Park and walk with her to her house after school okay!"
Fujitaka said "Thats fine"
Touya got up and walked to the door with his bag and said "Itekimas(ill be going)"
"hoooeeeeeee! wait onee-chan!"
Sakura got up from the table and went to put her rollers blades on. She opened the door and yelled cheerfully "Itekimas" She took off and headed towards her brother.
The girl grogily sat up and knew that soon people would be coming to the park and she didnt want to be seen yet. So she dragged herself of into the nearby woods and went to sleep.
Sakura sat in her seat as homeroom started. A male teacher came in and his name is Mr. Terada.
"Today we have a new student from the other side of Japan (couldnt think of anywere else :p) Please welcome him class." spoke Mr. Terada.
A boy about Li's height with blue green hair (short obviously!) that hung down a bit near his left eye (like Oujiroh in Angelic layer) and soft blue green eyes.
Mr. Terada wrote his name on the board. It said Hajime Amaya.
"Konnichiwa(hello) my name is Hajime Amaya and....(he says the stuff new kids usually say)"
"Well Amaya why dont you sit in the seat in front of Kinomoto, Kinomoto please stand up." spoke Mr. Terada and then Sakura stood up.
Hajime walked over to the seat infront of Sakura and as she sat down he gave her a freindly smile and sat down.
Throughout the day Hajime, Tomyo, Sakura, Syoran, and Eriol all became freinds. Hajime was a very nice soft spoken boy who was also rather polite.
Later at the end of school Sakura and Tomoyo said goodbye to the others and headed towards Tomyos house. They decides to stop by Penguin Park on the way as they heard a loud sneez and then a cough. They looked towards the forest curiously.
"Hooeeee Tomoyo-chan I think theres a ghost" whimpered Sakura as she clung onto Tomoyos back.
"Sakura I dont think its a ghost, I think we should go check and see if this person is alright" said Tomoyo softly
They walked into the woods a couple of feet and stopped dead in their tracks. There was a girl lying on the ground....
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Ok well I think right now Im gonna write the next chapter because I dont think you guys really understand it yet but unless I get atleast 2 reviews I wont post it ok well tata and onegai review! And the sakura in the morning part was to show that the fic is suppised to be alot like the show ok tata!
Prev for chapter 2!---"what should we do Tomoyo!!!!" "I dont think we should leave her and well I think we should bring her to my hous with us she might be sick!"....Later...."Were am I?" "your at my house and my name is.." the girl interrupted "its Tomoyo Daidoji right?" "how did you know my name??"----mwahahahahahah thats the preview for chap 2!
disclaimer:ok you all know that i dont own ccs or clamp stuff but I do own the characters Ami Suzuki, Hajime Amaya (sorry if those are your names), Sea Dew, and Navy Tear.
----This is my first chapter and will be my only chapter if you dont review!!!!!-----
-Summary(kind of)- Ok well this takes place when the gangs in 5th grade an meilin is gone to hong kong. Sakura has all the sakura cards but I changed it so Eriol is still with us! Well what happens is a human girl named Amy Suzuki (who does watch cardcaptor sakura!) get swept into the ccs world! ahhh please dont runaway yet dont worry im keeping everyone as in charcter as I can but note s+s e+t dont have feelings for each other yet but yes li does like sakura but she dont know yet! well on with the story!
----Chapter one----
A girl with wavy, a little-below-the-shoulder length, beach blonde hair walks onto the beach. She is about 5'4" with light tanned skin and sharp aqua blue eyes. She is wearing a loose white tanktop with navy blue shorts. As she walks on to the crowded beach a slight wind starts up. She walks down near the water looking around for her freinds. All of a sudden a the wind gets much stronger and a grey cloud looms closer in the sky. The girl starts to get a bit nervous and searches harder for her freinds. She looks towards the sea and see's a big lightning flash and then comes a loud thunder crash. People are yelling and trying to get off the beach and the girl panicks and runs frantically trying to find someone she knows so she can get a ride home. Then the wind gets even stronger and more lightning comes. Then all of the sudden the girl screams as a bolt of lightning struck her. She heard people screaming and then everything went black.
She felt the slightest sensation of pain as her eyes fluttered open. She thought to herself as she stared at a starry night sky "am I in heaven?". She slowly sat up and realised she was lying in a park. The thing she saw next made her pinch herself to make sure she wasnt dreaming. She slowly looked up at what she knew very well was called the "king penguin". She recognized her surroundings as a show she used to watch called cardcaptor sakura. She fainted out of shock.
RING RING RING RING... A small yellow cat like plush toy with white wings, beady black eyes and a tiny black nose floated over to the alarm clock and yelled
"SAKURAAAA!!"
"HOEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!" Yelled a startled 5th grade girl we all know so well as she sat up from bed. She has short auburn hair and clear emerald green eyes and her name is Sakura Kinomoto.
"Gosh! Kero I would have woken up, you didnt have to yell all of the sudden like that!" said an angry but still sleepy Sakura.
"ya I'm sure you would have woken up" whispered Kero.
"Well I better get ready for school now that I'm up" mumbled Sakura.
Kero floated into his bottom drawer in sakuras desk.
Sakura ran downstairs in her school uniform with her backpack on and said "Ohayo!"(good morning) She put down her bag and sat down at the table to eat her breakfast.
"Ohayo Kaiju"(kaiju-monster) said Touya Sakuras older brother who was also sitting at the table eating breakfast. "I am not a kaiju, onee-san!"(onee-san-big brother) yelled Sakura angrily with her fist up and an angry mark thingy on her fist.
"Ohayo Sakaura-san" said Fujitaka, Sakuras father as he walked into the room with an apron on.
As Sakura finished her meal she said "Oto-san (dad) I'm going to meat Tomoyo-chan in the Penguin Park and walk with her to her house after school okay!"
Fujitaka said "Thats fine"
Touya got up and walked to the door with his bag and said "Itekimas(ill be going)"
"hoooeeeeeee! wait onee-chan!"
Sakura got up from the table and went to put her rollers blades on. She opened the door and yelled cheerfully "Itekimas" She took off and headed towards her brother.
The girl grogily sat up and knew that soon people would be coming to the park and she didnt want to be seen yet. So she dragged herself of into the nearby woods and went to sleep.
Sakura sat in her seat as homeroom started. A male teacher came in and his name is Mr. Terada.
"Today we have a new student from the other side of Japan (couldnt think of anywere else :p) Please welcome him class." spoke Mr. Terada.
A boy about Li's height with blue green hair (short obviously!) that hung down a bit near his left eye (like Oujiroh in Angelic layer) and soft blue green eyes.
Mr. Terada wrote his name on the board. It said Hajime Amaya.
"Konnichiwa(hello) my name is Hajime Amaya and....(he says the stuff new kids usually say)"
"Well Amaya why dont you sit in the seat in front of Kinomoto, Kinomoto please stand up." spoke Mr. Terada and then Sakura stood up.
Hajime walked over to the seat infront of Sakura and as she sat down he gave her a freindly smile and sat down.
Throughout the day Hajime, Tomyo, Sakura, Syoran, and Eriol all became freinds. Hajime was a very nice soft spoken boy who was also rather polite.
Later at the end of school Sakura and Tomoyo said goodbye to the others and headed towards Tomyos house. They decides to stop by Penguin Park on the way as they heard a loud sneez and then a cough. They looked towards the forest curiously.
"Hooeeee Tomoyo-chan I think theres a ghost" whimpered Sakura as she clung onto Tomoyos back.
"Sakura I dont think its a ghost, I think we should go check and see if this person is alright" said Tomoyo softly
They walked into the woods a couple of feet and stopped dead in their tracks. There was a girl lying on the ground....
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Ok well I think right now Im gonna write the next chapter because I dont think you guys really understand it yet but unless I get atleast 2 reviews I wont post it ok well tata and onegai review! And the sakura in the morning part was to show that the fic is suppised to be alot like the show ok tata!
Prev for chapter 2!---"what should we do Tomoyo!!!!" "I dont think we should leave her and well I think we should bring her to my hous with us she might be sick!"....Later...."Were am I?" "your at my house and my name is.." the girl interrupted "its Tomoyo Daidoji right?" "how did you know my name??"----mwahahahahahah thats the preview for chap 2!