Ok, This is my first go at fanfiction so I have now gone back and edited the first few chapters for better punctuations. Thanks to those who reviewed and any constructive criticism welcome!
Ginny lay, hidden by the undergrowth, crawling slowly towards the noise… She could hear laughter coming from a clearing, it didn't sound nice.
She was scared of what lay up ahead but this was what she was prepared for when she offered to take part in the war.
Finally she was close enough to hear what the hooded form was saying:
"You're nothing but a failure. You're worthless. I enjoyed finishing your mother, now the dark lord has allowed me the pleasure of ending your sorry life… and don't expect it to be a pleasant end either."
He flicked his wand out and sent the Crucio spell flying towards the form tightly curled in a foetal position on the floor. The victim of the agonising spell jerked uncontrollably but didn't make a sound.
"Come on… scream for your life. The more you fight against me the more I will hurt you. I want to hear you beg for my mercy."
Ginny couldn't take any more of this; she slowly withdrew her wand, crept out from her hiding place and spelled the hooded person with a stupefy before he was even aware of her presence. She quickly bound him and muttered a small spell so that her people could track his position and capture him.
She leant over the now still form and gently reached out her hand "you're safe for now, come with me and I'll take you somewhere safe."
"Leave me." Came a strangled male voice from under the hood.
"Don't be a fool, there are more where he came from, they're killing anyone who opposes them."
In barely a whisper the man said "I deserve to die."
Ginny was shocked "don't say that. No one deserves to die. Not like that!"
"I do." The man slowly stood up and pulled back his hood revealing a pointed chin, thin bloodless lips, cold grey eyes and finally white-gold hair.
"Malfoy!"