This is a previous story I have on quizilla but as I upload it here it is totally different from the way it is written on quizilla. I will be revising each chapter that I had previously written and put it up here. I want it to make more sense and be a little more mature and better written to match with the new chapters I have written. This story will follow the manga until Sasuke's betrayal after which it goes into my own little arc. Ok well I hope you guys enjoy this and if you had read this before I hope you enjoy this revised version. Yay for revisions!
The 18 Year Old Genin; Enishi Ooedo
The Hokage stared out the large window of his office. His hands held behind his back he looked over his shoulder to a silver haired jounin.
"Her name is Yui Enishi Ooedo she prefers the name Enishi. She's eighteen, she should have been jounin at the age of twelve but she is still a genin. Kakashi I want you to look after her training. It seems no other sensei wants to take her." The Hokage sighed heavily and fully turned to face Kakashi. The silver haired jounin looked at the Hokage in confusion.
"So why me?" Kakashi asked.
"I feel you are the most suitable candidate. A genius must train a genius I should say." the Hokage said with a smile
"So basically what you are saying is once I pass a cell she will join and I will have an extra body to train?" The hokage nodded his head in agreement, Kakashi sighed heavily and rubbed his temples.
"All right then." Kakashi bowed and left the office; he headed toward the woods to a clearing where the 18 year old genin was always known to be at. Upon reaching the clearing he spotted a young woman with long blue hair past her knees by just a bit: fair seemingly flawless skin at least from the distance he was standing away from her: her golden eyes glinted under the sun. She wore a pair of baggy black pants and a tight white muscle shirt showing off her curved waist and full breasts. Kakashi placed a hand over his masked face. "Shit what kind of thoughts are those?" he questioned himself out loud. Taking a seat on the grass he watched her train for a bit. "Ninjutsu's perfect, I have to test out her genjutsu but her taijutsu is flawed she has no grace and she seems off balance." he said observing her every move. She stopped her training for a second and pulled off her shirt. Kakashi turned his gaze towards the ground. "At least she's wearing a sports bra." he glanced at her and quickly stood up. He wiped away the imaginary dirt from the front of his pants. "Right I should just confront her." sighing he walked toward the young girl. "Yo." She turned around to see the silver haired jounin walking toward her smiling.
"What do you want?" she asked gruffly. He sighed and shook his head.
'She's going to be tough.' he thought. "I'm here to take you on as my student. That answer your question?" he asked. Looking at her she had folded her arms across under her breasts and pushing them up a bit. He cleared his throat and quickly turned his gaze to her eyes.
"Student? Why now all of a sudden? That old man Hokage should have given me a sensei long ago, WHY WAIT SIX YEARS TO GIVE ME ONE!?" she yelled.
"Don't look at me." he said placing his hands up in defense. "Hokage-sama said to me you have issues with authority and every other candidate for a sensei would not agree to take you on." he leaned back on his left leg and lifted his eyebrow. She sigh and trudged toward the sliver haired jounin.
"Fine, I'll be your student, you be my sensei." she poked his chest. "Do you have a cell yet?" she asked.
"No, I haven't passed anyone, I should be getting potential candidates tomorrow." He rubbed his temples, she stared up at him.
"What?" He asked.
"You have strong Chakra, I would love to steal it." she said whilst licking her lips. Kakashi blushed luckily his mask hid the annoyance from her view.
"Huh?" he questioned dumbly.
"Didn't you know? I'm a Chakra stealer!" she said with pride. He glanced down at her chest for a second before returning his gaze to her eyes. "Ah sensei is pervert. I'm only 18 you know. How old are you sensei?" she asked, a wicked smirk graced her lips. Kakashi cleared his throat and shook his head.
"22. Look you may act this way with others but I'm your sensei. No sexual innuendos or I could get fired." he said while looking away from her.
"Why won't sensei look me in the eyes? Is it because I'm not wearing a shirt?" she asked. He placed a finger to her forehead and pushed her. She fell to the ground; looking up at him in surprise he just smiled down at her. "No fair sensei!" she whined. He leaned down towards her; their faces just inches away from each other. A blush was evident on her face but Kakashi said nothing.
"Your taijutsu needs work." he said with a chuckle.
She sat on top of a roof with Kakashi while they waited for his genin candidates to arrive. He turned to look at her she was wearing the same exact outfit as the day before only the colors were swapped. She noticed he was staring and a wicked smile played on her lips.
"What's that smile for?" he asked.
"I just didn't know sensei was so attracted to me." she said. He sighed heavily and shook his head.
"And you wondered why no one else would take you on as a student." he looked down at her, she was pouting. He decided to take the conversation in a different direction. "So you can absorb Chakra at will?" he asked. She stopped pouting and sat up straight she had an innocent look in her eyes and nodded her head furiously.
"Yup! And if I want I can give it to someone else with a kiss! It has to be someone I care for though, if not the chakra will evaporate within a twenty-four hour period!" she exclaimed.
"I see, so a family member, a lover, or a friend?" he asked himself more than her.
"Yup all of those will work, or a sensei!" she chuckled noticing the look in Kakashi's eye. She turned to look up at the sky. He chuckled and stood up, he turned to face toward the city.
"So is this chakra stealing a kekei-genkai?" she turned to look at him and smiled.
"No, I found the jutsu in some old scroll. A useful jutsu especially for a female ninja. Low on chakra all she has to do is seduce a male enemy ninja and steal their chakra until her's fully recovers." He looked toward her and shook his head.
"Well aren't you up on your seduction style." She shrugged her shoulders.
"Comes in handy I guess I haven't tried it once yet though."
"With your taijutsu I can't see you getting past Chuunin so a high ranking mission where you would need that jutsu wouldn't come up." Kakashi chuckled, she growled and glared at him.
"Hey! What's taking them so long?!" she yelled. Kakashi smiled and pointed to the building opposite them.
"We're suppose to meet them on that rooftop." She stood up and looked at where he was pointing.
"You moron! What the hell are we doing here then?!" she yelled.
"Getting to know each other better?" He shrugged his shoulders and disappeared.
"Getting to know each other better' he says, what a joke, is he really a Jounin?" When she had reached the rooftop everyone was done introducing themselves; a blonde boy looked toward her and pointed.
"Hey, hey! Who's she?" Kakashi looked at her; she was glaring at the boy and pointing at him.
"HEY IT'S NOT POLITE TO POINT!" she yelled. Kakashi sighed, he softly pushed her hand down. "Then don't point yourself." She blushed and glare at her sensei. "Anyway, this is another teammate of yours Enishi Ooedo. So we will be a four man squad, lord Hokage made this decision so introduce yourself ." he turned to look at her.
"Well you already know my name, that's all you need to know. The longer we are together the more you'll get to know me." Kakashi sighed in frustration.
"All right then, tomorrow we'll start our training, make sure not to eat breakfast unless you want to throw up, we'll meet at 5:00 am, dismissed." He left, she lifted an eyebrow and turn to look at the team. 'Wow they're shrimpy, we got a love sick chick: an annoying blonde go figure: and the mysterious brooding dude. Whom is paying no attention to anything but to getting stronger. Hm, pink haired girl is trying to get brooding dude's attention. Heh, this is going to be fun.' She thought as she walked over to them and sat next to the boy with the black hair. "CUTIE!" She hugged him.
"Get off of me!" he yelled.
"Get off of my Sasuke!" the pink haired girl yelled. Enishi just smirked and kept her death grip on the poor boy.
I know I changed Kakashi's age by a lot but it's fanfiction manipulations galore! Yes with a computer and fingers maybe toes revise things to your liking! Muhahaha! Well looking this over it is much better than my previous version of it MUCH better. Hopefully I didn't leave anything from the previous version. Anywho I hope you guys enjoyed this. Oh by the way . . .
Disclaimer: I own nothing to do with Naruto, although Miss Enishi Ooedo belongs to me I came up with her within my twisted little mind and most likely a few more little people to come along yay!
