Hey everybody hope you read my practice story The car ride
I would like to say thank you to the two great comments I got that inspired me so
Thanks to you two
I'm posting my first chapter don't get to excited though I'm still not sure were I'm going with this and it could take a while but for now here's my first chapter. Trust me it took me a while I did get that I wanted more open conversations but still have the edge of not wanting to see each other as much so I tried my best
Chapter 1: The mistake of prison
"They execute traitors!"
Those were his last words and they echoed in my head for the rest of the day. How could I be so stupid why did I think someone who killed the most important person in moroi society would live?
The worst thing about this was that would die in the hands of the people I trusted. How could things have gone so wrong?
As I walked back to my cell so many painful questions came to mind especially one that could save me
"Who wants me dead?"
Without realizing it I felt tears run down my cheek but I didn't know what for was it for me losing everyone I cared about with no fault of my own
Or
That my life which I've been fighting so hard to keep was about to be over. Now what did I have to live for I know me being a guardian was finished, my best friend would eventually find another best friend someone that wouldn't abandon her for love and the man I loved the most wanted me out of his life forever.
What did it matter if I died?
Time seemed to pass in a haze because I really don't remember anything just the screaming of lissa wanting to see me. I began to escape this cloud of sadness when someone walked up to my cell though for a moment I thought it was a dream
Dimitri!
"what are you doing here I asked coldly but still trying to sound as polite as I can get, but he knew I wasn't in a good mood especially when he was around
"Rose I just wanted to know how you were doing" he said keeping that guardian composed face
"How I'm doing really is that really the best question to ask right now!" I said clearly he was holding back but why? "Roza" he started "will you stop calling me that! You have no reason to anymore!" I said
If he only showed his true feelings when he was mad then that was exactly what I would do to him.
"Seriously haven't you hurt me enough I mean really first you don't want me to talk to you then when I'm finally starting to worry on something more important you just crawl back into my life when you said you wouldn't
GOD!
Can't you just make up your mind I'm not always going to be here you know and now you better count the min your with me because there soon coming to a end!" as I finished I looked up into his eyes and I saw heart broken eyes just then I also saw his control snap
MISSION ACCOMPLISHED!
"Never say that again Roza you are not going to die I'll make sure of it you just have to trust me"
He regained his control CRAP!
Well let's try this again and for some cruel reason I felt good about this
"Trust you; trust you how can you honestly say still that because for some reason I still do. No matter how much I regret it I can't stop believing in you."
That wasn't what I was supposed to say I was supposed to make his control snap instead I just caught him off guard saying I still trust him.
GOD!
It's so hard to fight with him when there's a part that still loves him
"Roza I will get you out of here on that you can trust me, I wouldn't let you down"
I felt that a tear ran down my cheek
DAMMIT!
I turned away I couldn't I just couldn't keep thinking that he cared about me
"Go please!" I said
I knew in seconds I would break into tears and I couldn't let him see that. He noticed it and for my stability. He was about to leave before he whispered "I'll be back I'm not giving up on you your not alone." and with that he left I fell into a misery of pain and betrayal even though he said he would be with me
Now what I just wait and trust him
GREAT
I'm depending on him again and
I LIKED IT
What did you think it's not my best work but I think its good enough?
Plz comment
And if you have ideas plz share them with me I'll be glad to work with you
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I'll have the next chapter up soon
~Mari
P.s: Preger entertainment got the rights to the Vampire Academy so if you know how to get a hold of them TELL ME!
I wanna make sure this movie doesn't end up like twilight
And yes I'm interested on seeing that movie Vampires Suck it tempts me to see how twilight really is.