Okay well, first things first, I do not won One Piece! Only mi character (Kaida)

Well, this story was originally written in 2nd person but then I changed it to 3rd...so yea. It was a little difficult to write and im still trying to figure out what the twist is gonna be, but bear with me!thrusts fist into air

I need to know weather this is good enough or not to continue! So Please Please Review!! And also for those out there, I really suck at making chapter titles...so yea enjoy! :

Bar Day

Kaida sighed as she sat down on the stool and ordered a beer. Inari, the bar owner, went behind the counter, took out a glass, and poured the amber liquid into it.

"Here," he said and he slid it over to her.

"Thanks Inari," Kaida said as she caught it in one hand and drank it. He waved like it was nothing and started serving the other people. Kaida wondered at what was going to happen next when or if she got home.

That asshole father, thinking she's better than me!

She gulped down some of the beer and sighed long afterwards. A table on the side seemed to be making a lot of noise, and she looked over. It was a round table and there were 8 people on it. A man with blue hair, a deer with a blue nose, a guy with goggles on his forehead and a long nose, a girl with orange hair, another girl with black hair, a guy with green hair, and another guy with a straw hat.

Hmmm…they look familiar…

She skimmed over them and watched them laugh.

They must be lucky to be so free living

Kaida thought sadly.

"Wooo! Yey to a new Island!" said Luffy aloud. Everyone clanked their beer in the middle of the table and drank to their fullest.

"Oooo, there are many beautiful ladies here!" said Sanji looking around the bar.

"Don't get so full of yourself, ero-cook" said Zoro drinking his beer.

"What Lazy moss ass?"

"Lazy-oi, you wanna take this outside dart brow?"

"Is that supposed to be a threat?"

"Cut it out!" yelled Nami as she punched them both over the table.

"Matakun, can't you guys ever behave in public!" said Nami over them. Ussop and Chopper were snickering in the corner until they started to barge out laughing.

"You guys are such idiots! Getting Nami…ma…d…" they quieted down as they saw Nami's infuriating anger turn towards them.

"You guys might want to shut up for a while," said Franky looking at them and laughing. Robin smiled a little at watching everyone and then saw someone staring at them.

Hmm?

She looked at the girl who was looking at them. She had a sad smiled on her face.

Why does she seem sad for happiness?

Robin smiled and gave a small wave, but then the girl turned away.

"Who were you waving to?" asked Nami.

"Hmm? Oh, no one." She smiled and Nami just looked at the others again who were bickering again. Suddenly the door to the bar swung open and hit the wall hard. Everyone quieted down as a large man with black hair came in, with some more men behind him. Everyone looked at them as they slowly walked up to the counter. Ussop noticed a small treasure chest that the larger man was holding with one hand, though decided not to tell anyone because he didn't want to go against that guy, especially Nami.

"Oi Luffy!" don't steal my food!" yelled Ussop. And then the noise in the bar came alive again as the man sat at the counter and the others sat at the tables.

Kaida drank her beer silently as thinking about the wave the black haired woman gave her as a large man suddenly sat beside her. He didn't seem to mind that he was taking up his and half of her space.

"Oi, can you please keep to yourself?" Kaida asked hoping he would move. But the man just turned around smirked at her.

"Not enough room there eh?" he said smiling a toothy smile. His hand then flashed and threw her beer to the ground.

"Now…you should have some more," he said laughing. The men around him also started to laugh and she could feel the people sitting at the round table staring at her.

Ugh, why, why do I always have to hang back!

Kaida looked at the counter as everyone went to what they were doing. She mumbled scornfully at the man and wanted to get back at him. Kaida wasn't that strong and had been beaten already, something small should be good. She glanced at where his arm was and noticed a small chest.

That doesn't seem too important

Kaida brought her hand to it, making sure that the man wasn't looking, and slowly slid it over to her. It seemed too light to be holding gold, yet to heavy to be holding anything else. She wondered what was inside it when the chest finally reached her and she un-latched it, trying to not make much noise. Inside the chest, as she opened it, seemed to be a weird looking fruit.

Huh? What the hell is this?

She picked it up with one hand and looked at it curiously, there were weird designs that she couldn't really explain but it looked interesting.

I wonder if it tastes interesting

She brought the fruit to her mouth and took a large bite out of it.

Ugh!

The taste was…tasteless, Kaida wanted to spit it out, but didn't want to feel like a whimp, and she wanted to get back at the man. So she forced herself to eat the whole thing. She finally took the last bite of the fruit as the man's hand looked like it was reaching back for something. Only, his hand reached an empty spot and was fumbling around for a moment before he turned around fully.

"WHERE THE HELL DID THE CHEST GO!" he yelled loudly. The bar turned quiet again and all looked at him.

"THE CHEST WAS RIGHT HERE, WHERE DID IT-," the man suddenly stopped short as he saw the chest in front of Kaida and her sticking out her tongue as if the air tasted better.

"You know, that fruit was pretty disgusting, you're lucky I ate it for you," She laughed a little.

"You ate it?!" he said getting angry.

"Yea, wh-" but Kaida was cut off with a punch hitting her right on her cheek and with such a force that it made her crash into the wall.

Everyone was silent as the man yelled.

"THE CHEST WAS RIGHT HERE, WHERE DID IT-," but they saw that the man suddenly stopped and looked at the girl next to him.

"You know, that fruit was pretty disgusting, you're lucky I ate it for you," the girl laughed a little.

"You ate it?!" the man said getting angry.

"Yea, wh-" The crew suddenly saw the mans fist come down and smash into the girls face, sending her crashing into the wall.

"You Bitch! Spit it out!" yelled the man as he strode over to her. Luffy saw the girl was now bleeding from her forehead and the side of her mouth. She didn't move as the man picked her up from the front of her shirt and held her up.

"Spit it out," he said as he started to shake her. Luffy couldn't take it anymore, and as a gentleman always is, Sanji couldn't either. They stood up and started walking over to the girl who was being shaken.

"Spit it out!"

"Oi," Luffy put a hand on the mans shoulder making him stop his shaking.

"Stop it," said Luffy with-out any emotion.

"Stay out of this kid," said the man as he swiped Luffy's arm from his shoulder.

"Oi, he said stop," Sanji said, he noticed that the girls eyes now opened slowly and then shot open.

"Huh?!" she brought her hands up to the man shaking her and held onto it.

"SPIT IT OUT!"

Luffy finally had enough, shaking her when she couldn't fight, and then all because of a fruit she ate? It reminded Luffy of something, but he couldn't pin in on it. Luffy brought his hand back a bit and then punched the guy in the face; making him let go of the girl and Sanji catching her just before she hit the ground.

"Are you okay miss?" asked Sanji as he looked at the girl. The girl rubbed her eyes but then when they looked at Sanji, they widened. She started to squirm a bit in her arms and then stood up.

"Are you okay?" he asked again as she stood up. Luffy and the other guy were now in a fight where all Luffy was doing was holding down the guy and punching the living daylights out of him. The girl glanced at Luffy and then at Sanji.

"Uhh…uhhhhh," she suddenly seemed to get a bit scared and then she darted out of the bar.

"Hey wait!" said Sanji as she was running out the door. The crew looked at her and Nami went over to Luffy, pulling off from him punching the other guy.

"Come on! We have to go after her!" Nami said and the crew ran out of a loud bar. They looked down the street where Robin saw the girl turn. They started running in that direction, hoping that they would see her soon.

Thanx! Please Reivew 8