LIfes not always how it seems
Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter are two of the most popular people at Hogwarts. They're goimg out and everyone thinks that Lily has the perfect life, best friends, good family, and the perfect boyfriend, but it wasn't all true...
Chapter One
Lily Evans walked through the barrior onto platform nine and three quarters to start her 7th and final year at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry. She was head girl along with James Potter, her boyfriend of 5 years. They were easily the most popular people in the whole school. And of coure they were going out. Contrary to everyones belief James was definatly not the best boyfriend. He was rich like her but unlike her was very snobby and looked down on almost everyone. He sometimes ordered her around and never tried to listen to her. She tried to tell them what she felt but of course he never listened, he'd say later then just walk away of course later never came. Some people wouldn't have mind a relationship like that, but Lily wasn't like that she believed and love to speak her mind. James Potter wasn't always a jerk she had to remind herself, but she stilled wished he was just a little bit caring like he used to be. They were best friends for 2 years and then had been dating for the past 5 years. He had slowly become more and more snobby every year and Lily wasn't so sure that she liked him any more at all. She loved his best friends Remus Lupin, Peter Petegrew, (I hate him too but he was obvisusly nice wen he was younger or else they wouldn't have trusted him!!) and Sirius Black like brothers and they always took her side when James was to much of a jerk.
She was shaken out of her thoughts when she crashed into somebody. "Oh Sorry!!" she said and looked up. It was Sirius. "Oh Hey!!!" he said and they walked onto the train together. On the way everyone was gathered to a compartment except James. "Where's James?" asked Chanel one of Lily's best friends. "I'm not sure" answered Sirius. "I'm sure he'll be here really soon though" Just as he finished saying that James waked through the door.
Sorry y'all thats all I can write tonight.. um sorry for all the mistakes I'm in a hurry and sorry it is such a short chapter, the other ones will be longer i promise!! PLease Review, and could someone explain to me what a beta reader is? I really want to know what you think Flames are okay please tell me whats wrong with it though so i can maybe fix it, and please don't say anything about how short it is i already know!!
Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter are two of the most popular people at Hogwarts. They're goimg out and everyone thinks that Lily has the perfect life, best friends, good family, and the perfect boyfriend, but it wasn't all true...
Chapter One
Lily Evans walked through the barrior onto platform nine and three quarters to start her 7th and final year at Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizardry. She was head girl along with James Potter, her boyfriend of 5 years. They were easily the most popular people in the whole school. And of coure they were going out. Contrary to everyones belief James was definatly not the best boyfriend. He was rich like her but unlike her was very snobby and looked down on almost everyone. He sometimes ordered her around and never tried to listen to her. She tried to tell them what she felt but of course he never listened, he'd say later then just walk away of course later never came. Some people wouldn't have mind a relationship like that, but Lily wasn't like that she believed and love to speak her mind. James Potter wasn't always a jerk she had to remind herself, but she stilled wished he was just a little bit caring like he used to be. They were best friends for 2 years and then had been dating for the past 5 years. He had slowly become more and more snobby every year and Lily wasn't so sure that she liked him any more at all. She loved his best friends Remus Lupin, Peter Petegrew, (I hate him too but he was obvisusly nice wen he was younger or else they wouldn't have trusted him!!) and Sirius Black like brothers and they always took her side when James was to much of a jerk.
She was shaken out of her thoughts when she crashed into somebody. "Oh Sorry!!" she said and looked up. It was Sirius. "Oh Hey!!!" he said and they walked onto the train together. On the way everyone was gathered to a compartment except James. "Where's James?" asked Chanel one of Lily's best friends. "I'm not sure" answered Sirius. "I'm sure he'll be here really soon though" Just as he finished saying that James waked through the door.
Sorry y'all thats all I can write tonight.. um sorry for all the mistakes I'm in a hurry and sorry it is such a short chapter, the other ones will be longer i promise!! PLease Review, and could someone explain to me what a beta reader is? I really want to know what you think Flames are okay please tell me whats wrong with it though so i can maybe fix it, and please don't say anything about how short it is i already know!!