Sorry folks nothing new it's the exact same except that I fixed some grammatical errors people informed me about.

Disclaimer:

Question: What black and white and red all over?

Answer: I don't know but what I do know is that I don't own Naruto


She lied there on the floor

Slowly slipping away

I tried to call out

But couldn't find the words to say

I bristled at the self-inflicted wound upon her wrist

I racked my brain for answers

How could I have missed

The signs were all clear

But I chose to ignore

But she had seemed so normal

Walking through that door

An I love you see you later

I don't know when i'll come home

She pulled out her favorite picture of us

Here so you won't feel so alone

I must have looked confused

Because she laughed and then she smiled

Keep it close don't let it go

I'll be gone for quite awhile

I waved as she left

I never wondered why

It never crossed my thoughts

That this would be our last goodbye

I never should have let her

I knew I should have gone

But now it's far to late

And I'm left all alone

Her body had grown cold

From her wrist no blood would flow

Why had this happened

The reason I didn't know

What would I do now?

I could't lie

She was my reason for life

The only thing I could do was die

The same knife that took her life

I drove right through my heart

My life flashed before me

From the end to the start

Until all I could see was her smile

All I could hear was her laugh

I thought of how she accepted me

My future,present,and past

I probably could have stopped this

If I had come sooner

Using the last of my strength

I wrapped my arms around her

No use thinking What If now

The deed was already done

To this you'd think there was no upside

But truly there was one

I was to fucked up for heaven but not enough for hell

My lover was as well

But I think maybe there was somewhere

The in-betweeners dwelled

A sense of hope and peace

Filled the hole in my heart (literraly) : )

My breath became ragged and I held her close

As though we'd never be apart

I probably won't go to heaven

Or anywhere above

But at least I died

In the arms of my love


A/N: How was it? Is it better than the first version? Please let me know and check out my other stories Lilacs and Roses and Every breath I take.