Hey first story take all comments I change pov a lot hehe. I'm really annoying oh by the way the doctor's first name is Lucky it won't come up till later.
Percy's pov: The day I ended in here was well strange. I hated this place since the first time I was here. It started when I feel tingling in my hand so I went to the hospital…
"Mr. Jackson the doctor will be in a moment", was all I heard.
Well the doctor came in she was a good looking doctor (don't tell Annabeth which is still my girlfriend). She had light brown with bluish-greenish eyes they were like magic.
"Percy can you tell me exactly where it hurts" she said grabbing my hand.
"Well actually my hand just tingles".
"Oh I see…." I was worried what she was going to say cause she just started laughing "you know your hand just fell asleep." I never knew how that felt because I moved a lot.
"Oh thank the gods", the doctor just looked at me if I was crazy then the doctor looked at me and spoke "What did you just say 'thank the gods'?"
Doctor's pov: How did Percy know about their being Greek gods? I wondered if he knew my secret…. I just hope he doesn't know it's all I could ask for.
Percy's pov: "Um…." How could I cover this up? "Well I accidentally said gods not god you see". I just started to laugh to cover up my mistake. It was the best explanation I could give. I was a total seaweed brain maybe just like Annabeth says. Then the doctor started to laugh.
Doctor' pov: It was such a relief when he said it was a mistake but part of me thought he meant to say it. I looked at the clock it was almost time for me to go to my half-sister's place. I was so happy I haven't seen her since I was little; I used to live there with her. I loved her house and pets' especially her giunea pigs.
Percy's pov: The doctor looked at the clock then said "I have to go soon".
I knew it was none of my business "where are you going".
As soon as I said that a smile played on her face "oh I'm going to my sister's house".
"That sounds fun". She looked at me with a smile still on her face and said "yah, I love her giunea pigs "As soon as she said giunea pigs I remembered the summer when C.C turned me into one". It was just plain creepy.
read Ok first chapter I left some mysteries like where Annabeth is, who's the doctor's sister and where is Percy in the present time . Why did I name the doctor lucky? And yes I lovethat name because it is the name of my dog who is so unlucky but very cute. Hay you wanna comment and I may tell you the person I like. Probably not but still comment. No really comment do you think I'm kidding. If you comment I will update on the weekends if I can steal the computer from my brother… I will read your comments. In the next couple chapters I will need some characters so I'll put it up then. Tell me what you think might happen. And what is the doctor's secret or who is her half-sister? 3