Hi, this is my first ever fanfic, so please no flames. Please review and tell me what I can do to make it better. Thanks
I OWN NOTHING! Except the beautiful Yuki.
Right before the genin(sp?) test
Third-person P.O.V.
A small girl ran through a forest in the middle of a hot afternoon, the young girl was in bad shape. She was wearing only a white dress, which was torn, dirtied, and bloodied. The young female had chains around her ankles and wrists, and cuts and bruises all over her body. She also had whip lashes all over her back, and scares on her arms and legs. She was twelve years old, with shiny black hair that reached the back of her knees, and big black eyes full of tears. She was trying to get back to her home. She knew she was close she remembered coming here with her brother before she was taken. She closed her eyes and smoke her head, she was getting dizzy. Finally, she saw the gates she had dreamed of seeing for so long. She was finally back home.
At the gates of Konoha
Kotetsu and Izumo were having another boring day guarding the gates, that is until they saw her. A young girl came stumbling out of the forest and towards them. They instantly went to help her, as she was in bad shape. As soon as they reached her she collapsed, and Kotetsu caught her.
She was mumbling something, looking at the gates. They could barely make out what she was saying," I made it. I'm finally home..."and then she just trailed off. "Who are you?" asked Izumo, looking down at her. She looked up at them, with blurry eyes, and they could she was going to pass out soon." Yuki. Yuki... Uchiha." she answered. Then she passed out.
Both Kotetsu and Izumo looked at each other wide eyed. Then they looked at Yuki. Then back at each other. Then Kotetsu smirked, " So, she's finally come back." Then Izumo also smirked, " I'll bring her to the hospital, you go tell the Hokage." Kotetsu nodded and ran off. Izumo then teleported to the hospital and got a doctor to look after Yuki, while he went back to guard the gates.
At the Hokage office
The Hokage and Iruka were currently finishing up the last of their paper work, when Kotetsu burst into the Hokage's office. "Lord Hokage! I have some very important news!" he said. "Yes?" questioned the Hokage. "It's Yuki Uchiha! She's returned!" He shouted.
"Really!?" questioned Iruka. "Yes!," responded Kotetsu "Izumo just brought her to the hospital, because when she arrived she was in poor health." " Iruka, send word to Sasuke immediately. Kotetsu, go back to guarding the gate. Iruka, I will meet you at the hospital." the Hokage said, as he strode up to leave. Iruka and Kotetsu both bowed and left. Then the Hokage went to the hospital.
At Sasuke's house
Iruka ran to the door and banged on it to get Sasuke's attention. When Sasuke opened the door, he looked like he had just got done training. He was covered in dirt and sweat. "What are you doing here sensei? I was just about to go take a shower." he said. "No time! I have important news! Yuki has returned!" Iruka exclaimed. Sasuke stared at him, wide eyed, in disbelief, for a few seconds before quietly saying," Yuki?"