This my first ever fan fiction so I am up for criticism to help improve my work
chapter one
The pink bubble
The gang were standing around honey lemon's latest invention, a pink bubble.
"Ugh honey again really enough with your pink bubbles," Gogo scowled popping her gum,
"Hey maybe it's different from the last seventy times," Fred sneered.
Hiro saw honey lemon's face drop at those comments and told the to shut up. Wasabi was not to keen on the expolonig pink bubbles and ask to be excused but shut up when Hiro gave him a death glare.
"Go ahead honey show us you experiment," Hiro said trying he really his hardest to sound interested but wasn't,
"Okay," honey replied in her usual bubbly tone, "I present to you, Project Fog," And gestured to the giant bubble,
"Project fog," Gogo sneered, "Great name," Honey lemon shot a glare to Gogo as if to say shut up,
"Please put on these goggles and make sure they're tight enough," She announced handing everyone a pair. At this point Hiro had lost interest knowing this was going to be the same as last time. Once everyone had their goggles on Honey lemon pressed a large red button and the Pink orb exploded. However this was different from the last seventy times, no this one lingered around for ages with out clearing. The goggles were different to instead of just protecting their eyes they helped them see people and things through the fog.
"What do you think? Smog bombs is what I call them," Honey said excitement building up inside her,
"This is awesome!" Hiro exclaimed with excitement in his voice,
"Yeah," the rest of the team agreed.
And with that Honey Lemon pushed the button again and all the fog disappeared and formed back into a ball. The gang stood there amazed at what Honey lemon had made,
"Honey that was by far the best science experiment ever I loved it!" Hiro exclaimed and the rest of the team agreed.
"Who's up for some food at the lucky cat? I'm buying!" Wasabi said with excitement in his voice. The big hero 6 agreed and left the university to go to the lucky cat café, home of the most amazing doughnuts you will ever eat.
Just as they were about to leave Hiro remember that he had to pick up a book professor Albeertine wanted him to look at so he told the gang to go a head and he'll catch up later.
"Here you are young genius," The Professor chocked with a smile,
"Thanks I'll be sure to read it," Hiro replied and head out the door with smile.
As he headed back to the café a man around 26 stopped him in his tracks,
"Well, well, well, What do we have here?" The man replied. the smell of cigars and alcohol filled Hiro's nose and he knew he was in trouble.
"Yes, yes you will do nicely for the boss," The man said admiring the young boy that stood before him, "Not to fat but a bit scrawny but that shouldn't matter," He stated still eyeing Hiro, "Yeah the boss should be very pleased with you," And with that he held a rag up to Hiro's mouth before he could protest and knocked him out.
Sorry for the short first chapter but I will try to up date soon. Please tell me how I did and I am up for criticism so don't be afraid to hate on it. Thanks and see you soon.