This is my first fic and I'm feeling excited. Constructive criticism is welcome. So this is about the scene in Rogue where Otto is controlled by Overlord and he's swinging the pipe at Wing's head after Wing threw his amulet to Laura. I think that in the book it said, " the momentary distraction was all that he needed, he swung the pipe at Wing's head." and then Wing still got hit but not with the full force because he dodged but he was "fighting to stay conscious". Well this fic is about what if he hadn't been able to dodge in Otto's point of view.