Author's Note:
It's weird, really. The title, this whole silly sappy thing, maybe it doesn't connect. Maybe it does. Okay, maybe it isn't sappy too. Just came upon me when I was doddling on my writing pad. I didn't plan on it to turn out this way, just added the last part to end it, so it's a little weird. I was never a good writer anyway.
Well, please tell me what you think of it, really, you never know how much I appreciate reviews, be it mean, nice or anything. It's as if it were gbook entries, one can never get enough of them, though I get few. Well, for all Rukawa fans, do visit my Rukawa Shrine: Super Rookie at http://liquid2k.com/rukawa. Enough of my rants.
Edit Rants:
Oh yeah, btw I edited the last part. I decided I didn't really like it Mitko. Because I *really* liked to have Mitsui all to myself. Okay, honestly, I didn't like the ending. I found it a little abrupt and so decided maybe adding Kogure inside would be good, but after Nellie's review, yeah, I decided against it, even more so. So here it is. I think I'm gonna re-edit this whole thing again. Because it's badly written.
AC(ac2_11@yahoo.com)
Escape
To escape
the depths of
... the dark alleyway
Come catch me
... as i fall
Fall in the depths
of the unknown - love.
Love.
As if it's magic
As if it touches
As if it feels
As if it reaches out
... to me, like a soft caress
I feel those delicate fingers
Upon my skin
As if they were dancing,
Playing, wanting, yearning, needing
Reaching out...
As they disappeared, vanished...
But were they even there?
Illusions?
Perhaps.
It wouldn't be when
When...
But I don't know when
When I would be able
Be able to say
Be able to admit
Be able to let you in on my little secret
that I...
I love you.
...Aishiteru.
Mitsui Hisashi
It's weird, really. The title, this whole silly sappy thing, maybe it doesn't connect. Maybe it does. Okay, maybe it isn't sappy too. Just came upon me when I was doddling on my writing pad. I didn't plan on it to turn out this way, just added the last part to end it, so it's a little weird. I was never a good writer anyway.
Well, please tell me what you think of it, really, you never know how much I appreciate reviews, be it mean, nice or anything. It's as if it were gbook entries, one can never get enough of them, though I get few. Well, for all Rukawa fans, do visit my Rukawa Shrine: Super Rookie at http://liquid2k.com/rukawa. Enough of my rants.
Edit Rants:
Oh yeah, btw I edited the last part. I decided I didn't really like it Mitko. Because I *really* liked to have Mitsui all to myself. Okay, honestly, I didn't like the ending. I found it a little abrupt and so decided maybe adding Kogure inside would be good, but after Nellie's review, yeah, I decided against it, even more so. So here it is. I think I'm gonna re-edit this whole thing again. Because it's badly written.
AC(ac2_11@yahoo.com)
Escape
To escape
the depths of
... the dark alleyway
Come catch me
... as i fall
Fall in the depths
of the unknown - love.
Love.
As if it's magic
As if it touches
As if it feels
As if it reaches out
... to me, like a soft caress
I feel those delicate fingers
Upon my skin
As if they were dancing,
Playing, wanting, yearning, needing
Reaching out...
As they disappeared, vanished...
But were they even there?
Illusions?
Perhaps.
It wouldn't be when
When...
But I don't know when
When I would be able
Be able to say
Be able to admit
Be able to let you in on my little secret
that I...
I love you.
...Aishiteru.
Mitsui Hisashi