This is my first multi-chapter fic, so feel free to provide any feedback or constructive criticism. Enjoy!
John Laurens stood with his men, all gripping their guns tightly. Before them were dozens of British troops, all prepared to slaughter the revolutionaries. John felt a sickening feeling in the pit of his stomach. Something wasn't right, he knew that. Still, there was no way he could let his troops down. Lifting his gun, he raised his chin, preparing to give the command.
"Wait!" cried a voice, cutting through the chilly winter air. Turning to look, John saw a young soldier riding towards them, his blond hair flowing out behind him. As the soldier neared them, John recognized a look of fear on his face, but his horse did not slow.
As the soldier pulled in between the two enemy armies, he pulled his horse to a stop, swinging himself off. Gasping for breath, the soldier breathlessly said. "Wait! I've come bearing important news from General Washington."
Gasps from both armies were heard as the both sides strained to hear what the young man was saying. Taking a deep breath, the soldier said finally "the British have surrendered. The war is over! We won!"
At first, there was silence. Then, all that once, the soldiers behind John began to cheer. Dropping his gun, John stepped forward and embraced the young soldier, practically crying in relief. The soldier froze in shock, then hugged him back. John felt an overwhelming sense of happiness and relief. The American colonies were colonies no more. They had done it. General Washington had done it. His friends, Hercules and Lafayette, had done it. Alexander had done it.
Several months later
Dearest Alexander,
As you know, since our victory against the British I have been taking this time in London to finish my studies and to get to know my daughter, Frances Eleanor. She is a very bright young lady, and I feel a deep remorse for how alone she has been since my wife passed away. I trust that, as a father yourself, you understand my pride in my little girl.
It shall please you to know that, after finishing my studies here, I plan to return to New York to pursue a career in law, as wished by my father. My time apart from you has pained me greatly, and when I return we shall see if I cannot find a suitable place of residence near you. I am greatly overjoyed, as I hope you will find yourself to be as well, at the thought of being with you in person as opposed to through these infrequent letters. I hope you have been truthful in your promises of a continued relationship as we had in our younger years.
Give Eliza my regards.
Yours sincerely,
John Laurens
Well, that's all for this chapter. I know I kept it pretty PG, but just a heads up, there will be smut next chapter. Feel free to comment any ideas, opinions, or random historical facts you think I should know. See ya!