Hi, FanFiction people. I don't know if I'm adding this comment right, as this is my first story. Anyways, I'm not a very good writer, but I decided to try my hand at writing something.
Before I started this, I was scouring for an Amazing Race fanfic, but I couldn't find any. There was no such topic. I also liked Pokemon, so I tried my luck at finding a good Pokemon story. It just so happened that Platrium, another author, had just updated a crossover story between Mario Kart and Pokemon. To be honest, when I read it, I was very overwhelmed by all the characters in the story, but I went on his/her profile and found a Pokemon/Amazing Race crossover. I read the first three chapters, and I immediately favorited the story.
I then decided that I would try to do the same.
With this intro, I'm not entirely done. I am almost done with the first leg, but I feel like it's too long. I know that I'm not a good writer, but tell me how you like this. My characters might be bland or all one personality, so just heads up. Also, go check out Platrium's stories. I really liked them and I'm pretty sure you will too.
Ugh. Why isn't my computer uploading things?
"Welcome to the first season of our very own Pokemon version of The Amazing Race! I am your host, Maya Marina," said a sweet-sounding Manaphy. "The first leg starts here in the Battle Maison, located in Kiloude City of the Kalos Region. Kiloude City is known for its diversity of Pokemon, from Flabebes to Ferroseeds, all kinds of Pokemon are found here. The Battle Maison is where strong pokemon from all over the world come to battle each other for fame and prizes. There are 11 teams this season, and they are making their way by foot here onto the battle mat. These 11 teams are: "
Minun and Plusle – Melissa and Felipe. Cousins and Best Friends
"We tend to be known as the most hyper family of our hometown, back in Mauville of Hoenn," piped Felipe the Plusle.
"Yeah! People tell us we're so bubbly and energetic, and we think that will help us get far in this race," added Melissa.
"And no matter how hard the task is, we'll never give up," Felipe said.
"Oh! I still can't believe we're in this race!" Melissa started to cheer and bounce around.
Pikachu and Pachirisu – Paxon and Paige. Dating
"We are so lucky to be in this race. We've been dating for ten months now," Paige informed. "This race will definitely strengthen our relationship."
"This is a once in a lifetime opportunity. Looks like I've hit the jackpot again!" Paxon the Pikachu proclaimed.
"Again?" Asked the Pachirisu.
"Yup. The first time was when I met you back in Sinnoh," answered Paxon.
Paige blushed. "Oh Paxon. This is why I love you so much."
Paige hugged Paxon and gave him a quick peck on the lips.
Aron and Larvitar – Adam and Lance. Roommates
"We're roommates and football players from the Sinnoh region." Adam said.
"Yeah. We go to Eterna University. Adam is majoring in accounting, while I'm majoring in culinary."
"We definitely aren't the fastest team, but we sure are sturdy." Adam said.
"And I can cook," added Lance.
"Yes. And I can count!"
Kirlia and Buneary – Keowee and Betsy. Models
"I'm Keowee the Kirlia and my friend here is Betsy the Buneary."
"We think our beauty will get us far in the race," announced Betsy.
"After all, we're models. I think beauty can really come in handy because we can ally with someone else," the Kirlia said.
"We only have one condition though," said Betsy.
"They have to be cute!" said the pair in unison.
Machoke and Vigoroth – Max and Victor. Movers
"We may look like bodybuilders but we are actually movers," said the Vigoroth.
"We got stronger and stronger from moving all those sofas and TVs around," said Max, chuckling.
"I got a brief look at all the other teams and we are by far the strongest looking," said Victor.
"I feel like that might be bad, though. We might be seen as threats," Max said to Victor.
"But we also might look more appealing to future allies too," said Victor.
Oshawott and Marill – Joshua and Matt. Swimmers
"We're Joshua and Matt, swimmers from Dewford City, Hoenn."
"I hope we go somewhere watery," said Joshua.
"And I hope we aren't racing dumb people," said Matt.
"That's rude!" said Joshua.
"But I'm sure you were thinking it.." retorted Matt.
"..." "Anyways, we love this show, and we hope to meet Raffael someday, so we can have a race!" ended Joshua.
Piplup and Torchic – Payton and Tiffany. Singers
"We're Payton and Tiffany, a cappella singers from Twinleaf University."
"Even though Twinleaf is a small town, Treble Trouble, our a cappella group, is the best in the Sinnoh region," said Payton the Piplup.
"And we're going to be the best team on the Amazing Race," Tiffany confidently said.
"We don't know that yet," said Payton, turning to Tiffany.
"Just be confident, Payton," Tiffany replied, rolling her eyes.
"I"m being realistic. There's a difference."
Jolteon and Glaceon – Jason and Gaby. Siblings
"We're siblings from Eterna City in Sinnoh," said Jason.
"We're one year apart from each other, and we go to the University," said Gaby.
"I'm a junior and Gaby's a sophomore."
"Jason said that he recognizes the Aron from our university, but I'm not really sure what he's talking about."
"Well, that's because you weren't at football tryouts, obviously," said Jason.
"Anyways, this race will really strengthen our bond. We're pretty close, and this is just a really big adventure to go on," said Gaby.
"Yeah. We're so pumped to do this," said Jason.
Lucario and Nuzleaf – Luke and Nico. Male Models
"We've got beauty and brawn. We know that we're going to win," boasted Luke with confidence.
"Yeah, and anyways, if Amazing Race doesn't work out for us, we could always apply for Survivor," said Nico.
"Don't say that, we're going to win, and we're going to stomp on anyone who tries to stop us!" exclaimed Luke.
"Haha.. yeah!" said Nico, shakily. "We're bloodthirsty."
Ponyta and Girafarig – Jennifer and Victoria. Runners
"We run," said Victoria the Girafarig.
"Yeah. That will definitely help us in the race," said Jennifer the Ponyta.
"And alliances are definitely key to our success," started Victoria.
"Because we know for a fact that we can beat them!" ended Jennifer.
Absol and Amaura – Alfred and Adrianna. Ice Skaters
"We're ice skaters from Snowpoint City." started Alfred.
"We believe that trust is the one key thing that is needed in the race," said Adrianna.
"Yeah. I'm not about to get u-turned today," said Alfred.
"Well, you're OBVS not going to get u-turned today, Alfred. This is the first leg," Adrianna corrected.
"Uhmm.. you never know what can happen on the race, Adrianna." said Alfred.
The teams have arrived at the battle mat. Facing the entrance of the Battle Maison, they are patiently waiting for Maya to speak.
Maya took a deep breath, and then began to speak. "In a few minutes, y'all will start the journey of the race around worlds. The race is split up into twelve legs, each with tasks that you need to complete. After completing all the required tasks in a leg, teams will go to a pit stop, where they will have a rest period. The first team to check in on this first leg will receive two express passes. An express pass may be used to finish a detour or a roadblock. The winning team must hand over the express pass by the fourth leg, and both express passes must be used before the start of the eighth leg. The first team to cross the finish line will win one million pokedollars!"
The teams cheered, and Maya continued speaking, "But, unfortunately, only three teams will make it to end and have a chance of winning that money." She let that sink in for a moment.
"Your first clue is at the entrance of the Battle Maison, where your backpacks are as well. When I say "Go", you may run over to your bags, read the clue, and start your journey. Is everyone ready?" There was clapping, cheering, and interspersed "Yes!" 's throughout the room.
"The world is waiting for you… Good Luck… Travel Safe… GO!"
End of Chapter ONE!