Secret Is Key
What's up everybody! I'm trying a variety of new categories and types of writing. Um, my last short, complete story- Invisible Lies, only got 1 review, by my best friend. Lol. So, I have 2 questions. First, WHERE ARE YOU GUYS? And second, am I just not good at that writing style, or what? I am pleased with that one, but I guess you guys aren't? I dunno, so REVIEW and tell me! Flames accepted, because, hey. Without flames, there'd be no good stories. Thanks! Here we go…
"Hi, Beck!" Tori came up, cheerily.
"Oh, hey. What's up?" I replied.
"Nothing, just flaunting my script in the air… like this…" She said, waving a script in my face dramatically. Wait, what is that title? I snatched the thick packet from her hand. The Light At Dawn- what I thought.
"Oh my God, The Light At Dawn? Seriously? You got the part… You never even told me you auditioned! Tori?" I excitedly asked.
'Yeah, well… I forgot." She laughed, and I easily saw through her lie. For someone who got a lead role in new movie, she's a terrible liar…
"Uh huh?" I asked expectantly.
"Well… Um, I didn't exactly get the part… yet." She said slowly.
"Um? What? But, you have the whole script…"
"Yeah. Actually, they couldn't find anyone good enough for the lead male part… That's why I wanted to talk to you!"
"Really? You think I could make it?"
"Of course! But, there is just one thing… uh, it might make things just a bit awkward…"
"Uh, um, yes?"
"Well, um. The girl's part kind of… just sort of… is the boy part's love interest. There's a few kissing scenes, and stuff…"
"Oh. Well, I think that, we are both actors. Right? So… let's just… act. And anyways, we have stage- kissed before…"
"I guess that's right… yeah, okay. But… Jade?" She didn't have to explain anything, I understood.
"We could… keep it a secret? She doesn't have to know."
She sighed, "I was afraid that was the only answer… But, it's totally worth it! I mean, this is a huge chance for both of us and… we can't just not do it."
"Okay then. Consider us already dead, then because we are keeping a huge secret from Jadelyn West."
"Yup, dead…" She repeated nervously, sliding a finger across her neck, motioning her death.
"Alright. Uh, meet you at my truck after school?"
"Jade's not catching a ride with you?"
"No, her brother is picking her up… going to a family reunion, I think. So, I'll see you later, then."
"Yeah. I'll have Trina go home alone. Bye!" She waved over her shoulder, smiling a breath- taking smaile my way. Wait… did I just think that?
Sorry it is SO short, but the first chapters are usually shorter- they are just kicking off the story. I will update this story Every Tuesday, but I will need 5 more reviews for me to UPDATE! So, for me to update next Tuesday, I will NEED 5 reviews. If I do not get those reviews, I will not update until I DO get them. If I get TEN more reviews, I will update on Tuesday AND Friday. SO. REVIEW. NOOOW!