Qt-neko89: this is my first time writing a fan fic so be very honest if it
sucks I want to know please review
Untouchable:
"Where are we?" Kagome asked
"I dunno" Inu Yasha replied, "I was following Miroku"
"ME!" Miroku yelled, "I have no clue where we are it looks like an uncharted forest"
"Well someone has to know where we are" Sango put in.
"Inu Yasha I'm scared" shippou whined.
"Shut up little brat I smell something" Inu Yasha snapped at the small demon.
"A demon?" ask Kagome.
"Yeah a strong one too" Inu commented on.
"I know exactly where you are" a voice replied from the trees.
Everyone looked up immediately. Sango gasped as she saw the demon in the tree.
"Amonru!" She yelled with disgust.
"Ya know this demon." Inu asked sago.
"Sadly yes, I killed almost all of her demon kind" Sango replied to Inu's question.
"Not jus most of my kind," Amonru said jumping down from the tree. "All of my kind I am the only one left, you killed my brother before my very eyes" Amonru added as well.
"little Inu Yasha how dare you not remember me?"
"H...h....h...how do you know me" Inu Yasha stuttered, asking confused.
"You don't even remember me?" Amonru said shaking her head. "When we where little I used to watch you in the village trying to fit in" "heh, nice try" she said wiping her cheek. "I knew what you where a half breed mutt.... then I later on met you brother he was smarter, stronger, as a matter or fact better then you, but that never changed a thing I still... had a crush on you...YOU DISSCUSSTING LITTLE HALF BREED!.... Why did I have to go back and save you, you should have drowned, we where young you probably don't even remember" she seem to be frustrated and upset as she told her story.
Inu Yasha tough long and hard.....
flash back:
I was running away I tripped and fell into a river. I could not swim all by my self drowning and all the villagers just laughed they didn't try to save me... I remember someone jumping in the I saw your face.
Out of flash back
"It's all too clear" Inu Yasha said still in a daze.
"So you remember now" Amonru said satisfied, "I am older now not so foolish"
The beautiful silver eyed long black haired demon's face changed from anger to a softer look.
"I have found someone much better now..." she trailed off.
"Aww man!" said Miroku
Sango looked at him weird.
"Who is this love of yours" Kagome asked.
"His name is Sesshomaru" she said delighted Kagome asked.
"YOU LOVE MY BROTHER!!!" Inu Yasha yelled discussed.
"Yes I do.." "But that is beyond the point" her face went more serious now. "I too seek Naraku, let me join you" Amonru replied.
"Piff, no way" Inu Yasha grumbled.
"Why not Inu Yasha it will be a great help I think having one and a half demon around" Miroku said.
"you're in" Kagome smiled.
Amonru herself smiled a little, she winked at Miroku and told everyone that she knew the woods very well "they are called the wood of the sleeping dragon" she boasted as to throw it in Inu Yasha's face. Then she spent some time evilly glaring at Sango.
"I don't like the way she's glaring at me" Sango whispered to Miroku.
"Inu Yasha I feel a shikon jewel near by" Kagome said. Inu Yasha sniffed the air "Koga" He growled.
Then Inu and Amonru ran through the trees
"listen girl I don't need your help" Inu Yasha said
"Nor do I need yours I too wish to collect the shikon jewels for my Sessy and I can do it when ever I want to your not going to stop me" Amonru replied
"Sessy?" Inu Yasha said as to make fun of her
"Shut up we're close!" Amonru snapped.
They turned around a dip in the trees and saw Koga out of breath and a very large beast on the ground.
Qt-neko89: well that's my first chapter please review!!!
Untouchable:
"Where are we?" Kagome asked
"I dunno" Inu Yasha replied, "I was following Miroku"
"ME!" Miroku yelled, "I have no clue where we are it looks like an uncharted forest"
"Well someone has to know where we are" Sango put in.
"Inu Yasha I'm scared" shippou whined.
"Shut up little brat I smell something" Inu Yasha snapped at the small demon.
"A demon?" ask Kagome.
"Yeah a strong one too" Inu commented on.
"I know exactly where you are" a voice replied from the trees.
Everyone looked up immediately. Sango gasped as she saw the demon in the tree.
"Amonru!" She yelled with disgust.
"Ya know this demon." Inu asked sago.
"Sadly yes, I killed almost all of her demon kind" Sango replied to Inu's question.
"Not jus most of my kind," Amonru said jumping down from the tree. "All of my kind I am the only one left, you killed my brother before my very eyes" Amonru added as well.
"little Inu Yasha how dare you not remember me?"
"H...h....h...how do you know me" Inu Yasha stuttered, asking confused.
"You don't even remember me?" Amonru said shaking her head. "When we where little I used to watch you in the village trying to fit in" "heh, nice try" she said wiping her cheek. "I knew what you where a half breed mutt.... then I later on met you brother he was smarter, stronger, as a matter or fact better then you, but that never changed a thing I still... had a crush on you...YOU DISSCUSSTING LITTLE HALF BREED!.... Why did I have to go back and save you, you should have drowned, we where young you probably don't even remember" she seem to be frustrated and upset as she told her story.
Inu Yasha tough long and hard.....
flash back:
I was running away I tripped and fell into a river. I could not swim all by my self drowning and all the villagers just laughed they didn't try to save me... I remember someone jumping in the I saw your face.
Out of flash back
"It's all too clear" Inu Yasha said still in a daze.
"So you remember now" Amonru said satisfied, "I am older now not so foolish"
The beautiful silver eyed long black haired demon's face changed from anger to a softer look.
"I have found someone much better now..." she trailed off.
"Aww man!" said Miroku
Sango looked at him weird.
"Who is this love of yours" Kagome asked.
"His name is Sesshomaru" she said delighted Kagome asked.
"YOU LOVE MY BROTHER!!!" Inu Yasha yelled discussed.
"Yes I do.." "But that is beyond the point" her face went more serious now. "I too seek Naraku, let me join you" Amonru replied.
"Piff, no way" Inu Yasha grumbled.
"Why not Inu Yasha it will be a great help I think having one and a half demon around" Miroku said.
"you're in" Kagome smiled.
Amonru herself smiled a little, she winked at Miroku and told everyone that she knew the woods very well "they are called the wood of the sleeping dragon" she boasted as to throw it in Inu Yasha's face. Then she spent some time evilly glaring at Sango.
"I don't like the way she's glaring at me" Sango whispered to Miroku.
"Inu Yasha I feel a shikon jewel near by" Kagome said. Inu Yasha sniffed the air "Koga" He growled.
Then Inu and Amonru ran through the trees
"listen girl I don't need your help" Inu Yasha said
"Nor do I need yours I too wish to collect the shikon jewels for my Sessy and I can do it when ever I want to your not going to stop me" Amonru replied
"Sessy?" Inu Yasha said as to make fun of her
"Shut up we're close!" Amonru snapped.
They turned around a dip in the trees and saw Koga out of breath and a very large beast on the ground.
Qt-neko89: well that's my first chapter please review!!!