Helloooooooooo party people!!! How's it hangin' ?
This is my first attempt at a Hannibal ficcy, so please don't throw me flames, they're not good for my sensitive soul... If you have nothing nice to say, then don't review at all.
Constructive critism is gladlt appreciated, i would liketo know what I should improve.
This a story about a 10-year old metally ill girl who starts her treatment with Hannibal Lecter.
The girl, Stephanie Anne, is traumatisised and doesn't want to tell the GD anything. But we all know Dr. Hanni does never give up! Slowly, he becomes friends with the girl and gains her trust. The girl starts looking at Hannibal as a fatherly figure and helps him to win Clarice over...
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SHE'S A MYSTERY TO ME
She looked around the waiting room.
*Freaky.* , she quitely said to herself.
The previous patient walked out of the room.
'Stephanie Anne Criswell.' , the assistant yelled through the waiting room.
Stephanie didn't hear him.
'Earth to Stephanie Anne! Come in Stephanie Anne!' , he yelled again.
Stephanie looked up from her book.
* Shit, that's me!*
' Coming...' , she mumbled.
' In here, please.'
She hesitated for a second, then followed the assistant to the doctor's office.
When she walked in, she saw a middle-aged man sitting at his desk.
Good morning' , he said to her, ' you must be Stephanie.'
' It's Stephanie Anne actually.' , she said with a bitter tone in her voice.
' I'm terribly sorry, how could I forget, do forgive me.' , he apologised.
' Fine.' , he was being too nice to her, like they all were before they failed on her.
' That will be all, Martin.' , the doctor said to his assistant.
' Alright sir.' , he walked out of the room.
' Okidoki then, Stephanie Anne, let's get started, shall we?'
' I don't really have a choice now, do I ?' , she didn't like these conversations at all.
' Oh but you do! Just say : I wanna stop, and I will no longer continue your treatment.'
' That doesn't matter much, when you fail on me they'll just drag me to another shrink.'
' Why would I fail on you , Stephanie Anne?'
' They all do, it's just a matter of time. I'm too screwed up for them. If you hang in there for more than 15 sessions, you'll break the record.'
'Alright then, I will break the record. What do you want to talk about?'
' Ain't you supposed to analyse me?'
' We have time, i want to break the record, remember?' , he winked at her.
She let a chuckle escape.
'What's your name?' , she asked.
' Why would you want to know my name?'
' Because I would like to know who I'm talking to. For all I know you could be that guy who escaped from prison and killed all those guards!'
At this, Hannibal chuckled.
' Very well then, my name is Han Solo.'
' Han Solo? Come on! Just because I'm a kid doesn't mean I'm THAT stupid! What's your real name?'
' What's so funny about Han Solo?' , he really didn't know. He had heard the name from a kid who was calling for his friend, as it appeared later, they were playing Jedi Knight, but of course Hannibal didn't know that.
' Never mind, just don't ever tell anyone your name is Han Solo again please' , she was laughing at him...
Yes, I know. Succy place to end a chapter, but then again, this whole fic sux so....
oh well, review anyway!!!!!
This is my first attempt at a Hannibal ficcy, so please don't throw me flames, they're not good for my sensitive soul... If you have nothing nice to say, then don't review at all.
Constructive critism is gladlt appreciated, i would liketo know what I should improve.
This a story about a 10-year old metally ill girl who starts her treatment with Hannibal Lecter.
The girl, Stephanie Anne, is traumatisised and doesn't want to tell the GD anything. But we all know Dr. Hanni does never give up! Slowly, he becomes friends with the girl and gains her trust. The girl starts looking at Hannibal as a fatherly figure and helps him to win Clarice over...
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SHE'S A MYSTERY TO ME
She looked around the waiting room.
*Freaky.* , she quitely said to herself.
The previous patient walked out of the room.
'Stephanie Anne Criswell.' , the assistant yelled through the waiting room.
Stephanie didn't hear him.
'Earth to Stephanie Anne! Come in Stephanie Anne!' , he yelled again.
Stephanie looked up from her book.
* Shit, that's me!*
' Coming...' , she mumbled.
' In here, please.'
She hesitated for a second, then followed the assistant to the doctor's office.
When she walked in, she saw a middle-aged man sitting at his desk.
Good morning' , he said to her, ' you must be Stephanie.'
' It's Stephanie Anne actually.' , she said with a bitter tone in her voice.
' I'm terribly sorry, how could I forget, do forgive me.' , he apologised.
' Fine.' , he was being too nice to her, like they all were before they failed on her.
' That will be all, Martin.' , the doctor said to his assistant.
' Alright sir.' , he walked out of the room.
' Okidoki then, Stephanie Anne, let's get started, shall we?'
' I don't really have a choice now, do I ?' , she didn't like these conversations at all.
' Oh but you do! Just say : I wanna stop, and I will no longer continue your treatment.'
' That doesn't matter much, when you fail on me they'll just drag me to another shrink.'
' Why would I fail on you , Stephanie Anne?'
' They all do, it's just a matter of time. I'm too screwed up for them. If you hang in there for more than 15 sessions, you'll break the record.'
'Alright then, I will break the record. What do you want to talk about?'
' Ain't you supposed to analyse me?'
' We have time, i want to break the record, remember?' , he winked at her.
She let a chuckle escape.
'What's your name?' , she asked.
' Why would you want to know my name?'
' Because I would like to know who I'm talking to. For all I know you could be that guy who escaped from prison and killed all those guards!'
At this, Hannibal chuckled.
' Very well then, my name is Han Solo.'
' Han Solo? Come on! Just because I'm a kid doesn't mean I'm THAT stupid! What's your real name?'
' What's so funny about Han Solo?' , he really didn't know. He had heard the name from a kid who was calling for his friend, as it appeared later, they were playing Jedi Knight, but of course Hannibal didn't know that.
' Never mind, just don't ever tell anyone your name is Han Solo again please' , she was laughing at him...
Yes, I know. Succy place to end a chapter, but then again, this whole fic sux so....
oh well, review anyway!!!!!