A/N: I know I'm starting a new story without finishing or even posting new chapters of my other works. I'm hoping that retelling this story in my own way will help kick start my muse. I've already started hearing whispers from it, and hope to be able to get some of my other stories up-to-date or finished. I thank you all for your continued patience in the slump that I have had. I hate the fact that some of my stories have gone untouched for over three years. To me that is unacceptable and by rights I shouldn't even have those stories still posted. However, I have a hard time thinking about bringing down those stories as I know they have endings, I just have to find them.
I don't know if you want to call this an adaption to Mary H. Herbert's book Dark Horse or that I took her subplot and made it into my own story. There is no cut-and-paste between her original works and the story. I read the chapters and then retell the chapters in my own way. However, I have kept the subplot to her original works, so if you have read her books then you will see the subplot come through. If the first book is a success and you all enjoy it. There will be four more to follow with a grand total of five books. I know she did other books that came after the original five, but I don't think I will get into those.
There are some major changes from her plot and mine at certain points in the book. Again, if you have read Dark Horse then you'll see where these changes have been made. If you haven't, then I will not be elaborating where these changes are, as that would take away from the story that I am telling. If you would like to read the original works by Mary H. Herbert, the first one is called Dark Horse. The entire series of five books is called The Dark Horse series. The stories I will be doing will be known as The Dark Storm series (TDS).
In this adaptation I'm using characters from Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha. There will also be Yuri/Lesbian relationships in this story.
Special Note: There is no beastiality in this story. There is also no FUTA in this story either.
Disclaimer: I do not own the rights to Magical Girl Lyrical Nanoha or the rights to Mary H. Herbert's, Dark Horse. This is strictly for entertainment purposes only. All rights reserved to their original creators.
Dalax: Are Percheron sized horses. Percherons are the largest horse known to be. They've been known to get up to be approximately twenty-seven hands high. They have long wavy manes and tails and their coat is a glossy black. They are one of the most majestic horses of their size. The Dalax in my story is both horse/?. You'll actually get a hint of this at the end of this chapter. The type that I'm using for this description is the telepathic talk of a Dalax, and in future chapters this will be telepathic speech of a human talking to a Dalax.
Villages: Are small nomadic tribes that move with the seasons. They're not quite big enough to be clans just yet, or they haven't found a permanent place to settle down yet.
Clans: Are a large nomadic tribe that is finally settled down and has found a permanent place to winter. They have permanent structures that they can come back to at any time.
Magic: The nomadic tribes have forbidden its practice. It is now considered taboo for anyone to use magic. If anyone is caught using magic they are either exiled or put to death.
Zolore: The father God that created the Dalax.
Valica: The mother Goddess of all creation and protector of mages.
Now let the fantasy begin of my version of Dark Horse. I hope you all enjoy it as much as I enjoy bringing to you.
Zona Rose };-
Dark Storm
By
Zona Rose
Chapter One – Finding a Friend
A man sitting astride a horse on top of the hill looked out over a village. He notices the first signs of life among the villagers awakened to the new day. It was foretold that he would be the ruler over the world, so long as a great warrior from this village did not stop him. He is about to make sure that never happens.
"Uno, make sure nothing is living when you leave the village. I don't even want the animals left alive. Slaughter everything."
"Yes, my Lord," as she gave the signal to her sisters. Thirteen horses came careening down the hill towards the unsuspecting village, unaware that their lives were about to end.
Sapphire eyes slowly opened to the pungent smell of blood and death that was all around her. Trying to look around, there wasn't much to see except smoke and dead bodies. There was a weight on top of her it was her mother's body, which had protected her from death.
Carefully rolling her mother's body off from her, a sharp pain in her right shoulder told her where the sword had hit, straight through her mother into her. Surveying the area around her, she could tell that there was nothing left alive. Carefully she made her way over to the healer's hut where she knew she would find what she needed to sew up her wound.
After doing the best, she can. She made her way through the village scrounging up food that she can put into a sack. Finally, she made her way over to the Temple hut where she found her father and his sword Raising Heart; although in her hands at this moment, it felt more like Raging Heart.
With vengeance in her heart, she slowly makes her way up into the mountains away from her beloved village. Though it pained her not to bury her family, she didn't want the ones who did this to find out they left someone alive.
The higher she climbed in the mountains she could see off into the distance. A dust storm, it was making its way toward the village. At least, the villagers and her family would get a proper burial.
The loss of blood and the wound in her shoulder made it difficult to climb the rocky terrain. The sun was starting to set, which means she needed to find some place to camp through the night and with as exhausted, as she is, it will end up being a cold camp. In the distance, she heard a sound that made her freeze in her tracks, the sound of Coyenas. They are a mixed breed of coy dogs and hyenas, and they are extremely vicious when they're hunting something.
The pack sounded like it was getting close, causing the young woman to tremble. The strange laughing sound that they made in the excitement of their hunt would make anyone's blood turn cold. The longer that she listened, the further away they seem to be getting. Until finally the laughing turned into a high-pitched barking of excitement, it seems whatever they've been chasing has been caught.
Sighing with relief, she starts moving away, when the piercing scream and fury of a horses neigh sliced through the air. Without thought, she starts running towards the commotion, wondering what in her condition could she do to help this majestic animal. Out of all the animals that she's ever taken care of, horses were always her favorite.
The closer that she got the louder the commotion was. Careful not to attract their attention, she slowed her progress until she was a few trees away and what she saw was horrifying. A beautiful black horse with a golden mane was stuck in clay slurry up to its belly. It couldn't pull its legs out it was stuck so deep.
Some of the Coyenas were also stuck in the clay slurry trying to snap their jaws at its flesh, while others were going on the backs of their comrades getting ready to leap onto its back. Putting her sack down, she carefully drew the sword from its sheath and without thinking charged at the animals screaming at the top of her lungs.
Slicing through several of the beasts, she took them all by surprise. Before she knew it five of them were dead, the remaining four turned tail and ran away. The three that were stuck were soon put out of their misery. As the adrenaline left her so did, the strength of her legs and collapsed to the ground.
The horse's nostrils flared, burgundy eyes were wild with fear, not knowing what the human was going to do. The longer the two stared at each other, calmer the horse became until finally the horse calm down enough to relax and breathe easy.
"Well, boy, I don't know how to get you out of there, but I'll do my best."
"For one thing, I'm not a boy. I am a girl, and at this point I'll take any help you can offer."
Looking around for the owner of the voice, the young girls eyes finally looked into the burgundy eyes that were staring back at her. "Are you the one that just spoke to me?" Snorting the horse nodded her head yes. "I have never heard of such a thing before. Can you read my mind as well?"
"No, I can only project my thoughts to you. Some humans even have the ability to talk back to us through telepathy. I don't know if you are one of the special ones or not."
"I see, than I don't suppose you have any ideas on how I can help you to get out of that clay slurry?"
"Unfortunately, digging me out is going to be the only way."
"I see. The only problem with that is going to be; every time I start to take it out, it will slide right back in. Unfortunately, if I wait until morning it'll be too hard for me to dig it out."
Looking around at the materials that she had to work with; a small plan start to formulate in her mind. Just when she was starting to feel good about the idea that she had, her stomach gave an undignified growl. The girl looked down at her stomach and sighed.
"Well, it looks like my body is trying to tell me I need to eat. I don't suppose you've had anything to eat lately, have you?"
"No, they ended up catching me as I was going to graze."
"I see then, I'll see if I can find you some nice grass to eat."
Searching the area, she was able to find a small armload of grass as well as bits and pieces of wood for a small fire. After placing the grass in front of the horse within easy reach, she started to build a small fire; she was going to need the light to help free the horse.
With the fire started. She looked into her sack for something that didn't need to be cooked and found some jerky meat that would be perfect, as it would give her protein and fuel for the task. After she finished eating, she went around and gathered up some more wood some of it for the fire, and some of it to help her dig out the horse from the clay slurry.
The entire time, the horse was watching her every move, it wasn't that she didn't trust humans. It was just something about this one made her very cautious. She wasn't acting as a normal human would in this situation. For one, she was being methodical in everything that she did, almost as if she was not human. Two this girl had no emotions; she didn't seem to care about anything at the moment. Yes, she was considerate to get some food but if her own stomach hadn't growled, would she have even considered getting food, not just herself, but for me as well.
As the girl started her task, she started to talk about her village life, family, and friends. While she was talking, I noticed her face was moist with tears, but her voice was still without emotion. Had something happened to everything and everyone that she knew?
"They came out of nowhere. We were just starting our day our daily routines, and they just start to slaughter us. They went for the men and boys first, as most women and girls didn't know how to fight. Although in our village, good portions of our young women have been learning how to hold their own against invaders. Nevertheless, it doesn't seem like that was enough, as I'm the only survivor of my village. The only one who can point the finger at the band of raiders that did this, that is, if I ever find them."
So that is why the little human has no emotions, she's burned out with grief and in shock of what she has seen, maybe even done. That must be why her right shoulder is bleeding she must have been injured in the raid, but even though she's in pain she continues to dig.
"You must rest little one. If you continue at this pace, you'll burn yourself out before you can finish your task."
"No, they could come back at any time and I'm not going to watch another thing I care about died before me. Not if I can help it."
Care? This little human cares about me? When she has only known me for a short time, how is that possible?
"You see, it wasn't just the people that were slaughtered every living thing in my village is dead; from the chickens to the horses, from the old men to the newborn babies. They're all gone. All that's left is a sorry excuse for a young woman who can't even use a sword properly. Not only that, but I'm right handed. A was injured in my right shoulder, so I couldn't use this sword properly even if I wanted to."
That's impossible. The way she used that sword in her left hand, it was as if she had done it all her life. I could feel my heart warming to this young girl, the courage; she must have to go on with no one left.
She has been at this now for hours and I can see the fatigue taking its toll on her body. The trembling is not from the chill in the air, but from her muscles too tired to move. However, she was right. The closer the dawn it gets the thicker the clay slurry gets and the harder it is for her to dig me out.
It's now midday and the warmth of the sun has hardened the clay slurry. She has found a way of transporting some water from a nearby stream and is attempting to soften the clay, so that she can continue digging me out. She has set a bowl of the cool liquid so that I can drink, taking very little for herself, even though I know she needs it.
Finally, with a wooden ramp, I'm able to leave my trap to freedom. The young girl smiles at me shakily moves over to where her campfire was the night before and collapses in a heap of total exhaustion. Without help, she might not make it through the night. Therefore, I make my decision. I will go to the stream and wash up and then come back and take care of her throughout the night.
In my dazed sleep, I felt someone picking me up and then gently putting me into a cool stream of water to wash the clay off my body, and to clean my wounded shoulder. I was then laid down on something soft instead of the hard ground. As I crack, my eyes open to see whom it is taking care of me. I see a beautiful young woman with burgundy eyes and golden hair, in black silks. She sees that I am partially awake and smiles at me, even though the smile does not reach her eyes.
"Rest easy little one, I will take care of you throughout the night."
With that said, I could no longer fight my body anymore and fell into a deep sleep, too bad it wasn't a deep sleep void of nightmares. I witnessed repeatedly the slaughter of my parents, my brother and sister everything I hold dear. Each time it would get to a bad part, I felt a cool cloth wash my face and my arms and a gentle voice, singing to me in a language I did not know.
A/N: Well, that's the end of chapter 1 of Dark Storm. I will be posting one chapter a week, as I have several chapters already done and I am moving along very nicely with this story. There are twenty chapters to the original book and I plan to keep this as close to that as possible.
Reviews are always most welcomed; please let me know what you think of this adaption, whether you have read the original Dark Horse or not. If you have read the original Dark Horse and you wish to compare the two stories in your reviews. I welcome that very much, and would like to see what you think of the changes that I have made.
Until next week, I hope you enjoy the read.
Zona Rose };-
Below is her original chapter one. I will do this for the first three chapters, to show the difference from my chapter and her works. Enjoy. All rights of the following are to Mary H. Herbert.
Mary H. Herbert
Dark Horse
CHAPTER ONE
Gabria paused and leaned wearily against her walking staff. She could not go on much longer like this. Her ankle ached from a bad fall and her shoulders were rubbed raw by the unaccustomed pack. The wind, which blew cold from the icy passes of the mountains, cut through her woolen cloak and chilled her to the bone. She had not eaten since fleeing from her home at Corin Treld two days before.
The girl sat down on a rock and threw her pack to the ground. There was some dried meat and trail bread in the old pack, but Gabria had no idea how much longer she would have to walk and food was difficult to find on the plains this early in the spring. It was better to save her rations until she was desperate. At any rate, she had no desire for food now. Her body was too numb with grief and despair.
Gabria wearily examined her boots. The soles were almost worn through from the sharp shale she had struggled over.
Ragged boots, the sign of an exile. Her breath suddenly caught in her throat and, for a moment, she nearly surrendered to the anguish that tore at her resolve like starving vultures. No! She cried silently. I cannot weep. Not yet.
Gabria pounded her knee with her fist while her other hand convulsively gripped the short sword at her belt. Her body trembled violently as she fought to regain control of her despair. There was no time for grief now. Nor did she have the Strength to waste on self-pity. Her family and her clan had been massacred at their winter camp at Corin Treld. She was the only one left to claim their weir-geld, recompense for the blood of her family that stained the grass of their home. She would seek her revenge and then she could weep.
Gabria closed her mind to all but her grim resolve. It was the only way she could survive. It gave her a strength and a purpose in the face of a debilitating loneliness and fear. She was an exile now and therefore dead to her people unless another clan accepted her. She was a wanderer and an untouchable. Somehow, she had to find a clan that would take her in. Somehow, she would claim her vengeance.
Slowly her trembling eased and the emotions that threatened to devour her were forced into a deep prison. She remembered that her father had once told her that strong emotions were a power to be harnessed and used like a weapon. She stood up and smiled a feral grimace, like the snarl of a wolf. To the north, the direction from which she had come, a line of clouds lay along the horizon. It seemed to her that a pall of smoke still hung over her home.
"My grief for you will be used, Father," Gabria said aloud. "Our enemy will die." Out of habit, she reached up to brush a strand of flaxen hair out of her face, only to touch the rough-cut stubble on her head. The girl sighed, remembering the pain she had felt when she had cut her hair and burned it with the bodies of her four brothers, including her twin, Gabran. Her brothers had been so proud of her long, thick hair. But she gave it to them as a gift of mourning and in return she took her twin's identity.
His clothes now covered her body and his weapons were in her hand. She would no longer be a girl. For the sake of survival, she would become a boy, Gabran.
It was clan law that no woman could claim weir-geld alone; she had to be championed by a male member of her family. To make matters worse for Gabria, the clans usually did not accept an exiled woman unless she was of exceptional beauty or talent. Gabria knew she had little chance of being accepted on her own merits. On the other hand, she was slim and strong and had been raised with four boisterous boys who often forgot she was only a girl. With luck and careful attention, she thought she could pass well enough as a boy. The deception could bring her death, but it could also give her a greater chance for survival and revenge.
Ignoring the jab of pain in her ankle, Gabria shouldered her pack once more and limped southward across the hillside. She was in the Hornguard, the low, barren foothills that lay like a crumpled robe at the foot of the Darkhorn Mountains. Somewhere in one of the sheltered valleys to the south, she hoped to find the Khulinin, her mother's clan, led by Lord Savaric. She hoped her kinship with the Khulinin would overcome the stigma of exile. Gabria prayed it would, for even driven by the strength of her desire for revenge, she knew she would not be able to go far. The
Khulinin were still many days distant and either her twisted ankle or her food would fail long before she could find another clan.
Gabria hurried on, forcing her legs to move. It was almost twilight and she wanted to find shelter before dark.
Then, above the wind, she heard the howling of wolves.
Hungry and insistent, the cries sang through the dusk like wild music. Gabria shuddered and gripped her staff tighter as the feral hunting calls sounded again. The wolves were not after her, she realized. They were upwind of her and deeper in the hills. Still, that was too close. Alone and virtually defenseless against a pack, Gabria had no desire to meet the vicious marauders. She stopped and listened, following the progress of the hunt.
The howling continued for several minutes. The animals were moving south, running parallel to her. Then the cries grew louder, for whatever the wolves were chasing seemed to be trying to reach the open ground of the plains. Gabria tensed and her eyes searched the hills for the approaching pack. But the howling stopped abruptly, and the wolves broke into yowls of glee and triumph. The girl sighed with relief. The wolves had caught their prey and would not hunt again for a while.
She was about to move on when she heard another sound that froze her heart: the enraged squeal of an embattled horse.
"Oh, Mother of All," she breathed. "No!" Before she could consider her choices, she limped toward the sound even as the echoes faded. The howling burst out, sharp with rage and frustration. Gabria ran faster, forcing her sore legs to navigate the rugged, brush-covered hillsides, while the pain stabbed through her ankle and the heavy pack slammed against her back.
She knew it was utterly stupid to think of challenging a pack of killers for their chosen prey, but this prey was different. Horses were special to her, to all her people. They were the very existence of the clans, the chosen of the goddess, Amara, and the children of the plains. No clansman ever turned his back on a horse, no matter what the danger.
The yowling abruptly increased and the horse's screams took on a note of fury and desperation. Gabria pushed on until her breath came in ragged gasps and her legs were heavy with pain. For a moment, she despaired reaching the stricken horse before it was brought down.
The sounds became louder, but the distance seemed so much greater than she had expected.
She dropped her pack, then pulled off her cloak and wrapped it around her arm as she ran.
Suddenly the sounds ceased. Gabria faltered when she lost the guidance of the cries. She stopped and listened again, trying to locate the attack. The wind whistled around her, carrying the smell of an old winter as the hills dimmed in the approaching night. Beyond the grasslands, the full moon was rising.
"Oh, Mother," Gabria gasped. "Where are they?" As if in answer to her plea, another furious squeal came out of the growing darkness and the howling rose in response. This time, the sounds were quite close, perhaps in the next valley. Breathing a silent prayer of thanks, Gabria broke into a run. She topped one hill, plunged into a valley, and toiled up the next slope. At the crest she stopped and peered down the hill.
The land at her feet sheared off into a deep gully between three hills, where several run-offs emptied into a bowl-like depression. After the last thaw, melted snow had gathered in the center, creating a pool of mud and standing water rimmed with Ice.
In the midst of the pool, now churned to a filthy mire, stood a huge horse, very angry and very much alive. Gabria's eyes widened in astonishment and excitement when she recognized the animal. It was a Hunnuli, the greatest of all the horse breeds. They were the legendary steeds of the ancient magic-wielders, and, even though their masters had been destroyed by hate and jealousy, the horses themselves were revered above all others. Their numbers were few and wild, and when they deigned to be ridden, they only accepted the men of the clans. It was said that the first Hunnuli was sired by a storm on the first mare of the world; a streak of lightning was left indelibly printed on their descendants' shoulders to prove it.
Gabria had never seen one of these magnificent animals before, but there was no mistaking this was a Hunnuli. Even in the twilight, Gabria could see the jagged white streak that marked the black hide at its shoulder. She simply could not believe one of those horses had been brought to bay by eight or nine wolves.
She moved behind a scrub pine to where she could see without being detected. The wolves were still there, slinking around the edge of the mire and keeping their distance from the wicked teeth of the horse. The horse itself was obviously exhausted, and steam rose from its heaving flanks.
Suddenly the Hunnuli lunged, squealing in fury as it tried to lash out at a sneaking wolf. The girl knew then why the horse had not run, for it was trapped in the clinging mud. Its back legs were sunk to the haunches in the freezing mire and its front legs pawed desperately for purchase on the slippery edge of the pool. It could only use its teeth to fight the wolves for fear of sinking deeper into the mud.
The horse settled back warily and snorted. Two wolves then made a feint for the horses head to draw its attention while a third leaped from behind to slash at the unprotected tendons in the horse's back legs.
Gabria screamed and the horse whipped its head around and slammed the leaping wolf into the mire. Like a snake, the Hunnuli flung back and snapped viciously at the other two beasts. One wolf screeched in agony and fell back with its leg hanging in bloody splinters. The second was more successful. It caught the horse by the neck and left a gaping slash dangerously close to the Jugular. The other wolves yipped and snarled.
Gabria's mouth went dry and her legs were shaking. She wished fervently for her bow and some arrows to bring down the wolves, but the bow lay in the ashes of her tent, and she did not trust her skill with the sword that hung by her side. All she had was her staff. She hefted it and swallowed hard. If she waited to think any longer, all would be lost. The horse was weakening rapidly and the wolves were growing bolder.
With a wild yell, the girl sprinted down the slope, lurching on her injured ankle. The wolves whirled in surprise to face this new threat and the horse neighed another challenge. Before the hunters realized their -danger, Gabria was upon them, swinging her staff like a scythe. The wolves snapped and lunged at her, and she fought them back with a strength born of desperation.
One wolf fell, its back broken. Another lay whimpering with smashed ribs. A third leaped away and was caught by the teeth of the great horse, which flung it high in the air. Using her cloak as a guard for her arm and her staff like a double-edged sword, Gabria drove the wolves away from the pool. At the foot of the enclosing hills, they broke and ran.
Gabria watched them disappear over the rim of the hill, then she turned to gaze with some surprise at the bodies lying in the gully. Something seemed to snap inside her and she sagged on her staff, feeling utterly exhausted and aching from head to toe. She stood there for a while, panting for breath, sweating and trembling with dizziness.
The girl glanced blearily at the wild horse and wondered what to do next. The big animal stood immobile and watched her quietly. She was relieved to see its ears were swiveled toward her rather than flattened on its head. The horse seemed to realize she was not an enemy.
The evening had dimmed to night and the full moon swelled above the plains; its silver light flooded into the gully and gleamed on the standing water. Gabria limped to the edge of the mud hole and sat down to rest while she studied the horse. Even mired in the mud, she could see the animal was enormous. It probably stood about eighteen hands at the shoulder, and Gabria mentally cringed at the thought of moving such a massive animal out of its trap. Yet she obviously could not leave the Hunnuli. The wolves could return and the horse was in no condition to free itself. Somehow she would have to devise a way to free it. But how? She had no tools, no rope, and very little strength. Of course, its size gave the Hunnuli incredible power, but if it struggled too much against the heavy mud it would wear itself into deadly exhaustion.
The girl shook her head. At least the horse did not appear to be sinking deeper. Gabria hoped that meant the ground was frozen below the mud and would support the horse through the night.
There was nothing more she could do now. She was too weary, beyond thought and beyond effort, to do anything else that night.
Gabria stood up, feeling slightly better, and walked slowly around the pool. She stared at the horse, her face wrinkled in a frown. There was something odd about this horse that she could not quite discern in the moonlight. Its glossy black hide was filthy with muck, and blood oozed from the gash on its neck, making a slick rivulet down its withers. But the blood was not the problem.
There was something else. . . something unusual for a seemingly healthy horse. Then she realized what it was.
Oh, no, Gabria thought. So that is why the Hunnuli was trapped so easily. She is a mare and heavy with foal.
There was no alternative now. Gabria knew she would have to extricate the Hunnuli or die trying. She glanced up at the horse's head and saw the mare staring intently at her. Their eyes met and the meeting was so intense Gabria was rocked back on her heels. Never had she seen such eyes in any creature. They were like orbs of illuminated night, sparkling with starlight and brimming with incredible intelligence. They were gazing at her with a mixture of surprise, suspicion, and an almost human glint of impatience.
"How did you get caught like this?" Gabria breathed softly, her voice mingled with awe.
The mare snorted in disgust.
''I'm sorry, it was unfair of me to ask. I'm going to find firewood. I'll return."
It was normal for her to talk to a horse like another human being, but this time the girl had the oddest feeling the mare understood.
Gabria put her cloak around her shoulders, for the air was turning bitterly cold, and went to find her pack. She found a dead tree on her way back and broke off enough wood to last the night.
As an afterthought, she dragged the dead wolves out of the gully and left them downwind of her camp.
She lit a small fire in the shelter of the cliff wall, where the horse could see her, and set most of the fuel aside for an emergency. There was only stale bread and dried meat for a meal, but Gabria ate it gratefully. For the first time since she fled the devastation at Corin Treld, she was hungry.
She sat silently for a while, staring at the horse. In the darkness, it loomed as an even darker obscurity on the edge of the firelight. Every now and then it would shift slightly and the flames would reflect in its eyes. Gabria shuddered. The blackness in her mind began to creep insidiously over her thoughts.
Fires licked in her memory and the phantoms of things remembered grew out of the shadows. The flames rose and fell and ran with blood. There was blood everywhere. Her hands, her clothes, and even her scarlet cloak was stained with blood and reeked of death.
The girl stared at her hands, at the stains she could not remove. Her hands would never be clean. She frantically wiped her palms on her leggings and moaned like a wounded animal. The tears burned in her head, but her eyes remained dry as she stared glassily at the ground. Her shoulders shook with silent sobs.
"Father, I'm sorry," she cried. Above her, the moon followed its unseeing path and a damp, chill wind swept through the hills. Beyond the gully came the sounds of bickering wolves from where they were tearing at the bodies of their dead.
After a long while, the fire died down and the phantoms faded from Gabria's mind. Moving like an old woman, she stoked the fire, then curled up in her cloak. She fell asleep, borne under by the weight of utter exhaustion.
A horse neighed, strident and demanding, above the hoof beats that thundered over the frozen ground. Half-seen forms of mounted men careened past to set their torches to the felt tents. Swords flashed in the rising flames as the attackers cut down the people, and scream after scream reverberated in the mist, until they blended into one agonized wail.
Gabria started awake, her heart pounding as the cry died on her lips. She clutched her cloak tighter and shivered at the dream that still clouded her thoughts. A horse neighed again, angrily.
The unexpected sound dispelled the nightmare and brought the girl fully awake. This sound was no dream. She stiffly sat up and blinked at the Hunnuli. The mare was watching her with obvious impatience. Gabria realized the sun was already riding above the plains, though its warming light had not yet dipped into the gully. The chill of the night still clung to shadows, and frost flowered everywhere, even on the mud-encrusted mane of the trapped mare.
Gabria sighed, grateful the night was gone and the wolves had not attacked again. With infinite care, she eased to her feet, convinced she would shatter at any moment. Every muscle felt as if it were petrified.
"I'm sorry," she said to the horse. "I did not mean to sleep so long. But I feel better." She gently stretched to work out the kinks in her joints. "Perhaps I can help you now." The mare whinnied as if to say "I should think so," and a wisp of a smile drifted over the girl's face. For a moment the smile lit her pale green eyes, then it was gone and the pain that had dulled her expression for three days returned.
Sitting by a newly built fire, Gabria emptied her pack onto the ground. There was very little in it that would help her to dig a gigantic horse out of the mud trap: only a bag of food, a few pots of salve, and a dagger of fine steel that had been her father's prized possession, an extra tunic, and a few odds and ends she had salvaged from her family's burned tent. At the moment, she would have traded it all for a stout length of rope and a digging tool.
She sat for a time, totally at a loss over what to do next. Finally, she walked around the pool and considered every possibility, while the mare kept a cautious eye on her. In the daylight, Gabria could see the mare had none of the fine-boned grace of the Harachan horses Gabria was accustomed to. The Hunnuli's head was small in comparison to her immense neck, which curved down regally to a wide back. Her chest was broad and muscular and her shoulders were an image of power. There was granite in her bones, steel in her muscles, and fire in her blood.
"Well," said Gabria at last, hands on hips. "There's only one thing I can think of now. Food."
She laid the contents of her pack on her cloak, rolled it up, and set it aside. Then, with her knife and empty pack, she went in search of grass. On the hilltop she paused to watch the sun climb the flawless sky. It was going to be a lovely day despite the early season. The wind had died, and a fresh smell of new growth rose from the warming land. A few patches of stubborn snow clung to the sheltered hillsides, but most of the winter's snowfall was gone.
Before her the foothills fell away into the valley of the Hornguard, a broad, lush river valley and the favorite wintering place of her rival clan, the Geldring. The land rose again beyond the rivers domain into the Himachal Mountains. The small range of rugged peaks sat like an afterthought in the midst of the grasslands. From their feet the vast steppeland of Ramtharin flowed for leagues to the seas of the eastern kings. This was the land of the twelve clans of Valorian and the realm of the Harachan horses, the fleet, smaller cousins of the Hunnuli. The steppes were hot in the summer, cold in the winter, dry most of the year, and merciless to those who did not respect them. They offered little to a people beyond the wind and the immense solitude of their rolling hills, but their grass was rich and the polished dome of the sky was a greater treasure to the clans than all the palaces of the east.
Behind Gabria, the mountains of Darkhorn marched south, then bent away to the west.
Somewhere beyond the curve was the valley of the Goldrine River and the Khulinin clan's winter encampment. She looked southward, hoping to see something that would encourage her, but the landmarks she knew were lost in the purple haze. She bit her lip, thinking of the miles she still had to travel, and bent to her task.
Gabria soon had a pack full of dried grass for the mare and a few half-frozen winterberries for herself. Although the fare was meager for a horse of that size, the old prairie grass was well cured by last year's summer sun and was rich enough. The Hunnuli would survive for a while.
The horse was watching intently for the girl to return and greeted Gabria with a resounding neigh.
"This is all I have for now," Gabria told her. "I will bring more later." Cautiously she laid the grass within reach of the horse. The mare tore voraciously at the proffered food, bobbing her head in her efforts to swallow quickly.
Meanwhile, Gabria tried to decide what to do next. She examined every possibility that came to mind no matter how ridiculous, but there seemed to be only one hopeful course-and the very idea of that nearly defeated her. She would have to dig the mare out.
Fortunately, the standing water had run off during the night, leaving only the deep, thick mire.
The properties that made the mud so treacherous might help her in its removal. It was so thick, it stuck everywhere. Nevertheless, if the Hunnuli thrashed about or tried to fight her off, it would be impossible to get close enough to do anything.
Gabria shrugged and picked up her empty pack. She could only hope the mare would understand her attempts to help.
She walked up one of the eroded stream beds that ran into the gully and soon found what she needed. There was an abundance of loose gravel and broken shale lying in bars along the dry bed. Quickly the girl filled her pack and returned to the pool. After several trips, she had a large pile of rock close to the mud hole.
Next, she went to collect broken branches, fallen logs, twigs, dead scrub, and anything that would suit her plan. In a nearby stand of pine, she cut boughs of springy needles and hauled them to the growing heap. Finally, she was ready.
Panting slightly, she spoke to the mare. "I know I have not earned the privilege to be your friend," she said. "But you must trust me. I am going to dig you out and I cannot spend my time avoiding your teeth."
The Hunnuli dipped her head and snorted. Taking that as a positive sign, Gabria eased to the mare's front legs and watched the ears that flicked toward her. The mare remained still; her ears stayed perked.
Gabria knelt in front of the horse. With a long, flat rock, she began scraping the mud away from the mare's legs. The muck was not deep by the edge and Gabria was able to reach frozen earth in several places.
"I'm going to make a ramp here for you," she said to the horse. "So you can stand without slipping." The Hunnuli remained still, apparently waiting.
By late morning, Gabria was drenched with sweat, and mud covered her like a second layer of clothes. She stood up, wiped her hands on her tunic, and surveyed her work. She felt a moment of pride. The mare's front quarters were free of the clinging mud and her front hooves rested on a short ramp of logs embedded in the mud and banked on either side with rock and dead brush. The horse's belly and hindquarters were still firmly mired, but Gabria felt a little relief and a twinge of hope.
The girl ate a quick meal and returned to work. First, she laid a narrow platform in the mud around the horse so she could work without fighting the mire herself. Scraping and digging with her rock shovel and her bare hands, she cleared away the mud from the Hunnuli's sides, then packed in handfuls of gravel and shale to keep the walls from slipping in. It was agonizing work.
Gabria's back was soon a band of pain and her hands were sore and blistered. The mare watched her constantly, remaining motionless except for the occasional swing of her head. Only her tail twitching in the mud betrayed her controlled impatience.
The first stars were glimmering in the darkening sky when Gabria stopped digging. She looked at the trapped mare in dismay and said, "I'm sorry, it will be another day before I can get you out." She groaned and staggered to her feet. "The digging's going so much slower than I expected."
In the long afternoon's work, she had only cleared away a distressingly small area of mud surrounding the huge horse. At the pace she was going, it might be several days before the mare was free. Weary and depressed, Gabria collected more grass for the horse and rubbed down her front legs to stave off swelling. She was rewarded with a soft nicker.
She looked at the Hunnuli in wonder. The mare returned her gaze calmly, her eyes glowing like black pearls. Impulsively, Gabria leaned over and buried her face in the Hunnuli's thick mane.
It did not seem possible she could feel something after the destruction of her home and family.
She thought every emotion had withered within her when she looked on the mutilated bodies of her brothers. Only revenge had remained to hold her together and fill her heart. Yet, this trapped horse awoke a feeling of kinship in her, and the battered remnants of her old self reached out desperately for comfort. Perhaps, she thought with a frantic yearning, this great horse would accept her as a friend. If so, that friendship was worth a lifetime of labor.
But after a while she stood up and rubbed her face, chiding herself for her fantasies. Hunnuli only accepted warriors and old sorcerers, not exiled girls. It was ridiculous to even imagine. She cleaned herself off as best she could and rekindled her fire. She ate some bread and was asleep before the flames died to embers.
The next morning came with a dismal dawn and a brief but heavy snow. The mountains were veiled behind a raiment of gray and silver clouds, and the wind gusted through the valleys.
Gabria woke with a groan. She was badly chilled and so sore she could barely move without pain stabbing somewhere in her body. Her shoulders and back ached and her arms felt petrified from her exertions of the day before. Closer inspection showed her ankle was still swollen. She moaned irritably and pulled her boot back on. Much more of this, she thought, shaking the snow off her cloak, and the wolves will have two meals. She decided to wrap her ankle for better support and hoped the rest of her abused body would gradually lose its kinks.
The Hunnuli was watching her as she ate her meal, showing none of the impatience of the previous day. The snowfall had patterned the horse's black coat like a bank of stars in a midnight sky, yet she did not bother to shake it off. Gabria glanced at her worriedly and wondered if something was wrong. The wild horse seemed abnormally subdued.
The girl became more alarmed when the Hunnuli ignored a fresh armload of grass. The horse's eyes were withdrawn and dull, as if the light of their glance was turned inward.
"Please, tell me it's not true," Gabria said, sick at the realization that dawned on her. The mare moved restlessly in the mire and turned to nose at her belly. It was difficult to tell under all the mud, but some of the signs were apparent. If Gabria was right, the mare would foal soon. The trauma of the attack and the two days in the mud hole had probably triggered the labor prematurely. Gabria looked at the mare's bulging sides and wondered how far along she actually was.
Desperately, Gabria went to work. The digging she thought she could do in two days now had to be finished in one. Some of the mud had slipped back during the night, but most of the walls had held. Extending these deeper, Gabria dug along the mare's stomach and down her haunches. She could see how the foal had dropped, and she hoped it would be an easy labor.
The mare was stiff and weakened from her imprisonment and was in no condition to fight a difficult birth.
The morning passed slowly, broken by intermittent snow and moments of warm sun. Gabria stopped several times to collect more shale and brush, then continued on as fast as her complaining body allowed. Once, she had to stop to wrap the bleeding blisters and lacerations on her hands.
By late afternoon, Gabria was nearing the end of her strength. Only her intense desire to free the mare and the unborn foal gave her the energy to keep digging. Her movements became automatic: scoop out the mud, throw it aside, and pack in the rock. The aches in her arms and back united into one massive hurt, then faded as she pushed herself to the edges of endurance.
After a time, it became easy to ignore the melting snow that trickled through her clothes. She only concentrated on fighting her growing lassitude.
The mare became agitated. Faint tremors rippled along her flanks, and she tossed her head in annoyance. Finally, in an effort to calm the horse and keep herself moving, Gabria began to talk aloud.
"I'm sorry, beautiful one, to be taking so long. I will have you out before your time, I promise. I just wasn't prepared for something like this." She laughed bitterly and flung a handful of mud behind her.
"Do you know how much is left when an encampment is burned? Very, very little. A few bits of charred rope, some blackened metal, and heaps and heaps of ashes. Many bodies, too. . . stabbed and slashed, or shot with arrows, or crushed by horses' hooves, or burned. But dead. All dead. Even the children. The horses and livestock are gone. There is nothing. Only death and emptiness and stench."
The Hunnuli quieted and was watching Gabria with an uncanny look of understanding and sympathy, but the girl was bent over her task and did not see the horse's eyes.
"It has never happened before, you know. Oh, we fight often. There is nothing a clansman likes more than a good fight. But not like this. Nothing like this. It was a massacre!" She fiercely wiped her eyes.
"I found my brothers together," Gabria continued dully. "They fought back to back and their enemies' blood flowed. I saw it. The murderers took their dead with them, but they left a great deal of blood behind. My brothers must have been too much for them, though. In the end, the cowards ran my brothers through with lances instead of fighting them like men. Father died before his hall and his hearth guard, his chosen warriors, defended him to the last man. There is no one else left."
For a time, Gabria was silent, and the ghosts of her dead clan haunted her memories. Even the pain of her body could not mask the aching loneliness that terrified her soul.
"I'm the only one," she snapped. "I was not there when they needed me. I ran off like a spoiled child because my father said I was to be married. When I came back to apologize for my heated words, he was dead. I am justly punished." She paused for a moment, then continued.
"I must earn the right to be a clansman now. I am neither man nor woman: I am an exile!"
Gabria slammed a handful of gravel into the mud. "That is what is so ironic, Hunnuli. It was a band of exiles, renegades, which ambushed my clan. Exiles sent by that foul dung, Lord Medb.
"Oh, but he will pay the weir-geld for this, Hunnuli. He thinks no one is alive who knows. But I know, and I know, too, that Lord Medb will die. I, Gabria of Clan Corin, am going to take my weir-geld in his blood. He does not realize that I am still alive, but he will know soon. May his heart tremble at the thought of his treachery being shouted to the clans and the world."
Without warning, dizziness shook Gabria's head and she fell against the mare. The girl lay panting on the horse's warm back while her whole body trembled with rage and fatigue. "I must hold on." Her voice rasped in her throat.
The Hunnuli remained still, letting the girl rest until her muscles slowly relaxed and her violent trembling eased. At last, Gabria sat back on her heels. Her face held no expression except for the rigid line to her jaw, the only mark of her hard won control.
It was getting dark and another light snow was falling. Despite her own weariness, Gabria noticed the mare was getting more uncomfortable. Her worry increased, for if the mare went into labor now, she would not be able to pull herself out of the mud. It was time to get the Hunnuli out.
Her legs sore from kneeling, Gabria painfully worked her way off the log platform to the bank.
The mare neighed irritably. Her eyes rolled in distress.
"Yes, I think I'm finished," Gabria said. "But I do wish I had some rope." She quickly threw more gravel on the ramp to give the mare added traction.
Much of the mud had been cleared away in a crude circle around the horse, but the heavy mire still clung tenaciously to her hind legs and a great mass lay under her belly. Gabria hoped with the log ramp beneath the Hunnuli's hooves, the horse could utilize her massive strength to pull herself out.
There was nothing more Gabria could do.
"It's up to you now," she said to the horse.
The Hunnuli understood. She stilled and closed her eyes. Her muscles began to bulge as if she were concentrating all of her power into one gigantic upheaval. Her neck bowed and trembled in her effort. Her nostrils flared as her breath steamed like the vent of a volcano. Then, without warning, the mare lunged forward, her entire being straining against the confining mud. Her muscles bunched in cords of black along her neck and rump. Her sinews Stretched until Gabria thought they would surely snap. Her huge hooves planted on the log ramp, the mare heaved upward, fighting for every inch of freedom.
Gabria sank to her knees, enthralled by the horse's struggle. She felt helpless just watching, but she knew she would only be in the way if she tried to help. There was no place for her puny efforts beside the colossal exertion of the black horse.
Slowly, the mud began to relinquish its hold. The mare's front legs jumped a step forward, driving the logs deeper into the earth. She pulled her back legs inch by inch toward the bank. Her stomach cleared the mire, clumps of mud clinging to her underbelly and to the distended milk bag. With one final effort, the mare threw herself upward. One hind leg lifted out and touched the ramp, then the other. She heaved out of the mud hole with a neigh of triumph that echoed through the gully. Gabria scrambled to her feet, crying with relief. They had done it! She threw her digging rock as far as she could and shouted again when she heard it hit the ground.
Immediately she went still. The Hunnuli was standing in front of her, her black form towering above Gabria's head and her neck arched proudly. Before Gabria knew what was happening, the horse reared. Despite her sluggish body and aching legs, the mare threw her head back and rose up on her hind legs in the Hunnuli's ancient obeisance of respect and honor. Then the mare leaped away and cantered out of the gully. Her hoof beats faded in the darkness.
Gabria's head began to whirl. A Hunnuli had reared to her-a mere girl, an exile. No one could claim mastery over a Hunnuli; what they gave was freely given. That one would pay her such an honor was more than she could believe.
She stared numbly at the mire where the mud was slowly falling back in place. Her eyes dimmed and the hills swayed around her. Her muscles seemed to freeze, and, before she could stop herself, Gabria collapsed to the ground and emptiness closed her mind.
That is her original chapter. I hope you enjoyed it.
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