Author notes : well I tried to stick to the script of the real game as much as I could without completely copying the story line this is my first time writing a story so I need feedback please give me advice and opinion I made it short so you can get a sample of what I like to write about
Isn't it so sad to see a hearse and a limo side by side at a red light. Well it might just be me. But it just doesn't feel right. How would You feel If you just died and people are partying right next to your grave maybe they should do something about that like I don't maybe make separate lane for them. People here in heaven city are just so uncaring. Or maybe I'm just so paranoid. My names Starling Anny Jane I'm 15 living in the middle section of heaven city. You know what sector sounds better so let's go with that. I still live with my parents and want to stay as long as possible. Kind of pathetic considering most of my friend already moved out or are trying to because they feel like their parents are trying to control their life's but it's so hard to tell what's right or just sound cool but is not fun. I go to bell high school home of the haven Knight . My friend are Keira, Jak, Daxter,Torn, Ashlin, Tess and Rayn. Kiera trying to move out she feels like her dad is trying to control her and she no longer wants to be known as daddy's girl well just to him not to the entire school, then there Jak after his mom disappeared off the face of the earth no really she didn't leave or divorce she just proofed but since then his dad has been his only parent but his dad is never there that much being the owner of a very successful business really distance you from the ones you love. Daxter he is very chatty hard to fit in a word when he is talking he has recently been in accident having to do with an uncontrolled substance which make him a very short fuzzy animal ostell thing or what we call him we haven't come up with anything better to call him . Torn what a strange name were his parents torn between two normal names ha cheesy joke but well torn is a good friend he kind of no not kind of very serious not the best babysitter but very dependable. Ashlin she a real good friend she doesn't take any crap she is very caring though .Tess she lives in her own world were its normal to love mutated animals or aka human that have been mutated she is very pretty which add to her innocence. Rayn a real charm to be around mostly because her voice sound British or some other accent it sounds like she rehearsed everything she is going to say for every day.