Well heres the REAL chapter one. I hope you like it. I read the first
chapter and was like well I need to bring good ole nemmy and stuff later.
And REVIEW ya monkeys.
"PAYNE!!" "you got a phone call" a man in a prison uniform called to a man in a cell. "huh?" "you heard me" he said as he unlocked the cell. Max Payne got off the bench on the wall and walked over to the guard. "Lets go" "who's callin me?" "not like I have any family" max said, more to himself then the guard. "he said his name was Trent or something like that" the guard replied. "well here ya go" the guard said as he lead Max into a room with a phone. "thanks" max said as the other man left the room. Max walked over and picked up the phone
Max: Hello? Trent: is this Mr.Payne? M: yes, who are you? T: my name isn't important, but if you must call me something, call me Trent. M: Well "Trent" do I know you or something? T: no you don't. M: well then why did you waste my time by calling? T: to tell you you're a marked man. M: tell me something I don't know, but the old bitch is dead, and easers gone clean. T: or so you thought. The new owner is just as bad as the old. Do you know what a B.O.W is Mr.Payne? M: no I don't. should I? T: Bio Organic Weapon. B.O.W. its easers new money maker. M: Bio Organic Weapon? Like some type of virus? T: there base is a virus, yes. T: its very hard to explain on the phone. And I have a feeling you will find out soon anyway. T: I have sent a package. Inside is a lockpick. M: you know they record these calls right? T: the line is secure. M: how do you know? T: I have my ways. M: wont the metal detectors pick it up? T: its maid of a special metal known as TG-1, metal detectors wont pick it up. M: nifty. Why are you doing this? T: I have my..hold on a second. M: sure.
The scene changes to Trents office. We see Trent at his desk and can hear a knocking from the door. "yes, come in" trent says as a person wearing a long trench coat steps in. we cant make out his face for the shadows in the dark office. "can I help you?" Trent asks the stranger. "yes, you can" the man says as he raises a silenced Glock handgun. "by dying." Bam bam bam. Three shots, 2 hitting trent in the chest, one in the neck. Trent slumped down, landing on his desk, dead. The scene switchs back to Max, who heard the faint shots. "Mr. Trent? Mr.Trent?!" he yelled into the phone. "damn." He mutterd as he hung up the phone and walked to the door. The guard was standing out side the small room. "All done?" he asked. "yep" "well then lets go." The guard said as he lead Max back to his small cell.
Hope ya liked the real chapter one. Well leave me a review and tell me!!!! Yes that wee little button down there.
"PAYNE!!" "you got a phone call" a man in a prison uniform called to a man in a cell. "huh?" "you heard me" he said as he unlocked the cell. Max Payne got off the bench on the wall and walked over to the guard. "Lets go" "who's callin me?" "not like I have any family" max said, more to himself then the guard. "he said his name was Trent or something like that" the guard replied. "well here ya go" the guard said as he lead Max into a room with a phone. "thanks" max said as the other man left the room. Max walked over and picked up the phone
Max: Hello? Trent: is this Mr.Payne? M: yes, who are you? T: my name isn't important, but if you must call me something, call me Trent. M: Well "Trent" do I know you or something? T: no you don't. M: well then why did you waste my time by calling? T: to tell you you're a marked man. M: tell me something I don't know, but the old bitch is dead, and easers gone clean. T: or so you thought. The new owner is just as bad as the old. Do you know what a B.O.W is Mr.Payne? M: no I don't. should I? T: Bio Organic Weapon. B.O.W. its easers new money maker. M: Bio Organic Weapon? Like some type of virus? T: there base is a virus, yes. T: its very hard to explain on the phone. And I have a feeling you will find out soon anyway. T: I have sent a package. Inside is a lockpick. M: you know they record these calls right? T: the line is secure. M: how do you know? T: I have my ways. M: wont the metal detectors pick it up? T: its maid of a special metal known as TG-1, metal detectors wont pick it up. M: nifty. Why are you doing this? T: I have my..hold on a second. M: sure.
The scene changes to Trents office. We see Trent at his desk and can hear a knocking from the door. "yes, come in" trent says as a person wearing a long trench coat steps in. we cant make out his face for the shadows in the dark office. "can I help you?" Trent asks the stranger. "yes, you can" the man says as he raises a silenced Glock handgun. "by dying." Bam bam bam. Three shots, 2 hitting trent in the chest, one in the neck. Trent slumped down, landing on his desk, dead. The scene switchs back to Max, who heard the faint shots. "Mr. Trent? Mr.Trent?!" he yelled into the phone. "damn." He mutterd as he hung up the phone and walked to the door. The guard was standing out side the small room. "All done?" he asked. "yep" "well then lets go." The guard said as he lead Max back to his small cell.
Hope ya liked the real chapter one. Well leave me a review and tell me!!!! Yes that wee little button down there.