(Disclaimer: I do not own star trek in anyway shape or form, besides my imagination is not nearly as awesome to create anything close to a Vulcan. Anyway, this is just a very rough, and I mean extremely rough, first chapter of a star trek fan fiction based off the new movie NOT any other star treks. I saw the 2009 movie and that is what drove me to star trek. I have a character and a very rough plot line but what I have established is still not enough to make a very compelling story after the fact the sub mystery is solved. I'm still working on improving the plot in my mind and as I write but be warned that there probably won't be another chapter out soon, for I am already working on another fan fiction that I want to finish before I devote myself to this one (plus I have to refine this one as I stated above). But when I thought up this rough plot, I will not lie, I actually wanted it to be part of the New Star Trek film, be that either the plot or the character was used, (which I know there will be a new movie coming out in another year or so since the first was so well received by the public), please do not judge me on this for I know that is extremely unlikely for that to happen plus it is a bit over shooting of how well my imagination is compared to the writers of the Star Trek film (which I applaud them btw for making the movie so damn good). Plus I would LOVE to point out that I WILL NOT be using star dates in this fan fiction! For two simple reasons; 1) I don't know what the hell star dates are (in fact they confuzzled the heck out of me when I tried to learn them anyway) and 2) I have no idea how to use star dates and nor do I know how to use them properly, so instead of using them wrongly and making it so that the plot runs into the past them jumps 100 years into the future by accident, I decided not to use them at all. I'm sorry if this upsets anyone but all I can say is that I'm terribly sorry at my lack of star dating abilities. But if you do like my fan fiction please comment on it so I know whether or not I should continue this story, I will continue in my mind but whether or not I put it on paper is up to you. I definitely appreciate comments and such and they fuel me to write. If you want any other back round on the character and/or the beginnings of the fan fiction idea please check my profile or message me ^^)

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"Captain! Communications with Star Fleet are being jammed!"

"Mr. Sulu how's our status?"

"Shield's are holding up captain but we can't stay like this for much longer than a couple more hours."

The U.S.S Enterprise had been sent to investigate disappearances of Vulcan children on the new planet Vulcan's had decided to call their new home. But also at the same time Earth children have been disappearing as well, but Star Fleet disregarded these reports as abductions by fellow humans. On board the bridge sat young Captain James Kirk, his face was beginning to turn white but he was keeping his cool for he new that his first mission aboard the U.S.S Enterprise had been more dangerous than this one, but he just couldn't shake the feeling that something was wrong. The Star Ship had entered Orbit around the New Vulcan planet and had investigated with other Vulcan's on the surface. Kirk was frustrated with the little knowledge they had on their missing children and of there no emotions; even though his first commander and close friend Spock showed no emotion, it still frustrated him when he saw no emotion in their eyes. The Enterprise was just out of view of the planet when a strange reading had come up on Spock's screen. It was anew ship slightly larger than the Enterprise. When Kirk ordered that the ship's appearance be put on screen, even Spock was puzzled even though he wouldn't use that term.

The new ship had no visible name, nor did the design match any records of space ships that Star Fleet new of. The ship's exterior couldn't be explained by Kirk but he new that it was a very advanced ship at that. Estimating by the size and shape of the ship Kirk guessed that it was a scientific ship, bent on research, but who did it belong too? And why was it in the Vulcan planet vicinity? Kirk ordered that communications be contacted with the ship to see if they new anything about the disappearances. But as soon as communications were established the ship had opened fire. Now Kirk was trying to keep the ship from being pulverized in space against the new force. And now without contact to star fleet Kirk didn't have to option of telling them about their current situation.

"Captain, there's a transmission coming from the ship."

Kirk nodded and the transmission appeared on the screen Spock walked over to Kirks side and raised an eyebrow as the alien's features became clear.

"Interesting."

The male alien's facial features were more or less human but different in many ways. It appeared to have a completely flat nose its eyes were just like slits; Kirk could see movement behind them as if the alien were examining the whole bridge. It appeared to have horizontal ears that ended abruptly as it hit its wavy scruffy blonde hair. Its skin seemed to have the rough appearance to it and with a slight hint of bright yellow in it. Kirk watched as the alien's eyes landed on him and he cleared his throat.

"I am Captain James Kirk."

"Hello captain," The alien said in a rather smooth deep voice, "I hope you find my English acceptable."

"You speak it very well," Kirk answered with a smile as he put his elbows on his knees and leaned against his hands, "May I inquire that you stop attacking the Enterprise or I'm afraid we will have to return fire soon."

"This is a research ship, we do not intend on fighting a space ship, I know we would be overwhelmed." And with the end of his sentence the missiles stopped.

"A very logical conclusion." Spock added under his breath.

Kirk ignored the comment by Spock but laughed slightly at it. He returned his attention back to the screen. "We just wanted to ask you a few questions about a matter that we were sent here to investigate."

The Alien hesitated for a minute and then answered, "Ask away captain, we have nothing to hide."

"I want to know, if you know anything about the disappearance of some Vulcan children?"

The alien did not respond back verbally but only with a shrug. Kirk sighed but behind his face, the wheels in his mind were turning.

"May I ask your name before I end the transmission then?"

"My name is Commander Hisper."

"Commander," and Kirk nodded, "how long will you be staying in the vicinity?"

"Only a couple more hours, we are repairing our warp drives that were damaged last take off."

"Thank you for the cooperation Commander."

And with that the transmission ended. Kirk put his mouth on his hands and began humming into them as if deep in thought. Spock turned to him with a slightly raised eyebrow.

"Captain?"

Kirk finally got up and looked over to Spock.

"Scotty, control the bridge for a couple of hours."

"Sir?"

"Spock come with me."

Kirk and Spock quickly headed to the elevator while, as they pasted, every officer in the bridge stared at Kirk until the door closed leaving Spock and Kirk alone.

"Captain, would you care letting me in on this plan of yours, assuming there is a plan."

"Oh there's a plan. That commander is hiding something from us."

"That is easily seen Captain, for his voice seemed to be to calm and his eyes to fixed on you."

Kirk looked up at Spock and Spock returned with a monotone answer, "Normally when a person is trying to lie, he picks a focal point strongly and/or a steady voice so it doesn't seem like he's lying."

Kirk nodded with a dumbfounded look and smiled a bit as the elevator doors opened and Kirk headed towards the transportation room.

"So are you planning to investigate the ship without being seen?"

"Precisely Spock. But we won't have to look far for if we can just find a man and you can read his mind, we'll know doings on the ship and we'll see what it is their hiding if any."

"A very rough plan."

"I know. But Star Fleet shouldn't be worried for the ship doesn't seem to be entwined with Star Fleet for according to your records, this ship has never been seen."

Kirk and Spock entered the transporter room and Kirk told the engineer of where they were headed. The engineer nodded and Spock and Kirk stepped onto the platforms. And within seconds they were gone.

Kirk and Spock reappeared on the other space ship in a dark corridor. Its walls were all shiny metal but the floor was damp and sticky as if a live swamp plant were alive on the ground. Kirk gulped and plugged his nose for the smell while Spock seemed to be unaffected. They ventured down the corridor and soon it opened up into a huge room. The swamp plant floor seemed to be growing up the walls, and the stench in here worsened. The room was so large Kirk could barely make out the back wall and he couldn't even begin to find the ceiling. The room was very dark and had a slight greenish color to the very little light that was in the room. Kirk suspected that the metal walls bounced the light from the source making it seem like there was lighter than what actually was. But they didn't have enough time to enjoy the terrible scenery. Spock was already looking around and found ten's upon thousands of beds and everyone of them was hooked up to a tube that ran into the middle of the room and disappeared into the floor.

"Captain, it looks like a hospital."

Kirk was looking in the other direction and came to the same conclusion. It was almost exactly like a hospital but why?

Suddenly a girl began yelling which made Kirk jump out of his skin. Spock took his arm and began guiding him over to a bed about ten down and Kirk could see violent movement on the bed. There was a teenage girl laying there her face contorted in pain. She looked human and her blonde hair soaked in sweat. She had been chained down onto the bed and she was fighting against them with all her might. Her yelling soon became screams of pain as her eyes shot open to reveal bright blue, blood shot, terrified eyes. Her pupils fell on Spock and Kirk and she turn her head to them as her body began to shake violently and her veins began to pop out.

"Help… me…" She managed to say. But as soon as the words exited her mouth a yellowish liquid came from the tubes leading to her bed. They then saw that many tubes were connected to her body at different places and the yellow liquid entered her body and with each second the girl screams became more desperate. Kirk stepped forward and grabbed a chain but Spock held him back.

"Hold on captain, we don't know what will happen I you stop the procedure, you could kill her."

Kirk gulped and watch till the girl finished screaming and the liquid retreated. Spock grabbed her hand as the girl fainted and checked her pulse.

"She's alive and she's human."

But then a computer turned on over the girl's bed and her body signals were displayed over head.

"Subject, Melody. Dose, # 12. Last dose to be presented in 4 hours. Body systems normal. Human heart, stable. Breathing Stable."

Then a vial of green liquid came out from the wall next to the girl's head and the computer continued.

"Please take next dose in order to complete procedure."

Kirk turned to Spock and he raised an eyebrow.

"I do not see any Vulcan children, but it is curious why a human girl would be on a ship that is unregistered in the Star Fleet records."

"I say we get her back to the ship and see what they're doing to her."

"I agree, we should figure out what their doing before we make any assumptions, plus it would be useless to ask them directly. Even though they seem peaceful, I'm sure they will do what it takes to keep their secret just that."

"Enough logic Spock and help me."

Within the half hour the two men had un hooked the teenage girl and Spock was now carrying her in his arms. Kirk had grabbed the vial and they contacted the Enterprise. Soon they had beamed upon their ship and Bones was there to take the girl. Within the next three hours everything on the ship had returned to normal. The ship was heading back to earth and Kirk was just waiting on Bones' report on their new cargo. And with that thought the communicator buzzed.

"Jim, I think you need to be down here in order for this to make sense."

"Alright Bones, I'll be right down."

Kirk and Spock went straight down to sick bay and found Dr. McCoy staring over some papers.

"Dr.?" Spock asked.

"Jim, I just don't understand it."

"Don't understand what?"

"Her… her readings. They just don't make sense."

"Here Bones." And Dr. McCoy handed the papers to Kirk with Spock reading them over his shoulder. Soon Kirk was scratching his own head and finally shook it.

"But that's impossible."

"It can't be impossible captain if it what were reading is true."

"Thank you Spock" Kirk said his frustration with Vulcan's logic coming up again.

Dr. McCoy stepped in as he led them over to the girl.

"The only conclusion is that she's a science experiment. Her DNA is normally human but the yellow liquid you described to me seems to be something that's making her DNA and blood mutate. I don't understand what the liquid comes from but I have concluded that she needs the next dose in order to survive."

"So she is just a Ginny pig, in a DNA experiment. Spock check the missing kids list on earth."

"Already on it captain."

Kirk looked over the girl and her white face made a string in his heart pull, he felt sorrow for her and couldn't help wonder how long she had been on that ship being tortured. But suddenly her eyes shot open and she grabbed onto Kirk's arm. She gritted her teeth and in her eyes Kirk could see immense pain.

"BONES!"

"Jim! Hold on!"

McCoy came over with the vial and needle, he began injecting the girl with the liquid and suddenly the girl's eyes rolled back into her head and she continued to scream. Her IV tank began boiling as if her red blood was boiling and Spock came back into the room completely calm despite what was happening.

"I have concluded that she is one of the disappear children, she was in child protection agency's when she disappeared."

"Never mind that now Spock."

As they watched the girl began grabbing at the edges of her bed and tears streamed down her face. The blood in her IV began to turn brown and then slowly it turned green. Spock went over to examine it and he turned back to Kirk surprise behind his eyes.

"Vulcan blood sir."

"What?"

"But she's human?"

"I can't explain it."

Suddenly the girl grabbed Spock's hand and forced it over her ears and Kirk watched as her ears began to slowly grow and become pointed.

"Please…" the girl managed to say, "make … the… pain stop!"

She finally screamed one last time until she fainted again. Her hand came down onto the bed side table knocking the water glass off and it smashed to the floor. Everyone was silent including Spock as they looked at the girl. Finally McCoy took Spock's arm and took out a bit of his blood.

"Dr.?" Spock asked.

"Hold on."

McCoy then took some blood from the girl and put them both into the computer. His face went white.

"She's no longer human."

"What?"

"Who ever put her through this… experiment. They changed her."

"Explain Doctor."

"She's half Vulcan now."

Silence fell over the room as the three men looked down at the girl that was called Melody.

(FYI this is a super rough draft of the first chapter. If I want to I may go back and add more details but I really just wanted to get this down so you guys could read it.)