Konnichiwa minna-san! This is basically my first fic so please be nice!!!!
I'm TheGreatCheese's friend. You may have heard of me. Onegai, no
flames. Just constructive criticism! ^_____________^
Disclaimer: *sigh* Inuyasha and characters are property of Rumiko Takahashi. If I owned Inuyasha there would be a lot more bishounen, Miroku wouldn't ruin the M/S moments, and Shippo's theme would play more often. Yep.
Inu torture!!!
KawaiiKirara: Hi, it's meeee! It's time to torture the cast of Inuyasha. Just gotta set the bait first.*lays out a bathtub full of ramen*
~A few seconds later~
Kagome: Inuyasha slow down!!!!!!!!
Inuyasha: Must..eat...ramen..*drools*
*Sango, Miroku, Shippo, and Kirara are close behind*
Kagome: Grrrrrrrrrr....OSUWARI!!!!!
*Inuyasha falls face first into the ramen*
Inuyasha: Kuso!
KawaiiKirara: Great, now that everyone's here we can start!
Miroku: Well hello there I-
KawaiiKirara: Hiraikotsu!!!! *bangs Miroku with Hiraikotsu*
Sango: Where'd you get that!?!?!?!?
KawaiiKirara: I sto--I mean..I found it!!!!.um..yeah.heh..*sweatdrop* Anyway, you guys are gonna help me with some stuff.
Inuyasha: Feh! Says who!?
KawaiiKirara: Says meeeeee! *pulls out tape recorder and hits play*
Tape recorder: OSUWARI!!!! ( It's Kagome's voice
Inuyasha: Gahhhh!!!! *hits floor*
KawaiiKirara: Now if we could PLEASE START!!!!!!! *pulls out giant bag of popcorn* BEHOLD!!!!!!!!!
Inuyasha: *sniff sniff* MMMMMmmmmmm!!!!! What is that stuff?????
KawaiiKirara: It's......popcorn!!! The nutritional snack that should be part of anyone's day!
Everyone: Pop..corn...
Inuyasha: STOP YAPPING AND GIVE ME SOOOME!!!!!!!!
KawaiiKirara: Okie dokie!! ^-^ *throws handful of popcorn at Yasha's head*
Inuyasha: Ow.*munch* Wooooooooowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STUFF *MUNCH* IS GGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRREEEEEEEATTTTT!!!!!
KawaiiKirara: *Throws tiny piece in the air*
Inu: *Jumps up and catches it*
KawaiiKirara: Everyone catch on? o_~ Take a handful and get ready!
Everyone: *Throws handful in different directions*
Inuyasha: *somehow that will never be known catches every piece before they hit the ground*
KawaiiKirara: Behold! Glue! *glues a piece of popcorn to Inuyasha's back*
Inuyasha: *frantically trying to reach popcorn* Eeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! Waaaaaaaaaa
KawaiiKirara: Ok, now that I'm out of popcorn. What shall we do next.*scans area* Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!! *runs around in circles while humming I Am*
Shippo: Hurry up!
KawaiiKirara: Ah kawaii!!!!!! *huggle*
Shippo: Kagome she's scaring me!!!!!!! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!
Kagome: Get away from Shippo-chan!
KawaiiKirara: He's mine!!!!
Kagome: Noooo!!!!!
Miroku: CAT FIGHT CAT FIGHT CAT FIGHT! CAT FI-OW!!!!
Sango: *pick's up Hiraikotsu* SHUT UP!!
Miroku: Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!! Everyone else is busy, right...
Sango: HENTAI!!! *HUWACK*
Miroku: *twitching on the ground*
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well...hmmmm.....I had writers block..I probably won't continue this fic....give me advice please!
Disclaimer: *sigh* Inuyasha and characters are property of Rumiko Takahashi. If I owned Inuyasha there would be a lot more bishounen, Miroku wouldn't ruin the M/S moments, and Shippo's theme would play more often. Yep.
Inu torture!!!
KawaiiKirara: Hi, it's meeee! It's time to torture the cast of Inuyasha. Just gotta set the bait first.*lays out a bathtub full of ramen*
~A few seconds later~
Kagome: Inuyasha slow down!!!!!!!!
Inuyasha: Must..eat...ramen..*drools*
*Sango, Miroku, Shippo, and Kirara are close behind*
Kagome: Grrrrrrrrrr....OSUWARI!!!!!
*Inuyasha falls face first into the ramen*
Inuyasha: Kuso!
KawaiiKirara: Great, now that everyone's here we can start!
Miroku: Well hello there I-
KawaiiKirara: Hiraikotsu!!!! *bangs Miroku with Hiraikotsu*
Sango: Where'd you get that!?!?!?!?
KawaiiKirara: I sto--I mean..I found it!!!!.um..yeah.heh..*sweatdrop* Anyway, you guys are gonna help me with some stuff.
Inuyasha: Feh! Says who!?
KawaiiKirara: Says meeeeee! *pulls out tape recorder and hits play*
Tape recorder: OSUWARI!!!! ( It's Kagome's voice
Inuyasha: Gahhhh!!!! *hits floor*
KawaiiKirara: Now if we could PLEASE START!!!!!!! *pulls out giant bag of popcorn* BEHOLD!!!!!!!!!
Inuyasha: *sniff sniff* MMMMMmmmmmm!!!!! What is that stuff?????
KawaiiKirara: It's......popcorn!!! The nutritional snack that should be part of anyone's day!
Everyone: Pop..corn...
Inuyasha: STOP YAPPING AND GIVE ME SOOOME!!!!!!!!
KawaiiKirara: Okie dokie!! ^-^ *throws handful of popcorn at Yasha's head*
Inuyasha: Ow.*munch* Wooooooooowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STUFF *MUNCH* IS GGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRREEEEEEEATTTTT!!!!!
KawaiiKirara: *Throws tiny piece in the air*
Inu: *Jumps up and catches it*
KawaiiKirara: Everyone catch on? o_~ Take a handful and get ready!
Everyone: *Throws handful in different directions*
Inuyasha: *somehow that will never be known catches every piece before they hit the ground*
KawaiiKirara: Behold! Glue! *glues a piece of popcorn to Inuyasha's back*
Inuyasha: *frantically trying to reach popcorn* Eeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! Waaaaaaaaaa
KawaiiKirara: Ok, now that I'm out of popcorn. What shall we do next.*scans area* Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!! *runs around in circles while humming I Am*
Shippo: Hurry up!
KawaiiKirara: Ah kawaii!!!!!! *huggle*
Shippo: Kagome she's scaring me!!!!!!! Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!
Kagome: Get away from Shippo-chan!
KawaiiKirara: He's mine!!!!
Kagome: Noooo!!!!!
Miroku: CAT FIGHT CAT FIGHT CAT FIGHT! CAT FI-OW!!!!
Sango: *pick's up Hiraikotsu* SHUT UP!!
Miroku: Saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!!!!! Everyone else is busy, right...
Sango: HENTAI!!! *HUWACK*
Miroku: *twitching on the ground*
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well...hmmmm.....I had writers block..I probably won't continue this fic....give me advice please!
