So this is my first story ever! Yay!

Please do review I want to know how to be better at story writing for school!

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LILY POV.

Lily Evans was having a terrible day. First of all, she got into a fight with her boyfriend: James Potter, nothing too Sirius (LOL couldn't resist!) but she was still hurt. Secondly, Death Eaters kidnapped her. After lunch, Lily went to her dorm in the Gryffindor common room. It was a rainy, Saturday afternoon, so going outside wasn't the best idea and she needed to complete some homework due in a few days. Her best friends: Mary MacDonald, Marlene McKinnon and Alice Prewett had already finished their homework to her horror! How could they have done their homework so fast? Well I guess they don't have amazingly cute, kind and athletic boys like James Potter to make them so distracted… whoops there she went falling into a daydream about him AGAIN! She absentmindedly said the password to Gryffindor tower and walked up to the girls' dormitories. She was halfway through her Transfiguration essay when she heard a scream somewhere in Hogwarts then a lot of noise. Panicking, she grabbed her wand and ran out of Gryffindor tower to see a massive battle going on! Looking to her right she sees a helpless first year being carried off. Dodging some spells then deflecting a few she managed to get just behind the Death Eaters and the First Year. The first year was screaming and crying hysterically. Summoning up her Gryffindor courage she yelled

"Hey! Death Eater, leave her alone!"

He turned around and smiled a great big, yellow-toothed smile (GROSS!)

"Well, well, well. What do we have here?" He sneered, eyeing her head girl badge "Our head girl standing up for a pathetic first year?"

"She's not pathetic, you are! Killing and torturing people for fun and calling people of my kind worthless names!" She said her voice shaking with anger. Then she gasped and her hand flew to her mouth figuring out what she just said.

"Your kind, eh?" He grinned "How 'bout I let go of this little first year mud-blood in exchange for you, a seventh year mud-blood and head girl?" Slowly he put the terrified first year down.

She took some time to process those words. She could save this poor, terrified first year from a terrible fate and let her live her life or she could let her go with this death eater and probably not make it. Thinking about she became more determined. This girl deserved to live life as long as she could, where Lily had lived longer and really lived at that.

"F-fine" Saying that really let the heaviness of what was happening dawn on her. She would never see James or her parents or her friends ever again.

His smile grew even bigger. Then he suddenly walked up and grabbed Lily's hand and let go of the first year. She ran off but quickly turned her head around to have one more look at Lily before she nodded and Lily understood she was going to get help.

Relief spread all over Lily's body if she could just stall the Death Eater before he moved anywhere until the girl came back with help she could make it out of the mess she was in….She never got to finish her thought with a jolt she had the sensation of squeezing through a tube overwhelmed her and she knew she was doomed.