My F.N.A.F. Story

Ok, this is my first story. I'm going try my best, tell me if like the 1st script of the story.

Disclaimer: I don't own any F.N.A.F based characters; just Kobe (Me), Rose, Noah, and Luis.

P.S. Thanks to CupcakeFan-1 for believing in me!


Kobe and rose are walking into the diner

Rose: Come on daddy, let's go!

Kobe: Ok, ok!

On the stage are Freddy, Bonnie, and Chica. Foxy is at Pirate Cove. Kobe goes sits by an near by table and rose goes into the crowd near the stage.

Chica: Hi little girl, is it your birthday today?

Rose: YES!

Chica and rose walk off together and the rest of crew follows (besides Foxy).

Chica: Hey Freddy, can you make sure the kids are ok while me and Bonnie take this sweet girl to her Dad?

Freddy: Ok Chica!

Bonnie and Chica walk to the table where Kobe is.


So how was it? Left a Review if you like it! Also tell me what I can work on so I can make it better. THX! = )