'sup. Name's ciaobu. I've written a lot of fanfics, but this is my first one on fanfiction. I just started watching Madoka Magica and I really enjoy it, so I hope you enjoy this guro-like fanfic! Also this is really short, because I wanted to focus on that one scene. IT REEKS OF 'PLEASE WRITE ME'. (And a lot have written about it, despite her death was like three seconds long. Looks like I'm not the first one. Oh well.)
I have no experience in the department, of writing stuff like this. orz
And obviously I don't own Madoka Magica and I wonder why I have to have this disclaimer thing anyway.
off with her head
I won't be alone anymore.
Blam.
Madoka and I are going to work together from now on, forever and ever!
Mami gives a happy smile. Blam, replies her rifle, and she tosses it aside.
Ah. So there it is. Hello, witch. Were you waiting for me? That's very nice of you.
"Tiro Finale!"
Her beloved signature move pierces through the witch instantly, and she gives herself a smile and a mental pat on the back.
And then-
I'm frozen
I'm frozen
I'm frozen
I'm frozennnnnnnnnnnn-
"Hello there Magical Girl. I've had cake for a while, and I need a change."
Mami can hear it. It just gives her a little look, of amusement and satisfaction.
"You didn't see that coming, did you, girl?"
Move, move, move, move, move
WHY CAN'T I MOVE I NEED TO RUN, ATTACK, ANYTHING-
"Your face… it's priceless. Smile for the camera- the camera that is for my mouth! For your delicious looking friends there, they'll want to see you smile-"
MAMI MOVE
She was paralyzed by its sharp teeth and smile and its eyes. Oh, there's a way to sum it up, just everything about it!
I heard that beheading was the most painless way to die back then, even though it sounds crude.
SQUISH. SQUELCH.
I can feel it; it hurts it hurts it hurts a lot oh my god my body, my head, they're separated
SHATTER. CRUNCH. CRUNCH.
THUD.
Her body goes. It hits the ground with a somber note, and it rolls for a few seconds and there comes that witch-
"Just like chicken, your head tasted, and-"
CRUNCH, CRUNCH, CRUNCH.
Shatter, went her Soul Gem.
Now I can't feel anything anymore. WHY CAN'T I FEEL ANYTHING ANYMORE?
I'm dead I'm dead I'm dead-
Her world goes white.
"Say goodbye to your friends, girl." the witch said, still smiling.
"I won't say goodbye," Mami replied.
She looked to the 'sky'.
"Kyuubei? Are you there? Remember, I asked you one thing. My wish remember?"
She smiled slightly.
"I wished that I wouldn't die."