hey guys if you read my other story i know i said that i wouldn't be writing anytime soon but i already had this for some time and decided to post i hop you like! I didnt't know what to title my story but this came to mind so here it is! Enjoy :))


I, Elizabeth Bennet, walked down the street with a James Patterson mystery novel in tow. I was headed towards my favorite coffee shop, Starbucks; I came every day since I started college. In the autumn and winter months I would get a Chai Latte and during the spring and summer months I would get a Vanilla Cream Frappe. I loved doing this I would stay for about an hour or so and then go to my classes. I was English major. I didn't know what I wanted to do but I knew that I loved to read and write and that was all that mattered to me right know. I would worry about jobs later. "Lizzie!" I turned my head and saw my beloved sister Jane Bennet come rushing towards me. "Jane what are you doing here you hate coffee!" she still had that sweet smile on her face she was up to something "I do hate coffee but you don't and I know where to find you if you have class in an hour or two" I smiled "You know me to well Jane and it worries me!" Jane laughed "Ha Ha funny; now we have to go home" she said grabbing my hand "But I have class in like half an hour" she smiled "I know" I groaned and followed her, it was apparent in my posture that I didn't enjoy it. We walked out of the coffee shop an walked towards Jane's car. You see I walk everywhere so I don't have a car and since Jane lives with me and rather drive than walk she bought a car. "Jane where are we going?" she kept walking and didn't answer my question. "Jane!" she laughed "Alright I'll tell you we are going to our Parent's house" I stopped walking and didn't move an inch "What!?" I rushed up to Jane who was unlocking the door of the car "Why Jane Why?" she laughed my unhappiness apparent. "There is a Welcoming Party tonight for the new neighbors we have and we need to go shopping" I looked at her "Do you think I care about some neighbors that the only time we will see is when we go home for Christmas and even then we might only see them at their mailbox!" Jane laughed again but not at me, with me. "Mother says they are young, handsome, rich men from England" as soon as the 'from England' hit me my eyes lit up I mean the other stuff was good but English accents are hot in my eyes. They are so sexy! "They are English Guys!" Jane laughed "I knew that would help" we got in the car and drove to my parent's house in Buffalo, New York.


"Jane you're here! Oh hello Lizzie how are you?" I smirked, "Hello Mother" I walked into the family room to find my sister, Mary, a brown hair mousy girl playing the piano "Hello Mary" she didn't look up but returned my greetings. I walked into my father's study "Hey Daddy!" I rushed in a hugged him. "Hello my dear Lizzie" I smiled "Are you going to the party tonight?" I asked he shook his head no "I have come to the age when parties are not amusing anymore and plus I embarrass your Mother" I laughed. The rest of my siblings came rushing into the study "Lizzie!" Kitty and Lydia ran up to me smothering me in hugs. Lydia and Kitty had bleached blonde hair and green eyes, they were twins and did everything together and thought the same things and did the same things. Lydia was more in the lead though. "Lizzie can I borrow your Audrey style black dress" Lydia asked. I tapped my finger on my chin in thought "Why can't you wear something of your own?" I asked "Because everybody has seen me in my dresses!" I laughed "Alright but just this once" I knew that I would never get that dress back. "Thank you" she rushed out the room and up the stairs with Kitty at her feet. "Jane! I need your help" I yelled through the house as I headed towards my room. "I'm in your room already and I have a few dresses picked out for you!" I grinned that was Jane for you. I never was a girl that worried about my looks. She did my makeup and hair every day since we started middle school until we started college.


"Jane you know me to well you know that and" she cut me off "And it worries you am I right?" I smirked "Yes you are like always All Mighty Jane" Jane blushed. Jane was the real beauty in the family she has blonde curls and her hair color was natural, she has light blue eyes that were pure and sweet. Her blonde curls fell on her shoulders and had a bounce to it. She had an hourglass figure that was just right. I on the other hand had brown unruly curls, if I didn't fix my hair it would look like I had just woke up. I had big brown eyes too big to my liking! My skin was a tan complexion and had little barely there freckles on my nose. I had a lanky figure no curves no nothing. Jane held out a deep red strapless floor length dress "Try it on" I grabbed and put it on. "I like it but no" I handed her the dress "So what are this guys we have to parade around tonight like?" I asked. Jane handed me a green halter dress that was also floor length I tried it on and it received a nod "The names is Charles Bingley a young wealthy lawyer that is partners with the owner of the chain of law firms William Darcy who is also young and wealthy." She grabbed a light blue floor length sleeveless dress. "Oh so let me guess Mother wants us to date one of these young wealthy man and then one day marry one of them" Jane zipped up the dress "Yes she does; so what do you think?" I smiled "That you look amazingly gorgeous and you will make one of this men fall in love with you! And I bet you that Charles Bingley is the one to fall in love with you" she blushed "I doubt it; he will probably see another girl to fall in love with maybe like you!" I shook my head "When I stand by you I will just look like an average girl and you will look like a goddess!" she blushed even more and I laughed. "Alright know let's do something with that hair of yours!" I groaned "Fine" Two hours later Jane put her tools down "There I'm finished!" I stood and looked at myself in the floor length mirror and gasped "Oh My God!" I screamed. My sisters and my parents came rushing into to my room and they all said in unison "Oh My God! Lizzie!" I burst out laughing and Jane joined me. "So how do I look?" I asked everybody "You look beautiful" that was my dad "Lizzie you are so gorgeous!" that was Jane "Well you look better than usual" that was mother. Lydia and Kitty were giggling and Mary just stood there surveying the room. "Well thank you" I said to everybody. "Shouldn't we leave already?" Jane asked Mother "Oh yes we should!" she turned and rushed out of the room "Come on girls we don't need to be late!" she called through the house. All the girls were in a rush to get their purses and shoes on, myself included. I wanted to meet the young and wealthy business men from England.


"Jane I want you to drive tonight, I can't drive in heels" Mother said "Alright Mother" Jane said in a sweet voice. "See Elle this why you aren't the favorite daughter you never help out you only smirk all the time" Mother said as she got in the black Nissan Sentra. "Mother I'm riding in my Mustang okay" Mother nodded "Alright just get there on time" I smiled "Okay Mother" I got my keys out my purse and headed towards my candy apple red convertible mustang GT. I got in the car and put the keys in the ignition and headed towards the Lucas's house where the party is being held. I turned the radio on and was singing along with "Bleeding Love" by Leona Lewis. I turned on to Main Street and the car suddenly stopped "What the?" I tried to start the car but it wouldn't. Nobody was on Main Street at the moment they were either at their house or at the party. I got out of the car and walked to the hood and opened it. Smoke poured out of the hood. "Oh great maybe I should have got the engine checked just like Dad said" a car came by at a slow speed. I waved my arms in the air. The car stopped when the saw me and a car with smoke stopped on the side of the road. Two young men got out of the car and headed towards me. One had flaming red hair and blue eyes and a silly grin plastered on his face. The other one had dark brown hair and cold ice blue eyes. He had a miserable look on his face. "Do you need any help" asked the red head. "Yes, the name is Elizabeth Bennet but you can call me Lizzie" he smiled "My name is Charlie Bingley and this is my best friend Will Darcy" I smiled "You are the new neighbors then" I asked "Yea I guess we are" we just stood there for a minute "Well I guess I should take a look at your car huh?" said Will. Will walked over and took and look under the hood and then adjusted some stuff and walked to the driver's side and started the car. He walked back to his car and then got in and signaled to Charlie to follow "Well I guess we must be off then" Charlie said with a smile. Will just glared at me the whole time. I don't know what is stuck up his ass but something is. "Well I'll see you at the party then" Charlie smiled "You're going!" he said. I nodded. He smiled and waved and walked to his car and got in and they drove away. I got in the car and made my way to the party as well.

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