OKAY OKAY! The moment you see this story, don't lash at me. I'm not a great writer, and plus I hate swearing. But if you review you don't like my story or simplicity, do it politely.

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The bell of Shibusen rang. Maka quickly rushed to school. As she ran, she also thought about the past few days. Every time it seems like she's in a pinch, or going to be killed by an evil human, someone would come and save her. She had no idea who it was, though.

At class, she was being bothered by it. Who was that person? Why did he...or she do it??. She thought about it too much she fainted.......

"Gee, are you alright?"

Maka woke up in the infirmary, lying on a bed. Surrounding it was Soul, Black Star, Tsubaki, Kid, Patty and Liz. They were all wondering whether she was alright.

"Hey!! You can't just faint like that in class! Why 'cha do that anyw-"

MAKA CHOP-ED

"Shut up, Black Star! Now if you guys don't mind, I only want Soul to be in here! Go Go Go!" Maka exclaimed. She was incredibly agitated, but why? She just seemed so confused, unclear.

After 10 minutes, she started to talk to Soul.

"So, why did you faint, anyway, Maka?"

"I don't know. I kept thinking about those past few days. That mysterious person who always saves us. Who the heck is that person?"

There was a total silence for a whole minute, which Maka broke by Maka-Chopping Soul's head.

"This is so stupid."

"What are you talking about??"

Ugh!!! what's going on??!!? my head is getting a big headache I dunno what I'm saying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Someone help meeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

Maka fainted after that thought...again. But for 3 hours...

That very moment she woke up, it was already after school. She still felt woozy. all that thinking. She's so sick of it. There's only one thing to do: find that person. So 10 minutes later, after she stop feeling sick, she called Soul.

"Hey, Soul! I think we should go for some Soul-Hunting!"

"Huh? Why all of a sud-"

"No time! Let's go!"

Well, at least she's feeling better...

After about 6 minutes, the duo arrived in the middle part of the city. So far, not a single soul. Until...

"Hey, Maka! Look!"

Sure enough, there was a pre-kishin. It looked like a poker card.

"Alright! Soul!"

"You got it!"

The duo started fighting. Again, it was difficult to defeat him.

This is going well. Thought Maka. But maybe this is a bad idea. I feel....weak

She just kept getting tortured. Big mistake. Immediately, she was crushed against the wall of a building. Or was it a big mistake........?

Indeed not. Soon, the mysterious person came and slashed the pre-kishin. Now, with a closer shot, Maka could tell it was a girl.

This is my chance...Maka thought. So finally, once she stood up, she shouted

"WHO ARE YOU!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!"

I know, bad chapter. Hopefully around chapter 4 or 5 it will get better. But for now...XP