Lexforpresident: The year is 1309 England. I'm trying a new writing approach, so I really need criticism or comment so I can see what people think about this.
It was a normal day when I woke up. I smelled fresh ham that was being cooked. I slipped into a green tunic and went down stairs.
My mother didn't like me being in the kitchen so I sat in the dinning room at the table. Lately my dad has stopped sending letters: I don't even know what he looks like! My dad left my mom 13 years ago a week before I was born. He had to leave because of a war.
Just then my mom called me for breakfast. She didn't say much, but she finally broke the silence. "The spook is town," she said. "Why? I didn't here of any witches in town," I said. "Well you see he's taking you as his apprentice---
Immediately I dropped my ham with my mouth wide opened. I mean why would I want to be a spook nobody likes them and thier job is really scary. They have to deal with monsters: I hate monsters.
I didn't have to ask to know the answer. My dad was an apprentice of a spook, but he quit when he met mom. My mom wants me to be one because she needs money. The taxes are increasing every day.
"He's coming for in the morning," she said. "You should tidy yourself up and pack your things."
Lexforpresident: ok that's the prolouge tell me what you think