Hello fanfiction world! This will be my first fanfic, so I apologize in advance if any of my writing is amateurish, sloppy, and otherwise, bad. I'll attempt to make the chapters long, but again, I have no experience with this stuff, so don't expect much. I won't be gay and say "NO FLAMES PLZ!!!!!" If you dislike my story, that's fine, so long as you have a reason. While you're at it, how about some advice, so I could improve it. I also hate Mary Sues, so I won't try to overpower my OC's that much. This is another "person goes into the Naruto world" story, but this time it's a guy! Won't this be interesting. I bored you enough, on with the story!
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, Naruto Shippuuden, or anything else that appears other than my OC
Chapter 1: The New Beginning
Today was a tough day for Yoru Mugen. Just fifteen years old and he already has a lot of pressure on his shoulders, with his parents divorced and his mother going out with her boyfriend nearly every night. Since she spent most of her time out, Yoru had to take care of himself, including money.
God hated him for some apparent reason and he was loaded with schoolwork, which he had no time to do since two of his co-workers were out and he had to cover both their shifts and work overtime.
Exhausted, Yoru flopped onto his bed, finally getting a chance to relax. After a while of just sitting there, he decided to check his e-mail.
"Junk, junk, junk, death threats…" Yoru muttered as he scaned his inbox. "Ugh, another chain letter."
He was never fond of chain letters, messages that say something will happen to you if you don't send the message to a certain amount of people. Frankly, Yoru thought that it was just something done out of boredom. If it was true, he would have died at least 20 times by now. This one, however, said to only send to three people and you get three wishes, but wish carefully.
Yoru was about to delete the message when he paused.
'Perhaps this will be interesting.' He mused. So without another word, Yoru sent the message to three different people. Not a second later, he got another message, saying how to use the wishes.
The message read that he had to think of his first wish, then delete the message and two more of the same message will appear consecutively. Now Yoru was interested. If this was fake, which he was confident that it was, then the person obviously put some work into making it. While he was still unsure how the person knew when he sent the message, Yoru was pretty sure it was possible and that there was a sad person with no life in a cave somewhere watching monitors to see if people forwarded his messages.
Regardless, he was still impressed by the lengths the person took and thought that the least he could do was take this seriously. The message also said that he could not wish for any way to obtain more wishes. 'Smart.' Yoru thought. When given wishes, he always knew that the smart thing to do would to wish for an infinite amount of wishes, so if you mess up, you could start all over.
'Now, what would my first wish me?' Yoru asked himself. Many times had he seen movies and books about this situation and how their wish always backfires and the wisher ends up regretting what they have done. 'Be careful what you wish for, huh.'
Suddenly, he had thought of a way to get around the sly ways for wished to backfire. 'I wish that my next two wishes would not backfire and would go exactly how I want it' Yoru thought to himself.
After deleting the message and making his first wish, he smirked to himself. 'Seems I have outsmarted the genie' he snickered. 'Ah, if this doesn't work out, I should totally be a lawyer.'
Once Yoru received his second message, however, he had more of a problem with his wish.
"Should I have all the money in the world? What about super powers? I'm not too good with the girls either…" he mused out loud. From the corner of his eye, Yoru saw a poster of the Akatsuki, his favorite organization/characters from the manga and anime Naruto. Some say he had an obsession with the Akatsuki, since he self-proclaimed that he would do anything for them, even to go as far as to betray his family, friends, and country.
Thus Yoru decided to wish to be able to travel to the Naruto Universe, but he paused. 'What if I need to come back here at any given time?' Like always, Yoru had a habit of planning for every case scenario. Quickly formulating a plan, Yoru had decided to wish for the ability to teleport to any location in his world AND the Naruto world by picturing the place in his mind.
Now it was time for his final wish. Yoru leaned back in his chair and rested his chin on his hand. He had to think, what could he wish for so when he arrived at the Naruto world, how can he be of any use to the Akatsuki? Surely just the power of teleportation wasn't enough to even survive.
After more brainstorming, Yoru had chosen to wish for the ability to use charka with the amount and the control of a mid-level Jonin. Why hadn't he chosen to be S-ranked? He had assumed if he made himself too powerful, he would attract unwanted attention to the Akatsuki, blowing their cover. Also, both Madara and Pein would probably view Yoru too dangerous to live if he was that strong. Both of them were criminals and as expected were wary of anyone who would offer to be their ally. Those who were strong enough to provide them a challenge would probably be killed before they could betray the Akatsuki.
After finishing his wishing, Yoru stood up and attempted to travel to the Naruto world. Breathing in and out, he closed his eyes and started to concentrate. In fact, he was concentrating so hard, his brother walked by, raised an eyebrow, and then said, "Dude, don't take a crap on the floor."
Embarrassed, Yoru collapsed on the floor in defeat.
"Yep, just another fake chain mail." He sighed dejectedly. "And I put so much thought into it to. Now my brain hurts." As he went to get up, he imagined what it will be like if the wish actually worked.
All of the sudden, Yoru felt a strange sensation throughout his body and walked right into a tree.
"What the fuck?" he grimaced. "Why the hell is there a tree in my bedro-…" Yoru paused as he finally took in his surroundings. He wasn't in his house anymore. In fact, he was pretty sure he wasn't in America at all.
"Forest, huge ass trees, yep, I'm in the Naruto world." Grinning, Yoru started to walk and before even his second step, he felt two large charka signatures approaching rapidly, or at east what he assumed were charka signatures.
Yoru's eyes widened when the two figures dropped down to examine the unknown threat that seemed to have appeared out of nowhere. Those two were none other than Itachi and Kisame. Judging from the cut on Kisame's face, Yoru concluded that they had just attempted to break into Konoha and kidnap Naruto before Shippuuden.
"Hey Itachi-san, should we kill this guy? He looks kinda strong." Kisame nudged his partner.
"No, we must not waste any time. Konoha might have already sent an ANBU squad after us." Itachi replied, still never taking his eyes off Yoru. Yoru, however, immediately got down to the ground and bowed to them.
"Itachi-sama, Kisame-sama, please, take me back to your base. If I could just speak with your leader, I could be an asset to your entire organization!" Kisame raised an eyebrow at this strange fellow while Itachi narrowed his eyes.
'This boy, he knows too much. I should kill him here. However, he might have information on others as well. No, I should take him with me. He just might as well help us.' After his inner debate, Itachi finally nodded and replied, "Follow us, but we won't slow down for you, so you better keep up."
Yoru nodded furiously, all the while grinning like a madman, forgetting the fact that he doesn't know how to travel by tree jumping. That all changed when the Akatsuki members took off into the trees and Yoru instinctively jumped after them.
Yoru looked shocked for a moment before regaining a blank face and analyzing the phenomenon.
'It seems that with my Jonin level charka I also gained the experience using it for the basic thing. I wonder… can I to tree climbing and water walking too?' He made a mental note to test that when they finally arrived to… wherever they were going. Yoru inwardly smirked. 'Well, this is an interesting start.'
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Whew! Yay, my first chapter for my first story is finished! It might be a little short, I don't know your definition of short, but now I know how hard it is to actually make long chapters, so kudos to those who make long chapter. Remember, advice is always good, so if someone sees something wrong with the story, feel free to tell me. Also, there might be spelling and grammar mistakes, although probably more grammar than spelling, so if there is anyone who wants to beta this, tryouts start…now! Goodbye and goodnight fanfiction world! Hasta la vista, fuckers, I-I mean baby!
