This is my first story and i am kinda nervous, so could you please review, i would love to know how i am doing

It was never suppose to be this way. We used to be so happy and now I have never felt so alone. All of those time we said i love you and always and forever. Was it all a lie?

I sat in the back of a taxi, driving through another dull and depressing town. It wasn't home. Rain was falling down hitting the car windows. The sky was dark and all you could see were the gray clouds.

After being zoned out for a bit, Haley was brought back to reality when Viviane started to speak.

"You're gonna have to talk some time. We can't just keep jumping in taxi after taxi driving." Viviane said.

"Yeah i know, YOU DON'T HAVE TO TELL ME OVER AND OVER AGAIN." Haley was at boiling point and it wasn't because she was angry, it was because she was tired and just wanted to go back into her own bed and get a good night sleep.

"Just remember that i am here for you and whatever happens i am sure everything will turn out ok in the end." Viviane said, very concerned about her sister.

"Not this time." Haley said sadly as she turned back to look at the window as tears started falling from her eyes.

After driving around for a couple more hours, they had finally made it to Florida and to a house that they could called their home. Or maybe their old home. Hayley got out of the car and ran to her bedroom letting tears fall freely down her face.


Hours later Haley was still in her bedroom crying. Viviane and Haley's mum Lydia were getting worried.

"Did Lucas and her get into a fight again." Lydia asked.

"No, i think it is much worse this time or else she would have never left Tree Hill." Viviane said.

"We should have never left Haley and let her live at Karens. We don't know anything going on with her life." Lydia said as tears started to form in her eyes.

"Mum you cannot blame this on yourself. Haley said we could leave. She said that she spent most of her time at Lucas' anyway."

"Your right, I am going to go up there and start being the mother i should be and find out what is going on with our Haley Bob." Lydia started making her way up the stairs, her heart breaking more and more every step she climbed listening to her daughters cry get even louder.


Lydia knocked on the door and waited for her daughter to let her in but sadly she didn't get a response. Lydia opened the door and saw Haley curled up into a ball on her bed cuddling Mr Waffles, her childhood teddy.

"Haley, would you like something to eat, I made your favourite Mac and Cheese?"

Hearing Mac and Cheese made Haley cry even more.

"Oh sweetie, i didn't want to make you cry even more. What happened?" Lydia asked feeling really bad that she made her daughter start crying again.

Haley lent into her Mum boiling her eyes out, she whispered "It's all my fault." And after she said that she started crying even heavier than she did before.

Lydia sat next to her daughter though out the whole night as Haley cried herself to sleep.

"Honey you have to tell me what happened."

"Hayley sniffed her nose and said, "Mum, i messed up, it's all my fault." And with that Haley started crying loud again.

Shhhh baby, it's okay. What happened?"

Okay Mum, it's a long story. I will start from the beginning.

Thanks :)