Hi all! This here would
be my very first fanfic...EVER! Please read, review, and tell me what you
think!
Disclaimer: I don't own
Cardcaptor Sakura, cause if I did, I wouldn't have to type this out ^_^. That,
and I would have a Syaoran of my very very own. (heehee)
I like script format for
ease of dialogue. If it doesn't work out for you, write me a review and let me
know. I use some Japanese vocabulary in here; refer to the list at the bottom
if you need to.
"Name":..... -
Dialogue
*....* - Thoughts
[.....] or (....) -
Description/Action
Now...on with the show!
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Advice
(and other funny things)
A fanfic by Noelle
Chapter One: S+S and the Blushing Contest
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The sun was shining,
cherry blossoms floated on the morning breeze, the air hung with the odor of
freshly prepared breakfast, and...
"HOEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!"
Oh yeah, that and
Kinomoto Sakura was late for school.... again. Even at 18, the green eyed,
auburn haired girl couldn't shake the bad habit. A grown woman on the
outside, yet still young at heart. There wasn't a day she didn't think about a
certain someone without blushing...but now wasn't the time for that.
"I'm
LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!"
[Sakura bolts out of bed,
grabs some clothes, makes a ruckus and runs down the stairs. Of course,
Kero-chan had been trying to wake her up since an hour ago. Oh well.]
Fujitaka: Ohayo
Sakura-san~!
Touya: (with a snicker)
You're late. KAI-JUU ^_^.
Sakura: Kaijuu
janai yo!
[Sakura digs her heel
swiftly into Touya's shin while eating breakfast *rapidly*, then bolts out the
door in an
instant.]
Touya: (grimaces) I-itai!
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Seijou High: 1st Period
Sakura: (out of breath)
Did I.... make it?
Tomoyo: Juuuuuuuust
barely. If you don't get in your seat within the next second.... um. Never
mind.
[Terada-sensei walks in
greeted by the sight of everyone at their desks except, of course, Sakura.]
Terada-sensei: (smiles)
Ano...Kinomoto-san...?
Sakura: Hai, hai. (plops
herself down in her desk, cheeks red with embarrassment.) * Hoe...I bet I'm
even more red than when I think...of.... him...* (She blushes even more at the
thought, and furiously shakes her head to get rid of the distraction)
Terada-sensei: Ok
everyone, as you all should know, the cumulative Physics test is tomorrow.
[a collected groan from
everyone in the classroom]
Terada-sensei: But before
we worry about that, we have a "new" exchange student from Hong Kong
that'd I'd like to introduce... (Gestures to someone outside the door)
[This got Sakura's
attention....]
Sakura: *Hey...this
sounds awfully familiar...Nah, couldn't be. *
Terada-sensei: (writing
Syaoran's name on the board).... Li Syaoran.
[A well built young man
with messy chestnut brown hair and intense eyes walks into the classroom,
turns, looks at Sakura and smiles...blushing just a bit as he does so.]
Sakura: (blushes
with surprise + embarrassment) *HOE!?.... it's really him.... I didn't
expect...*
Syaoran: ... (A/N He's
speechless ^_^)
[Syaoran quickly looks
down, suddenly finding the floor very interesting. Too bad his face was the
color of a ripe tomato. Poor guy.]
Tomoyo: (sees the
blushing going on between the two) *sigh* Did I just have deja vu or does this
happen a lot?
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Seijou High: Lunch Period
The grass was green, the
sun was shining, and even more cherry blossom petals were flying all over the
place (where do they all go anyway? They must have one heck of a street
cleaner!).
Tomoyo, being the
intuitive girl she is, figured out what was going between her best friend and
Li-kun. So then, somehow, Sakura and Syaoran ended up being alone by (what
else) a Sakura tree. Of course, Tomoyo wasn't far enough away to whip out her
camcorder and catch some great shots of the two...KAWAII!!!
[cut to Sakura and Syaoran...who
have no luck in establishing good eye contact without turning away and
blushing]
Sakura: ..... (blush)
Syaoran: ......(blush)
Sakura: ...It's really
nice to have you back Syaoran-kun. (smiles faintly)
--------[cue Sakura's
frantic thoughts]
*Oh Kami-sama, does he
still feel the same about me? Maybe he got a girlfriend or something? Ooh,
he turned out really cute especially that...! Hoeee~ What am I thinking?!
I...have to ask him about...*
Syaoran: ..... It's good
to be back. (also smiles faintly)
--------[cue
Syaoran's frantic thoughts]
* It's good to be back
with you is what I should say...Argghhh! Why can't I just SAY IT?! Maybe
it's cause she turned out so cute...I mean look at those....! Eeeeeeeh?! No
no...I have to ask her if she still...*
Sakura: .....(blush)
Syaoran: .....(blush)
Tomoyo, hidden very well
in the bushes, sees that all this is going nowhere. Syaoran and Sakura are both
shaking their heads, faces bright red, and no real conversation happening for
at least 15 minutes.
Tomoyo: *Mou~ Those two
need some serious help before they have a nervous breakdown! Sakura-chan will
never get together with Li-kun if this keeps up... maybe I should call
Hiiragizawa-kun for help? (blushes) I-I mean, I need all the help I can get and
he is good company...*
To be continued!
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~End of Chapter One~
Some Vocab:
Hoe - Sakura's trademark
phrase for surprise, excitement, etc. Similar to Huh, What, Why.
Kaijuu - monster. Touya's
favorite teasing phrase. "kaijuu janai yo!" means "I'm not a
monster!"
Ano - umm...
Hai - yes, or any
affirmative
Itai! - ouch!
Ohayo - good morning
Kawaii - cute
Mou - A sort of
"geez!"
Kami-sama - the way
Japanese people say "God"
Oh...for this next part:
Konyanyachiwa - The way
Kero-chan says "hello" or something to that effect
Dou da? - How was/is it?
Honana - The way
Kero-chan says "See ya later!"
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Preview for Ch.2:
Sakura: Tomoyo steps in!
Eriol lends a hand! Syaoran beats around the bush a little more! All this and
more coming up in "Advice (and other funny things) Chapter TWO! Jikai mo,
Sakura to isshoni...RELEASE!
Leave it to Noelle!
(otherwise known as author's notes)
[Pops out of a big sign]
Noelle: Konyanyachiwa!!!!
So how did you like it? Was it good? Tell me about it. Yeah, I love it when
those two blush at each other. It makes any CCS episode worth my time. It's
been a few years since they saw each other last, so I'm gonna leave the
blushing in there, even if they did express their love for each other in the
2nd movie (or end of the manga). I mean, what would you do if you suddenly saw
your boyfriend/girlfriend in so many years to find out that they're...FINE?
Hehe. This is a fanfic, and anything can happen. ^_^
Kero-chan: HEY! You took
my spot!
Noelle: Ehehe.... sorry?
Kero-chan: *Ahem* Dou da?
Did you brush your teeth and do your homework? Honana!
