Fragile Hearts

This is a poem, obviously. I do have some ideas for my next chapter of Sister Of A Baker, but on the way home from a college open house yesterday I was bored and decided to make up a poem on the pad of paper I brought to take notes on. I wrote it and showed it to my sister, who instantly knew who the poem was supposed to be written by and for. She wouldn't stop transitioning through smiling through the sweet parts and frowning through the sad. After which she told me it showed their emotions well, but that's just one person's opinion, my readers and reviewers matter too. So I want your opinion on my little poem. Of course I don't own Sweeney Todd, if I did don't you think I would've already written a poem or story about that?

Fragile hearts are hard to mend

Just because they're easy to fuse

Fragile hearts are hard to defend

Simply because they're simple to use.

Fragile hearts sing a sad song

They can be quite easy to break

Fragile hearts can do no wrong

Some bad memories are harder to shake.

A certain baker owns this heart

For a barber's love she'll strive

To another he owes his own heart

He doesn't notice she's alive.

Her fragile heart starts to flame

Whenever she sees his sly grin

She wishes he could feel the same

Her love for him cannot wear thin.

She wants his love

He wants her away

He's a dark angel from up above

She's an annoyance in every way.

Her fragile heart keeps her down

And she is much too kind

In unrequited love she'll drown

Her love for him will keep her blind.

So I hope that you enjoyed my poem. I acted on a whim and just went with what Mrs. Lovett's gut would tell her to say about how she feels about Sweeney, vs. how it seems he feels about her. Again, I hope that you liked it.

On two more personal notes. I have made a decision and, I'm going Dominican. I was accepted and so far, it's pretty certain that I'm going to D.C. next year! Oh, and more good news. I'm going to be an aunt, again! My older sister, who had a baby some time ago, is having another in a couple of days actually! It's exciting and my sister (whose one year older than me-not the prego one) and I are very excited to be aunts to two! Oh and, they already know it's a girl. So they talked it over and, they're calling her Emily!!! Corpse niece, lol.