Chapter 1 - Removed Plot
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Eventually they narrowed it down to two shirts, a white shirt belonging to Spy and a red t-shirt belonging to Scout. Sniper's fur was darker than it was before as the two approached with the shirts. Medic held out Spy's shirt while Demo held out Scout's. Sniper grabbed the white shirt before tearing it two shreds in anger.
Demo tossed the wolf the red t-shirt as Sniper yelped with joy. He was acting like a small puppy rather than the large wolf he was.
"Hey Med-" said Scout as he entered the infirmary. He stared at the two of them and the wolf currently playing with his dirty laundry."What the hell?!"
"Umm guten Abend, Herr Scout." Medic said in an overly cheerful voice. Demo just waved in Scout's general direction, his single eye reading the book.
"What the hell is going on and why is that Thing snogging my shirt?!" Scout shouted.
(Note: Changed it from heading in a gay direction to avoid being called a copycat or it being shunned by my gay-hating family.)
Across the battlefield at the BLU base, the BLU Scout causally wrote something down in the book she held. The BLU Spy slide next to her, his pundit smokey smell caused her to wrinkle her nose. "Aw geez, don't you ever stop smoking those things?" She asked.
"Are you ready for zhe battle tomorrow morning?" He rebutted.
"No. When are we ever ready for a fight?" She replied.
"Zhat is true. What are you writing?" He pointed to the book on her lap, a pen between the spine.
"Nothing that involves you, Spy."
(Note; I was going to introduce the BLU team's Scout but decided to change it.)
