Hey guys, this is my first fanfic and I think it really crappy but I'm
putting it up anyway so enjoy, I think
Dear Syaoran
I love the way you talk the way you walk I love the way you laugh, the way you smile I love the way your hair blows in the wind
'What else do I like bout Syaoran?' Sakura asked her self bitting her pencil. 'I dunno, you tell me,' said Tomoyo, doing her Maths work. 'Everything bout him,' said Sakura hugging her pencil, 'His perfect.' 'That's what you say about every guy you liked,' said Tomoyo lifting up her head. 'But Syaoran is different, his sweet, cute, kind and caring, most of the guys I liked are jerks,' said Sakura. 'Yeah whatever, what are you doing after school?' asked Tomoyo. 'Buy a box of chocolates then give it to him, then maybe go to the bay, what are you doing?' asked Sakura. 'I dunno, I think I'll go to the bay with you,' said Tomoyo. 'Okay,' said Sakura with a smile, 'now help me with the poem.'
- After school
'I wonder what Chocolate I should give him this time?' asked Sakura walking around the Chocolate shop. 'Don't you think he would be like a bit sick of eating just chocolates,' said Tomoyo. 'Yeah, I'll get him candy this time!' said Sakura happily. Tomoyo dropped her head shaking it. Sakura bought the Candy and they walked out and Eriol came to greet them. 'Hey guys,' said Eriol smiling. 'Hey, how come you weren't at school today?' asked Tomoyo. 'I was helping Nakuru, she said I could have the rest of the day off, what that?' asked Eriol pointing to Sakura's bag. 'That's Chocolates for you- know-who, maybe you should get Chocolates for Tomoyo,' said Sakura with a smile. 'Do you want some?' asked Eriol, with a little blush. 'Yeah, okay,' said Tomoyo, blushing. 'Cool, just wait here,' said Eriol and he ran into the store. 'His getting you chocolates, how cute!' said Sakura smiling. 'I wonder what flavour,' said Tomoyo, with her index finger on her cheek, 'I hope it cameral coated Chocolate.' 'You think he'll like the candy?' asked Sakura. 'Duh, if he doesn't you'll know tomorrow morning,' said Tomoyo with a smile. 'Yeah,' said Sakura. Eriol came back out of the store and walked to them. 'So what did you get?' asked Tomoyo excited. 'I'll tell you later k, you're going to the bay right?' asked Eriol. 'Yep,' said Sakura. 'Cool, I'm coming with ya,' said Eriol.
- In front of Syaoran's house
They walked over to Syaoran's house and Sakura said 'Wait here.' She got the note and the candy out and quickly walked to the door placed it on the floor and knocked on the door. She was going to walk to the side of the house but Syaoran had quickly opened the door and Sakura fell into the garden. Syaoran looked down and picked up the Candy and note. He read it and looked around and saw Eriol waiting on the path. He gave Eriol a weird look and asked 'Are you the secret admirer?' 'Huh? Me? Are you stupid?! I'm not gay,' said Eriol waving his arms around. 'Good, did you see who dropped this off?' asked Syaoran. 'Nope, sorry,' said Eriol. 'Okay, I'll see you tomorrow,' said Syaoran. 'Yep, bye,' said Eriol. Syaoran closed the door and Eriol sighed. 'Whoa, that was close,' said Tomoyo coming out from behind the tree. Sakura got up and quickly ran to the path. 'That hurt,' said Sakura brushing all the dirt off her. 'Oh my god, see Syaoran's face after he read the letter and looked at Eriol, that was so cute!' laughed Tomoyo. 'Really? Damn, I missed it,' said Sakura. 'That was so embarrassing,' said Eriol, with his hand over his face and shaking his head. 'Come on, lets go to the bay,' said Sakura with a smile.
At the bay (note: the bay has no boats k)
They all sat down on the bay and watched the water. 'Hey, what happened to the chocolates?' asked Tomoyo. 'Huh? Oh yeah,' said Eriol getting it out of the bag. He opened the box and Tomoyo's face lit up, 'Oh my god, you got my favourite!' 'Yeah, duh,' said Eriol. Tomoyo hugged Eriol, both falling onto the sand. 'Cute!' thought Sakura taking a piece of Chocolate and eating it. 'You're such a sweetie!' said Tomoyo kissing Eriol's checks. 'Hey, it was nothing,' said Eriol blushing. Sakura looked at them imagining it was her and Syaoran, lying on the hot sand with the sun setting, feeding each chocolates (or candy) and then kissing each other after every bite, 'How Romantic,' Sakura thought. 'Hey, aren't you going to eat some?' asked Eriol smiling. 'Yeah,' said Tomoyo reaching over to get one, 'open you mouth,' said Tomoyo holding a Chocolate in front of Eriol's mouth. He opened his mouth and Tomoyo put it in his mouth and he chewed it. She took one for her self and ate it.
The sun was setting and Eriol and Tomoyo were still lying on the sand feeding each other and Sakura was just watching the water. 'Hey, it's getting late, I better go home, I'll see you tomorrow okay,' said Sakura standing up. 'Do you want me to walk you home,' asked Eriol swallowing the Chocolate Tomoyo just put in his mouth. 'Nah, it's okay, you stay here with Tomoyo,' said Sakura picking up her shoes and bags. 'Okay, see you tomorrow Sakura,' said Tomoyo smiling. 'Yeah, bye,' said Sakura walking away waving. She walked up the little path looking at the flowers on both sides of the path. They always reminded her of Syaoran smiling. She walked onto the bigger foot path and looked at the other couples walking around, holding each others hand, the girls head resting on the guys shoulder looking at a rose he gave to her. Sakura could imagine her and Syaoran doing that romantic stuff. Suddenly Sakura felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned around and saw Li smiling at her and saying, 'You are the most beauty girl I have ever seen.' 'Really?' said Sakura blushing deeply. 'Sakura, Sakura.' said a voice. 'Huh?' said Sakura shaking her head. She looked up to see who it was. 'Huh? Oh, Yukito, hey,' said Sakura, blushing. 'Hey, are you okay Sakura?' asked Yukito, with his hand on her shoulder. 'Yeah, I'm fine,' said Sakura. 'Okay, I was just going to your house, how come you're out at this time?' asked Yukito walking with Sakura. 'I was just down at the bay with a few friends,' said Sakura smiling, 'and it isn't that late.' Yukito smiled, 'so hows your brother been?' 'Fine, but he still annoys me,' said Sakura looking up at Yukito laughing, 'Yeah, big brother's can be annoying.' 'And so can little sister's,' said Touya from behind. 'Huh? Oh Touya, I didn't see you,' said Sakura, with a kinda shocked look. 'Hey Touya, we were just walking to your house,' said Yukito, smiling. 'Yeah, do you wanna have dinner?' asked Touya. 'Yeah sure,' said Yukito.
So how do you like my fanfic, the second chapter is coming up soon k, rr and no flames k, cya
Dear Syaoran
I love the way you talk the way you walk I love the way you laugh, the way you smile I love the way your hair blows in the wind
'What else do I like bout Syaoran?' Sakura asked her self bitting her pencil. 'I dunno, you tell me,' said Tomoyo, doing her Maths work. 'Everything bout him,' said Sakura hugging her pencil, 'His perfect.' 'That's what you say about every guy you liked,' said Tomoyo lifting up her head. 'But Syaoran is different, his sweet, cute, kind and caring, most of the guys I liked are jerks,' said Sakura. 'Yeah whatever, what are you doing after school?' asked Tomoyo. 'Buy a box of chocolates then give it to him, then maybe go to the bay, what are you doing?' asked Sakura. 'I dunno, I think I'll go to the bay with you,' said Tomoyo. 'Okay,' said Sakura with a smile, 'now help me with the poem.'
- After school
'I wonder what Chocolate I should give him this time?' asked Sakura walking around the Chocolate shop. 'Don't you think he would be like a bit sick of eating just chocolates,' said Tomoyo. 'Yeah, I'll get him candy this time!' said Sakura happily. Tomoyo dropped her head shaking it. Sakura bought the Candy and they walked out and Eriol came to greet them. 'Hey guys,' said Eriol smiling. 'Hey, how come you weren't at school today?' asked Tomoyo. 'I was helping Nakuru, she said I could have the rest of the day off, what that?' asked Eriol pointing to Sakura's bag. 'That's Chocolates for you- know-who, maybe you should get Chocolates for Tomoyo,' said Sakura with a smile. 'Do you want some?' asked Eriol, with a little blush. 'Yeah, okay,' said Tomoyo, blushing. 'Cool, just wait here,' said Eriol and he ran into the store. 'His getting you chocolates, how cute!' said Sakura smiling. 'I wonder what flavour,' said Tomoyo, with her index finger on her cheek, 'I hope it cameral coated Chocolate.' 'You think he'll like the candy?' asked Sakura. 'Duh, if he doesn't you'll know tomorrow morning,' said Tomoyo with a smile. 'Yeah,' said Sakura. Eriol came back out of the store and walked to them. 'So what did you get?' asked Tomoyo excited. 'I'll tell you later k, you're going to the bay right?' asked Eriol. 'Yep,' said Sakura. 'Cool, I'm coming with ya,' said Eriol.
- In front of Syaoran's house
They walked over to Syaoran's house and Sakura said 'Wait here.' She got the note and the candy out and quickly walked to the door placed it on the floor and knocked on the door. She was going to walk to the side of the house but Syaoran had quickly opened the door and Sakura fell into the garden. Syaoran looked down and picked up the Candy and note. He read it and looked around and saw Eriol waiting on the path. He gave Eriol a weird look and asked 'Are you the secret admirer?' 'Huh? Me? Are you stupid?! I'm not gay,' said Eriol waving his arms around. 'Good, did you see who dropped this off?' asked Syaoran. 'Nope, sorry,' said Eriol. 'Okay, I'll see you tomorrow,' said Syaoran. 'Yep, bye,' said Eriol. Syaoran closed the door and Eriol sighed. 'Whoa, that was close,' said Tomoyo coming out from behind the tree. Sakura got up and quickly ran to the path. 'That hurt,' said Sakura brushing all the dirt off her. 'Oh my god, see Syaoran's face after he read the letter and looked at Eriol, that was so cute!' laughed Tomoyo. 'Really? Damn, I missed it,' said Sakura. 'That was so embarrassing,' said Eriol, with his hand over his face and shaking his head. 'Come on, lets go to the bay,' said Sakura with a smile.
At the bay (note: the bay has no boats k)
They all sat down on the bay and watched the water. 'Hey, what happened to the chocolates?' asked Tomoyo. 'Huh? Oh yeah,' said Eriol getting it out of the bag. He opened the box and Tomoyo's face lit up, 'Oh my god, you got my favourite!' 'Yeah, duh,' said Eriol. Tomoyo hugged Eriol, both falling onto the sand. 'Cute!' thought Sakura taking a piece of Chocolate and eating it. 'You're such a sweetie!' said Tomoyo kissing Eriol's checks. 'Hey, it was nothing,' said Eriol blushing. Sakura looked at them imagining it was her and Syaoran, lying on the hot sand with the sun setting, feeding each chocolates (or candy) and then kissing each other after every bite, 'How Romantic,' Sakura thought. 'Hey, aren't you going to eat some?' asked Eriol smiling. 'Yeah,' said Tomoyo reaching over to get one, 'open you mouth,' said Tomoyo holding a Chocolate in front of Eriol's mouth. He opened his mouth and Tomoyo put it in his mouth and he chewed it. She took one for her self and ate it.
The sun was setting and Eriol and Tomoyo were still lying on the sand feeding each other and Sakura was just watching the water. 'Hey, it's getting late, I better go home, I'll see you tomorrow okay,' said Sakura standing up. 'Do you want me to walk you home,' asked Eriol swallowing the Chocolate Tomoyo just put in his mouth. 'Nah, it's okay, you stay here with Tomoyo,' said Sakura picking up her shoes and bags. 'Okay, see you tomorrow Sakura,' said Tomoyo smiling. 'Yeah, bye,' said Sakura walking away waving. She walked up the little path looking at the flowers on both sides of the path. They always reminded her of Syaoran smiling. She walked onto the bigger foot path and looked at the other couples walking around, holding each others hand, the girls head resting on the guys shoulder looking at a rose he gave to her. Sakura could imagine her and Syaoran doing that romantic stuff. Suddenly Sakura felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned around and saw Li smiling at her and saying, 'You are the most beauty girl I have ever seen.' 'Really?' said Sakura blushing deeply. 'Sakura, Sakura.' said a voice. 'Huh?' said Sakura shaking her head. She looked up to see who it was. 'Huh? Oh, Yukito, hey,' said Sakura, blushing. 'Hey, are you okay Sakura?' asked Yukito, with his hand on her shoulder. 'Yeah, I'm fine,' said Sakura. 'Okay, I was just going to your house, how come you're out at this time?' asked Yukito walking with Sakura. 'I was just down at the bay with a few friends,' said Sakura smiling, 'and it isn't that late.' Yukito smiled, 'so hows your brother been?' 'Fine, but he still annoys me,' said Sakura looking up at Yukito laughing, 'Yeah, big brother's can be annoying.' 'And so can little sister's,' said Touya from behind. 'Huh? Oh Touya, I didn't see you,' said Sakura, with a kinda shocked look. 'Hey Touya, we were just walking to your house,' said Yukito, smiling. 'Yeah, do you wanna have dinner?' asked Touya. 'Yeah sure,' said Yukito.
So how do you like my fanfic, the second chapter is coming up soon k, rr and no flames k, cya