Naruto: Konohas Bloodsheding Whirlpool
This is my first fic and I would really like it if you left me ways I could improve and things of that nature
Fair warning I will update this story irregularly just putting if out there.
In this story Naruto is about the same age as Itachi and is a retired shinobi. Only a few select people know he's a shinobi. Lemons later in the story.
Opening his sparkling blue eyes he found himself blinded. Quickly closing his eyes he clumsily raised from his comfortable bed and touched his feet to the cold unforgiving floor.
He rushed to the window and shut the blinds. After doing so he opened his eyes, suddenly felt a rush of pain flood his head.
"Ah fuck, why the hell do I always go overboard with that sake" the hungover blond said.
He traveled to the kitchen to get his special hungover treatment. Ramen.
After finishing his ramen he headed to his room to get fresh clothes and take a shower.
After Naruto got out of the shower he put on a black skin tight shirt that shows of his well toned body and over that he put on a plain white shirt. He then put on some black cargo pants and put on some wooden geta.
Running out of his door he quickly looked around to see if anybody was around. When he was sure there nobody there he activated a seal to protect his apartment.
Strolling down the street he was shot several glares by several people, ignored, or greeted by some. He then stopped as he spotted the very beautiful women staring at him. He looked at them and sent them a dazzling smile. They immediately blushed and ran in a shop. He then chuckled and kept moving.
Going the direction he goes almost everyday he finally ended up at a little stand known for it's delicious ramen.
"Ohayo old man how's it going" Naruto said.
"pretty slow this morning, but now that you showed up I got my work cut out for me" the "old man" said.
Hearing a specific voice Ayane popped her head out "Oh Ohayo Naruto I thought I heard you."
"Ohayo Ayame what's going on" said Naruto as he was rubbing his temples.
"Naruto did you over drink last night I told you to go easy on the sake" said Naruto's surrogate sister.
"Hai I know but you know how it goes you tell me to do something and I do the opposite" said the blonde.
"Here you go Naruto your usual hangover special" stated Teuchi as he handed him a bowl of ramen.
At that time a person with gravity defying silver hair walked into the stand and made his way to Naruto.
"Ohayo Kakashi how you been" said Naruto all while stuffing ramen in his mouth.
Kakashi, as well as Teuchi and Ayame know of Naruto's past as a ninja Kakashi has stayed Naruto's friend since they meet as Naruto was one of the greatest ninja he's ever met, him growing up an orphan and clanless only to become one of the greatest ninja in the world left a big impression on Kakashi considering he watched over him as an anbu and a sensei in the anbu.
The reason nobody knows that Naruto is a ninja is because he was trained by anbu and stayed in anbu because the council refused but the third hokage would not allow Naruto to go untrained.
When Naruto retired Kakashi retired from anbu but stayed a jounin In active duty.
"Ohayo Naruto, I'm good I just received my genin squad and we will have a test tomorrow." said Kakashi.
"That's good" said Naruto finishing his fifteenth bowl.
Wide eyed Kakashi asked himself "How long was I here"
"Huh what was that" Naruto said as he paid for the food" he didn't even think twice about the money since he has saved up enough money from his ninja days.
"Oh nothing let's go talk somewhere else" said Kakashi with a certain tone in his voice.
Naruto understanding that tone stood up and headed to Naruto's house.
On the way there people were questioningly looking at the two wondering why the jounin was walking with Naruto, ignoring the looks they headed in the apartment complex and towards Naruto's floor.
Once there Naruto looked around once again to make sure no one was around and undid his seals. Kakashi not surprised since he knew Naruto was a seal master, even better than jiraiya. As they headed in the room Naruto shut the door and activated some seals to prevent anything from coming or leaving.
"So what did you want to talk about Kakashi" said Naruto confused.
Kakashi sighed and said " I was wondering what test I should do for my genin team"
"I think you should do the bell test first it will let you evaluate their personalities depending on how they react while fighting and if they figure out the meaning and act upon it then you pass them." said Naruto ,"But enough about that what's the real reason you came here Kakashi, I can read you like a book don't forget I'm one of the best ninjas around and to top it off your my friend, so come on what is it"
Kakashi giving his trademark eye smile said "Was it that obvious" he then looked at Naruto and got serious "The reason I we came here was so I could tell you that I want your help training my genin, because from what I got my team is a total mess I have a obsessed fan girl, a revenge seeking psychopath and and emotionless drone."
Thinking hard Naruto finally responded "Sorry Kakashi you know I can't do that I have to remain hidden or else, you know the rest."
Kakashi then remembered the reason he retired "I understand Naruto, have you been training though you know sooner or later it will happen will you be ready."
Naruto with determination in his eyes responded "Hai everyday." then seemingly changing his mood he said "Well Kakashi I loved the talk we had but I got to head to work, had to get a job or else people will start wondering where I get all my money."
Kakashi then said "Hai Naruto I hope you change you mind and if you do me and my team will be at training ground 7" Kakashi left as Naruto finished undoing the seals.
Naruto thinking about all that transpired had to agree to some of what Kakashi said "He's right sooner or later it will happen" Naruto said aloud.
Shaking away those thoughts Naruto headed to the business districts and more importantly his job. Naruto got a job as a handyman doing, well handyman stuff, getting hired mostly for construction.
After doing a few things he finished and headed to a bar to relieve the stress of that day.
After a few drinks he started to feel a buzz and started to notice the things around him, but what caught his eye was a woman eyeing him from a booth she was sitting alone at. She then winking and waved him over. Naruto didn't waste a second as he stood up and walked towards her. He looked at her features, her chocolate colored hair, hazel eyes, fair colored skin, he then studied her more he saw she had good body.
As he sat down he ordered drinks for them and started to talk to her.
A few rounds later and hey were in a very heavy session of making out, their tongues fighting each other for dominance. Later he was heading to her house. They both agreed it was a one time thing, Naruto had other fish to catch.
After finishing their very long session Naruto headed home to do some last minute training session before going to sleep.
Arriving home he put activated his seals not wanting to wake the neighbors he set about doing a very rigorous training plan focusing on speed, strength, and chakra control.
"Haha still got it" said Naruto after completing his training, he then set about to get ready for bed.