I would first like to say that this is an alternate reality in which things happen differently. This story starts on what would be Orochimarus semi last day before Sasuke kills him, (well not really but you know when he tries to assassinate him and then Orochimaru enters him.) In this story something different is going to happen. Sorry for my spelling and for any plot inconsistencies that I might make, again this is an alternate universe so there are differences. This is my second Fan Fic I've ever made so please if tell what things I should work on Well sorry for the long intro, let's get on with the story
Chapter 1: FEAR
Orochimaru laid in his bed thinking, trying to find an answer to his dilemma. "I know he is going to go for it any day now. He knows I am weak and I'm sure he is planning his attack. What the hell am I suppose to do?," Orochimaru thought as he lay in his bed nervous and frustrated. "To make matters worse, I've lost control of Kabuto and I know he is waiting for Sasuke to kill me off." Orochimaru was slowly coming to realize that his end was coming."I knew this would happen but I did not think that I would be this weak. Heh how ironic, I go through such a big trouble to capture the boy, train him, so that I can continue my immortality but instead I brought him to end me. How could have I done such ridicules mistake" Orochimaru thought as he straightened himself up in his bed. "Heh this is what it's come to, I'm just like a roach on the floor, just sitting there as a giant shadow engulfs it and soon brings its demise. I have become weak, not just physically but mentally, look at myself; I have spent so much time self pitying myself. I have led myself to my own destruction. Haha I remember being young and feeling so empowered for thinking I had found an answer to defying death. I guess that deaths grasp is really something no human, even the greatest ninja in existence can escape from."
This is just the opening but the next part is going to be the interesting one. I first just wanted to post this hear and see if anyone wants me to upload more. Ill uploads the next one. If at least one person is interested ill keep going.