I imagine pretty much every chapter's gonna be set up like this, so decide if you like it now or if it's kinda annoying. This is my first chap, but I think it came out well! Please review!
Disclaimer: Nobody really owns the Marauders. They're just too awesome for that.
"Snicker snicker."
"What?"
"Padfoot walks down the stairs, holding his wand up and preparing himself for-"
"Padfoot, I know you're there."
"Padfoot pauses. He's sure Moony's just bluffing. He's got to be, no way he could hear the silently deadly Pad-"
"I can sure as hell hear you!"
"Padfoot wonders who Moony is talking to."
"I'm talking to YOU, Padfoot!"
"Padfoot wonders how someone else came to get the name Padfoot as well."
"Jesus christ."
"Padfoot laughs. It's funny when Moony curses."
"I'll give you a real curse if you don't quit it."
"Padfoot thinks someone's grumpy."
"No shit."
"Sherlock."
"What?"
"No shit, Sherlock. That's what you're supposed to say."
"At least you're not narrating anymore."
"Padfoot snorts."
"Moony stands up."
"Padfoot gets annoyed at Moony for copying his totally awesome narration."
"Moony gets annoyed at Padfoot for interrupting his grumpiness."
"Padfoot doesn't like that look in Moony's eye."
"Moony thinks that Padfoot is smarter than he looks."
"Padfoot doesn't think that's possible."
"Moony begs to differ."
"Padfoot begs Moony to put the chair down."
"Moony begs Padfoot to remember the counter he taught him all of five minutes ago."
"Padfoot is surprised Moony would expect such a thing."
"Moony's sure he is."
"...Padfoot is getting very weary of that chair."
"Moony has no comment."
"WATCH IT!"
"Moony laughs evilly."
"You almost gave me a splinter!"
"Moony's disappointed."
"OW!"
"Moony's better now."
"MOONY!"
"Snicker snicker."
Hope it wasn't confusing! Reviews appreciated!