Rise of HopeClan: Chapter one: the start
Hey guys! I'm starting a new story. I just want you to know that I am not abandoning Ravenkit's Destiny (if there's anybody that actually likes it) but I might not be updating it for a while. I might try to multitask and try to do one chapter each per day but that would be complicated and with Christmas around the corner I don't think I can pull it off. So on to the story!
In the middle of the night Lunastar woke up to the sound of screams, yowls and hisses. Lunastar stood up puzzled, and her kits fell off her belly. "What's going on mama?" Snowkit asked looking up at her mother with big blue eyes. Lunastar poked her head outside the den for a split second, and then she realized the smell, the smell of Thunderclan. "Kit's I don't have time to explain! You have to leave now! When you get outside don't stop running" Lunastar meowed franticly.
"Mother!" said a voice from the entrance of the cave. There was her first litter only child, Sweetpaw. "Sweetpaw! Thank Starclan your ok!" Lunastar cried rushing to her oldest daughter. "Sweetpaw, you and Snowkit, Hollykit, and Nightkit need to get out of here!" Lunastar meowed. "How do we get out mama?" Asked Hollykit. "Use the tunnels many leaders before me made them in case of an emergency." The frightened mother said as she nudged her kits to the tunnels. "Mama, what about you?" Asked Nightkit. "I'll be waiting in Starclan for you my darlings." Lunastar said with tears in her eyes. Her kits mewled in protest. "No! Mama you can't leave us!" Snowkit cried. "Sweetpaw will take care of you, be safe my kits." Lunastar cried as they disappeared into the darkness of the tunnel.
A voice from outside the den came closer and closer. Lunastar sat there waiting for whatever horrific destiny Starclan had planned for her, if she died she would die proud. Mousestar walked in the den, the Thunderclan leader having a smirk plastered onto his face. "Your clan is dead." He yowled. Cats from outside cheered. "Go home Thunderclan only Smokecloud and Scarnose stay just in case, but I can handle it from here." Mousestar called to them. He turned back to Lunastar who had tears running down her face.
"Why are you doing this, to my clan?!" Lunastar cried. "Revenge!" Mousestar growled. "Revenge! What have we ever done?!" Lunastar spat. "Shadowclan always has the evil cats in it, we were just getting rid of all them, and we are doing a favor! To the clans. We are saving them from you monsters, you have your hearts frozen from winters in this place you call home!" Mousestar spat back. "The only cold heart around here is yours!" Lunastar retorted. (OOOHHH a reference can anyone guess what it's from?!)
Mousestar growled and slashed his claws across Lunastar's pretty tabby face. She could feel the warm blood dripping down her face. At that moment at that time, Lunastar's heart shattered and she felt heartbroken that she didn't know if she would see her kits ever again. And she knew she would never see her clan mates ever agian until she got into Starclan.
Lunastar's sadness and heart break was replaced by rage. Lunastar slid her claws out and attacked Mousestar. "You monster! You deserve to die!" Lunastar screamed as she clawed her enemy's flesh. "Oh we've got a feisty one, boys!" Mousestar smirked. The backup cats rushed in and pull Lunastar off Mousestar and held her down so Mousestar could end her life. Lunastar looked up at her enemies with a bright fire in her turquoise eyes. Before the Thunderclan cats knew what was happening she attacked them with great force, the cats loosened their grip and she saw her chance, she sprinted out of her den.
She ran, she ran pasted all the bodies of her dead clan mates, she caught a glimpse of a white pelt. No! Whitecloud! Lunastar cried. She saw all the cats she had grown up to know. All of their eyes looking up at the night sky, with a glassy look. Lunastar couldn't bear to look at the dead bodies. She closed her eyes, she thought she heard. "Let her run boys, let her run" From Mousestar and then he gave an evil cackle. Where should I go? I can't go to the clans. I'll go to the two leg place. Lunastar decided. She stopped running and started walking. She let all the details sink in. 'mama, what about you?' 'You have to go and when you get outside never stop running.' She heard her kits voices over and over until she thought that they were actually real.
"Mama!" she thought she heard Snowkit meow. "Mother!" She thought she could hear Sweetpaw say. And Lunastar imagined them with they're pelts huddled together in a tight hug around her. Lunastar opened her eyes and she saw, she wasn't imagining it, her kits were there, hugging her. "Kits! Oh my dear kits!" Lunastar cried as she hugged them. Lunastar sobbed. "What's wrong mama?" Nightkit asked. "I'm just so glad that I found you again I was afraid I would lose you!" Lunastar said wiping her tears. "Well were here now mother, and we will never leave your side again." Sweetpaw said silently vowing. Lunastar smiled as all of her kits nodded in agreement. "Mama you don't look so good…" Hollykit meowed noticing her wounds. "I-I'm f-fine…." Lunastar meowed, but right as she said that the world became black
Yay! Chapter 1 complete! I hope everyone likes it! I have this story all planned out, hopefully this story doesn't get boring and Mary sue at the end. I'll try to make it not.
Q(s) OTD:
#1. What was the reference can anyone figure it out?
#2. Did you like this chapter? Or do you think I should carry on with this story or go back to Ravenkit's destiny?
#3. What do you guys want/ think will happen next?
Here's the Allegiance. I'm only doing the cats that we know already but as we get to know more cats I'll add them to the list.
Thunderclan:
Leader: Mousestar- a light brown tom with a white chest (a little small for a leader but he's quick and deadly)
Deputy: Scarnose: a dark brown tom with more than 1 scar on his nose and over 4 scars on his body from past accidents and battles. (Large and strong tom that will do anything Mousestar orders)
Warriors:
Smokecloud- a dark gray tom with patches of light gray here and there. (average sized tom alright with battle moves but is really smart)
Riverclan:
Windclan:
Shadowclan: all deceased.
Outsiders:
Lunastar: a pretty silver tabby she cat with white paws. (Former Shadowclan leader)
Sweetpaw: A light gold tabby she cat with white underbelly (Former apprentice of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Snowkit: a white she cat with gray paws (Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Hollykit: a black she cat with white paws and chest and underbelly. (Former kit of Shadowclan) mother: Lunastar
Nightkit: a black tabby tom with grey front paws and white back paws. (Former kit of Shadowclan.) Mother: Lunastar