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"The body is missing its head" said the medical examiner to the CSI, Lieutenant Horatio Caine
"There's also a metal pole in his chest"
"H this seems like the murder came out of a horror movie" said Ryan Wolfe.
Eric Delko whispered to Ryan "You scared"
"No, it just seems weird" Ryan replied.
Walter said, "I agree with Ryan this is just messed up".
Suddenly there was a commotion at the crime scene tape
"Why won't you let me through? That's my brother!"
Horatio walked over to the tape asking" ma'am, what's the problem?" The woman looked very upset.
She was wearing a visor and was squinting as if the sun was hurting her eyes. "That's my brother lying dead right there".
"Ma'am are you sure that he's your brother?"
"Yes" she said, then she started to break down crying.
"Ma'am we know you lost someone but we need to ask you some questions." She nodded her head in compliance.
"Mr. Wolfe will you take her over to the side". Ryan and the woman went away from the crime scene so that he could ask her some questions. "
"So, what's your name miss?"
"My name is Rebecca Bane."
"So, miss bane are you sure that's your brother".
This is the second time she's been asked this question so she was getting annoyed at this point. "Of course, I'm sure, that's the t shirt that I gave him for his birthday, I made it for him" she screamed.
"Calm down I'm just doing my job, okay when was the last time you saw him?"
"Yesterday at 4 pm, he was supposed to go meet a friend, Jacob Guppy was his name."
"Okay thank you, did your brother have any enemies like pissed off girlfriends? A coworker, or anyone?"
"No, I don't think so, is that all?"
"Yeah, I think I have everything I need.
"What if the killer comes after me?"
"Don't worry we'll find the guy and if anything comes up you can ask for me, Ryan Wolfe?"
"Thank you."
Ryan went back over to Horatio." H she said he was supposed to meet a friend, a Jacob guppy."
Horatio said to Eric "Delko let's pay Guppy a visit."
Eric and Horatio pulled up to the overrun house, it looked like a hoarder lived there. Both walked up to the house and rang the doorbell, but the moment the bell rang they heard feet scramble through the house. Horatio made a gesture for Eric to go around back and Horatio went indoors with his gun raised, when he got to the back he saw a person in a baseball cap run out the back.
Main character p.o.v
I was running outside to get away from the police, just so you know I didn't do what they would consider wrong, in fact I didn't do it. This wasn't about me it was about our new comrade, he made a mistake, he let one of the suckers find out who he is, so now I need to make the police think that I'm the "bag guy". They're going to find the tools he used and pin it on him, but of course he did do it, but when "they" find him in jail "they" are going to have a party with him and not in a good way. If I take the blame instead, I can easily get out of this mess, I just need to wait for an opportunity and skip town.
So here I am getting jumped by this cop who now has a cocky smile until he saw that I'm a female.
Then he asks, "Are you Jacob guppy?" he sounded skeptical
"Yeah that's my alias".
He cuffed me then we headed to the police station, once we were there they asked me questions like why did I run and where I was last night, so I just confessed to the murder. They took my fingerprints and are now studying the weapon they found in the house.
Just when they were about to book me a female CSI said, "She didn't do it, the prints don't match".
Jacob, he lied, he told me he wore gloves.
She then said, "The DNA doesn't match either."
I was brought back to the interrogation room.
The Lieutenant asked, "Miss why did you lie?" I didn't answer
"If you don't answer we can't help you."
I knew I had to answer. "Okay I just saw the weapon covered in blood and assumed my friend was in trouble, that's why I lied."
I told them that I don't know where Jacob is, though I do know where he is but I'm not telling. They then let me go, so I went straight to the motel that I am staying at and prepared myself to skip town.
